Jason Rimbaud

Hey everyone, based on her earlier comment, I don't take direct commands or something of the like, I know how to get more chapters. You already made him a bottom, get over it. Just write the scene and be done with it. Why take on more headache, he's a bottom. You know it, I know it, and @Okiegrad hopes for it. And that was the nicest way i've ever been told to F off. I do have a ton of energy, all natural, training, I'm a clean freak that makes sure my vacuum lines in the carpet are perfectly straight and match throughout the entire house. You're loss.

The way it was written fit the characters. And you are right, the best way to enjoy sex is too let go. Even if you like kinks, you still have to give up control to fully embrace what you are doing. Don't start this shit again. You said you...fuck me. I'll go along for the ride. But seriously, stop toying with my emotions. It's like a roller coaster that only goes up. I offered to be your pet, without any kinks or weirdness. Just a regular bald dude hanging out with the other animals. How much more could I offer? Was it the shoelace thing? One lace to far type of vibe. I get it.

I got opinions on this one. Which character do I need to have a stern talking too. I don't know where your bed is that you put your boots under, but I'll come over and give a twenty minute dissertation to whom ever I need.

Since you asked nicely. @Okiegrad is Javin, and @Jason Rimbaud is Joel. And somehow it was decided that we'd act out whichever sex that was described. He got confused, because he doesn't owe me a BJ, I...well that didn't end up in my favor at all. I think I'm supposed to be Javin and He's supposed to be Joel. That's it. Anyway, now you know and knowing is half of the battle.

“I don’t know what it’s going to be like.” Don't worry Joel, you're going to love it and then explode all over the glass like a twelve year old. I pity their house cleaners after that. “Could we be more obvious?” Calm down Joel, it's only a finger, then a tongue. At least Javin washed it first. I guess that's why you kissed him. “You can go up to my room, I need to unlock the garage for the delivery guy, I can't believe you made Joel the bottom. Didn't you read what @Okiegrad decreed in the last chapter. We have to act out the sex, He's Javin and I'm Joel. Did he pay you? What a bunch of awkward silliness you wrote. Who leaves their undies on in the shower? The boys from Weird Science and apparently Joel and Javin. I didn't say it was bad, I've done it, but damn. I know I'm jumping around but it's my comment and I can do what I want. Javin strips him, gets him hard, and then runs to get pizza. I know you've written the twins that food is nearly everything, but he had a cock right there to munch on. Or wrap a slice around his down there part and go to town. What a way to pull Joel from his thoughts. Hystercial. The entire scene in the shower, awkward, fumbling around, fingering, and When Javin asked Can I fuck you? I nearly lost it. Damn boy, just go right for it. And it was sweet, very sexy in a first time way, and not absurd. I loved to see Javin's personality come out. In your aversion to writing spicy scenes, you included character and personality that fits your story and still gave me wet boys in boxers. By the way, if you ever read Tyler's Dilemma, just know I did a shower scene first. The first in the history of gay fiction by the way. And finally, we discussed things, Joel would bottom for Colt, but top for Javin. We agreed, we shook hands, pinky swear and did a blood sacrifice with red vines. I'm very disappointed yet thrilled by this chapter.

why did it happen when I clicked the link it brought me here incorrigible I'm confused now.

I'm sorry in advance for this comment. Kiss ass! No one likes a teachers pet. Full disclosure, I already wished her a Merry Christmas earlier today, so I'm the biggest kiss ass. And I wish i could be her pet. And yes, I know how that sounds and I don't care. So everyone please wish fabulous Krista a Merry Christmas and thank her for giving us filthy presents. I'm assuming, I haven't read it yet, but I'm assuming based on her comment. and @Okiegrad ruining our first time by telling me what he's already planning on doing.

First. It must be Monday.

Um, I'd try not too if you were ever dumb enough to be in the same place as me. But I swear more than I should. I even got my husband, who rarely swore before me, now sometimes he makes me go, slow down, no need for that kind of language. He greets me every morning by calling me fuck face, I call him boo bear. We're perfect for each other. I've never been kicked in the down there place, but I think there were a few times I should have been. Christine, one of my best friends, punches me a lot. Like hard, really hard. She's been doing that for almost thirty years, so I'm thinking it won't end anytime soon. So take that as a warning, that I'm not bright enough to learn my lesson. By the way, I wasn't joking when I said I asked Myr for a trolling Krista mood. I really wanted it, I'm actually kind of sad.

I can't wait until my new glasses come in with bifocals. I so did not read feckless right/write. Then I read the definition and thought someone lost their mind for a moment. Feckless: Jason commented fecklessly in fabulous Krista's comments.

No lie, in my head they were Italian as well, maybe Greek, I pictured them olive skinned, bigger noses, dark hair, angular features. The picture I had for Colt was slimmer as well, I've seen many a country boys naked and they are rarely muscular, manual work keeps people lean, defined, but lean. He looks to much like Zac from saved by the bell for me. Okay, if you say so. But I am thoroughly enjoying it. PS: I asked Myr if he would make a custom mood for me, "trolling Krista", he refused. Said he was scared of you and hinted that you'd kick him in the balls. And I thought I had a reputation, but you don't scare me, usually. I bet you are truly a teddy bear in real life, but more like Ted, foul mouthed and smoking a cigar. . I also asked for another custom mood, "fabulous". Then my life would be complete. I'd hack into your profile and change your mood. I'd figure out a way to do it. I couldn't figure out how to make the font bigger, but I'd find a way.

