Jason Rimbaud

I really agree with this statement. In two of my stories, I've been under criticism from certain people because they feel that I should have more emotion between my characters. I've always felt that when two people first meet, they flirt, there is attraction, lust, but rarely emotion at first. The emotion comes later after they actually fall in love. I enjoy the period of time before the love, before the happy ever after. The moments where they fall in love are the best, and that doesn't happen during sex the first dozen or so times. Plus I don't write/right rom com or romance stories. I write/right silly storiese with absurd premises to make my husband laugh.

Brandon has a lot of bad habits, alcohol isn’t even the worst of it.

I am a tad bit obsessed with undies I'll have you know. I have been known to change up to five times a day. I have morning underwear, afternoon, dinner, going out, slutty, and when I want to feel sexy. I change underwear a lot. Between me and the husband, I do seven loads of laundry a week.

Not to mention a bad lay. Joel, you better wait for Davin, he is your future, Jax is temporary at best. See what I did there. Dirty and on topic. Booya

Seriously, I never said any such thing. That's @Jeff Burton and @Okiegrad I said they made up.

What would two good ole boys from Montana be slumming in Glacier Bay? As for the rest, Gavin and Colt, we could always have then chained up so they have to watch. But I'm not sure I can have a party cooler than Fletcher's parties. Though if we factor in blowjobs....you might be on to something here. I need to write that story before Percy loses his arm in that tragic accident and Five gets disfigured from an exploding goat though.

If it takes too long, I'm sure someone, not mentioning any names, could probably entertain you in the interim with another episode of Learned To Lie, the alternate universe edition. Sometimes it sucks being the high priest in the Cult of Krista. I have such a good idea but I think I'll save it for the next chapter. I did say i would behave in this one.

Kind of makes you want to bend over? haahahah

In Stanford, he mentions feeling like a dildo because everyone liked his dick more than they cared about him.

Oh Mr. Dog. In this chapter I am reformed and better because of the fabulous one. In my story, I am still the hot mess I always was. And thanks for mentioning my silly story. I'm working on the new chapter now if I'm going to make the Monday deadline.

That's a good point. But if Lee's theory is correct, there are no parents anyway.

There are many times she has gone years without speaking to me. It was the worst years of my life. That is a great question. I once read a story that in the first eight chapters, three people were sent to the hospital at three different times. One could fall into the trap of using the same devices over and over again. It is something great writers pull off and bad ones fall into the trap. I don't remember which story, but a Harry Potter fanfic depicted the ending of nearly every chapter with Harry unconscious for some reason or another. Each chapter began with him in the hospital recovering from something or another. It was so repetitive I continued on with the story to see if I could deduce the method the author would use next to have him be unconscious. That would have happened if I was there. Be in a house filled with nosy people or sleep in an empty house where we can fool around whenever we want. Yep, that's an easy answer.

You're welcome

There is a theory, someone more intelligent than I, posed that the twins actually murdered their parents, and are pretending they are just away. We'll have to ask the fabulous one if that is correct.

Won't you supposed to send some thing over for me to read?

The old me would say something off topic and probably off color here. I'd mention something like doing it to yourself is naughty and you should wait until you have married your dance partner. But lo I have learned the error of my ways. I was a bad person, one of the worst in the comments of the Fabulous Krista, I can no longer be the person I was, I am reborn into a new creature. A respectful creature that if you'd only allow a few minutes of your time, so I could share with you the wonders that is Krista. She has changed me, no longer am I perverted and only thinking of Colt's wet ass. No, I am fully on track with Javin and if you could only see the love they bring, you too, could be a changed person.

I'm pretty sure, not certain, as I haven't spent as much time with this story as previous ones, but I think I have already discussed Percy's experiences at Stanford in the narrative. Or maybe that's coming up. I really don't remember. I might have read each chapter like five times before I posted. This story is a mess. But I do know certain things are discussed in later chapters, cause I just wrote them. So wait and see? Or I can give you the link and you can read ahead. . I've been known to do that as well.

Sadly my son, you will have to achieve that goal without me. I will only stay on topic, I won't write any more fantasies, I won't troll the fabulous one you humans call Krista. I will not be a party of lowering myself to that bad person I was on Thursday. I am better. Bless you all.

I have studied my past behavior and decided to walk a different path. An enlightened path that will lead me to my paradise. When Javin get the happy ending they deserved. Long may Javin reign!

If Percy isn't willing to do said action, Five will have to concede. I wouldn't put it past Percy to do juat that.

Oh my……can’t wait to see how you work that in! Me neither.

I am so saddened that you forgot that conversation. But I do have broad shoulders and will carry on. I will always stay on topic for the rest of this chapter. Your welcome.

I do apologize for my previous actions. I have grown a lot since Thursday night. I am now firmly in the corner for Javin. Thank you for that.

You and I have already decided. If Joel was with Colt, he would be the top. Now that he's with Davin, Joel is the bottom. And apparently with Jax. What I don't see anyone discussing, is the hand holding everyone seems to be doing. So hot.

Never saw a party's "epic" rating dependent on how many BJs were given. Then perhaps you have been attending the wrong kind of parties. Like the ones in Fletcher. You do not have to say what is blatantly obvious reading the text. Joel rode him like a horse, then they held hands. Sometimes you bully me. It's deserved... I didn't throw it away. I just focused on the story and would not let myself get sidetracked by shiny, dripping, things. I'm on my best behavior in this chapter.