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Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Kind of makes you want to bend over? haahahah -
Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
In Stanford, he mentions feeling like a dildo because everyone liked his dick more than they cared about him. -
Oh Mr. Dog. In this chapter I am reformed and better because of the fabulous one. In my story, I am still the hot mess I always was. And thanks for mentioning my silly story. I'm working on the new chapter now if I'm going to make the Monday deadline.
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That's a good point. But if Lee's theory is correct, there are no parents anyway.
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There are many times she has gone years without speaking to me. It was the worst years of my life. That is a great question. I once read a story that in the first eight chapters, three people were sent to the hospital at three different times. One could fall into the trap of using the same devices over and over again. It is something great writers pull off and bad ones fall into the trap. I don't remember which story, but a Harry Potter fanfic depicted the ending of nearly every chapter with Harry unconscious for some reason or another. Each chapter began with him in the hospital recovering from something or another. It was so repetitive I continued on with the story to see if I could deduce the method the author would use next to have him be unconscious. That would have happened if I was there. Be in a house filled with nosy people or sleep in an empty house where we can fool around whenever we want. Yep, that's an easy answer.
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There is a theory, someone more intelligent than I, posed that the twins actually murdered their parents, and are pretending they are just away. We'll have to ask the fabulous one if that is correct.
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Won't you supposed to send some thing over for me to read?
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The old me would say something off topic and probably off color here. I'd mention something like doing it to yourself is naughty and you should wait until you have married your dance partner. But lo I have learned the error of my ways. I was a bad person, one of the worst in the comments of the Fabulous Krista, I can no longer be the person I was, I am reborn into a new creature. A respectful creature that if you'd only allow a few minutes of your time, so I could share with you the wonders that is Krista. She has changed me, no longer am I perverted and only thinking of Colt's wet ass. No, I am fully on track with Javin and if you could only see the love they bring, you too, could be a changed person.
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Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
I'm pretty sure, not certain, as I haven't spent as much time with this story as previous ones, but I think I have already discussed Percy's experiences at Stanford in the narrative. Or maybe that's coming up. I really don't remember. I might have read each chapter like five times before I posted. This story is a mess. But I do know certain things are discussed in later chapters, cause I just wrote them. So wait and see? Or I can give you the link and you can read ahead. . I've been known to do that as well. -
Sadly my son, you will have to achieve that goal without me. I will only stay on topic, I won't write any more fantasies, I won't troll the fabulous one you humans call Krista. I will not be a party of lowering myself to that bad person I was on Thursday. I am better. Bless you all.
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I have studied my past behavior and decided to walk a different path. An enlightened path that will lead me to my paradise. When Javin get the happy ending they deserved. Long may Javin reign!
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Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
If Percy isn't willing to do said action, Five will have to concede. I wouldn't put it past Percy to do juat that. -
Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Oh my……can’t wait to see how you work that in! Me neither. -
I am so saddened that you forgot that conversation. But I do have broad shoulders and will carry on. I will always stay on topic for the rest of this chapter. Your welcome.
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I do apologize for my previous actions. I have grown a lot since Thursday night. I am now firmly in the corner for Javin. Thank you for that.
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You and I have already decided. If Joel was with Colt, he would be the top. Now that he's with Davin, Joel is the bottom. And apparently with Jax. What I don't see anyone discussing, is the hand holding everyone seems to be doing. So hot.
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Never saw a party's "epic" rating dependent on how many BJs were given. Then perhaps you have been attending the wrong kind of parties. Like the ones in Fletcher. You do not have to say what is blatantly obvious reading the text. Joel rode him like a horse, then they held hands. Sometimes you bully me. It's deserved... I didn't throw it away. I just focused on the story and would not let myself get sidetracked by shiny, dripping, things. I'm on my best behavior in this chapter.
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Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
*raises hand* I did have the idea, in the earliest stages, to keep the gay chicken going for the entire story. To keep it in the same vein as the first story, no sex at all. But then I threw that idea out. Like in Tyler's Dilemma, when I explored the theme of watersports, I decided to explore another kink I didn't have any real experience with. Oh, well that kink comes into play later, but anyway. -
Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
According to Michael Douglas, greed is good. I'm gonna read ahead and see what happens. Wait right/write here and I'll get back to you. -
Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Methinks Percy is the biggest bottom in all of Glacier Bay. And would Five, a dominant jock, let someone bend him over the bed as it were. I don't know. -
Not even if you squint.
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I'll Never Wear Boxers Again
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in I'll Never Wear Boxers Again
During the wedding, when it really sunk in that we could never be together. I knew, maybe by instinct, that if I would have stayed around there, we would have ended up in bed again. It's what always happened with us. Neither one of us could help it. And my heart had been broken. My first true love. So after the wedding, I think it was only a few weeks before I fled. We've spoken on and off a few times but our friendship lasted ten years and it's been twenty since I last saw him. For my own mental health I severed all ties. -
Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
If you want the full story, Go to my stories page, in the stories, articles, prompts collection, I think it's the first chapter called I'll Never Wear Boxers Again. It's not very long, maybe six to eight pages, but it lays out what happened. . That was a shameless plug. -
Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
I think Five tipped the scale, it's not a game, but he's still going to play to win. Let's see how things shake out when they meet Seb and Robert?(maybe I already forgot my own characters name). And when will Ethan come back into the picture. Lot's more silliness ahead before we reach Christmas.