That made my horrible hungover day better. I did forget to add thank you and the entire team for what you managed to accomplish over the last twenty-something years. I think I've been a member for almost twenty years. I have never said it, but I truly respect you and your vision, Merry Happy Christmas Holidays to you and those you include in your life.

Finally I have some time to myself. Yesterday was the last big catering order, so I can focus on the fabulous Krista. I saw the cast @Okiegrad created and I must say, I no longer have any inclination of entertaining Jolt ever again. Colt is blech. To straight looking for such a gay character. The twins, meh, but Joel, he's kind of cute. It seems that Joel needed to feel like shit to actually be somewhat normal. I rather enjoyed the bonding they had, and when Colt said, you and lacey take care of the farm, spoke volumes how he is already considering Joel part of his family. The horse riding scene, meh. Written wonderfully as everything you write/right, but it was boring. There is only one thing i want to read about Joel riding, and it's not a horse. And trace's wife once again proves my working theory that she's a psychopath. First time I came home drunk, my mother looked at me and accused, "You're drunk." And I replied no, and then puked all over the floor. She hit me. That's a real mom. Overall the sneak look into a more comfortable Joel was wonderful. I'm not really happy that the story feels like it's winding down, I've really come to look forward to a new chatper every week. One of the few stories written in first that has really grabbed my attention.

Since it's probably an already built package, the mood and all the different ones. I'd love to have some more custom moods, a bit more playful, I'd love to have one mood "fabulous" I'd never change it. The closest I could find to myself is smirking, but that doesn't always fit. "trolling Krista" would be another good mood. I like the moods, it's silly, playful, and so small on my old eyes I can't see them anyway.

God I hate to admit it, but that's a really good idea. I suck at writing those things. Damn AI wins again. But i will beat you, maybe. one day. Myr is not AI ( I don't think ) I meant beat AI. I have a chance at beating AI, but not a wizard. I'm not that dumb.

I agree with this statement. I had a few things on another site but I have since left for reasons that aren't important. Now, I only post here, such as that goes. I only have five stories on here in a span of twenty years. So I'm slow, and consistent, fair to middling content, annoying comments, but I'm exclusively GA's problem now.

I can't believe it either. Number four, pish posh. It should've been number #1. Who is this littlebudda person think they are? .

I had been using all the swears about a year ago and MYR did the same thing for me, he also showed me how to make the screen black, that helped with my eyes as well. It's so strange how I see buttons and never have the curiosity to see what they do. I have two buttons on my car I've never pushed and have no idea what they do if they do anything.

So this might be way off base, and might already be in place but I failed to notice. I see ads for GA author's stories all the time. Mostly from signature authors or promising authors. Normally these ads are for older stories written by established writers who either no longer write or have already readership following. I'd love to see more of a showcase for those newer authors who have more than ten stories but aren't yet that well known to many of our readers who stay in the story section and never visit the forums. I was happy to see Jack Poignant get a recent shout out but I feel these newer authors shoutouts are few and far between. And if there is a place that this is happening, I apologize in advance as I haven't seen that.

I believe I only post on Monday's. So real Monday?

And that was for you who thought Percy is a bottom. We shall see who the true bottom is....it's Joel!

You would think Percy and Five would be smarter. But their actions in bed, thoughts in head, and words from mouth don't seem to match up. I wonder what is going to happen when all this comes boiling to the surface. In the early stages of planning, Bethany was also a MC and I followed her perspective back in Glacier Bay. But as I was concerned with time, I dropped that idea and included her during phone calls. But we don't really get much of her viewpoint on purpose. The character of Five, I've had to walk a fine line. I threw the I don't lie, I suck at lying, right front and center. So he hasn't lied to anyone per se. Though like you said, he is wishing/hoping/praying/deceiving himself. In the next few chapters, that is the underline theme from both boy's as they analysize their feelings. As for withholding certain things from Bethany, a few chapters earlier, Bethany says he can share as much or as little as he wants in regards to his activities with Five. So technically, he is still under the original "plan" they devised. But yes, Five is not being honest with himself at the moment. As for the rest, the next two chapters deal with this topic so to avoid spoilers, I'll just say, maybe you are right/write, maybe you aren't. I don't think I'll be able to post a new chapter today as planned, my schedule for the next two days is really full. I'm closing the restaurant 24th and 25th, the hubby and I are taking some time away. But I hope to post a new chapter sometime this week. And then we'll get back to posting every Monday again. I am not fixing the spelling mistake, I saw it, but as the fabulous one once said, I don't do backspaces. Plus it fits really well. I might start spellng it like that all the time.

Wow, we actually get a peek of you without the bravado and jokes. It takes guts to write from a vulnerable place. It doesn't matter if we don't know your name, the one you say is the real you, or that other that lives a life in the mirror. Because honesty always comes through, even the lies we have to tell the world. Your pain is visceral, the feeling of a life half lived in stolen moments of regrets. This really moved me. Not because i can relate to your story. My journey was different. The emotion is universal, the ability to show, even for a moment, the realness between the Lee and the Wilson, If I could it would be given multiple thumbs up. No jokes, no innuendo, just appreciation for words conveyed on a screen.

I"m not sure what they need, but they need something. It's getting messy.

Threesomes are so last year. Too much work, and the cleanup afterwards results into a lot of laundry. I don't have time for that.