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Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
*raises hand* I did have the idea, in the earliest stages, to keep the gay chicken going for the entire story. To keep it in the same vein as the first story, no sex at all. But then I threw that idea out. Like in Tyler's Dilemma, when I explored the theme of watersports, I decided to explore another kink I didn't have any real experience with. Oh, well that kink comes into play later, but anyway. -
Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
According to Michael Douglas, greed is good. I'm gonna read ahead and see what happens. Wait right/write here and I'll get back to you. -
Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Methinks Percy is the biggest bottom in all of Glacier Bay. And would Five, a dominant jock, let someone bend him over the bed as it were. I don't know. -
Not even if you squint.
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I'll Never Wear Boxers Again
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in I'll Never Wear Boxers Again
During the wedding, when it really sunk in that we could never be together. I knew, maybe by instinct, that if I would have stayed around there, we would have ended up in bed again. It's what always happened with us. Neither one of us could help it. And my heart had been broken. My first true love. So after the wedding, I think it was only a few weeks before I fled. We've spoken on and off a few times but our friendship lasted ten years and it's been twenty since I last saw him. For my own mental health I severed all ties. -
Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
If you want the full story, Go to my stories page, in the stories, articles, prompts collection, I think it's the first chapter called I'll Never Wear Boxers Again. It's not very long, maybe six to eight pages, but it lays out what happened. . That was a shameless plug. -
Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
I think Five tipped the scale, it's not a game, but he's still going to play to win. Let's see how things shake out when they meet Seb and Robert?(maybe I already forgot my own characters name). And when will Ethan come back into the picture. Lot's more silliness ahead before we reach Christmas. -
Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
That's an amazing story. I think many of us have stories in the same vein. Some end worse than others. My own version, I was also the best man in his wedding. But I was crushed for most of my thirties and moved all the way to San Francisco to escape him. -
Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
The end of a game and the beginning of a new one. . -
If I hadn't promised Krista that I would only stay on topic in this chapter, I would so have words to say to your Mr. Dog. But I don't, so I'm going to not say anything.
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Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
I know I'm quoting myself, but this tickles me so much that no one seems to know this reference. -
Frosted Hearts: The Gay Chicken
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Gay Chicken
Straight boys, hard to play gay chicken with gay boys, we'd end up just having sex. That happened a few times as well. -
That was not my intent. We must embrace Javin. I am team Javin.
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Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
I think you are going to hate the direction this story is heading towards. This is not a RomCom or a romance story. This is a silly Christmas story with two people playing a competitive game of gay chicken. So even the premise is silly. And though I will say emotions come into play further along in the story, ultimately that is not what this story is about. This is about absurd situations, hopefully amusing dialogue, fucked up characters who may or may not encounter a Christmas miracle. And just for fun, I threw in a bunch of absurd sex that gets even weirder with two characters who may or may not be reliable narrators. And have a habit of telling the reader one thing and then doing the exact opposite. I'm a silly author who writes silly stories. So if that sounds for you, the ride gets stranger. My christmas stories are absurd by design. It's my way to experiment. So you might actually not enjoy this story. -
Firstly, you misspelled self loathing hypocrisy. I have had my share of bullies in my past. But I was never the target from the same person multiple times. Usually because I'd just fight back and most bullies moved on to other targets. But I've never understood the motivations of someone like Jax. The constant targeting, pushing every day, with their idiot friends laughin the background. Very pathetic. But Joel fighting back is the right thing. Though he should've thrown fists instead of riding the boys dick. What a bottom. And I disagree, if Jax suddenly becomes gay, that would be disappointing. I do like the fact we don't know why Jax is such an idiot. But then he's a jock, and that's par for the course. Besides, we don't need any more gay people in this story. The two we have don't behave like any gay boys I ever met. Let's not get distracted with other boys no matter how much I'd like to see Roy hook up with someone, maybe a threesome with Javin at the next lame Fletcher party.
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Percy squirted the lotion all over Five’s back. Then he started to rub it in. He made sure to coat the skin evenly. When he finished with the back, he squeezed out one long line down the back of each leg. “That’s cold,” Five murmured as he shivered from the sudden chill. Percy started at the ankles and worked his way up. The closer he got to Five’s butt, the hotter the skin seemed. He stopped right at the bottom of Five’s cheeks. Then he used both hands to work the lotion into the ri
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So I called it, Jax and Joel made up, just like I predicted. Fletcher parties can now be officially declared as crappy. Three parties, and zero blowjobs. Joel's declaration that Jax can't beat him was telling. Shows a mindset of determination with a mix of self sabotage. A behavior I can relate, I never knew when to fit into status quo and I never liked bullies. Plus I actually love confrontations. Colt's butt, who cares, the real story is Davin and his overly concerned nature. Though to be fair, all he wanted to do was have some alone with Joel. Though he seems to be a follower, and before Krista tries to explain the reasons why, it's because he's not a forceful person. For years he was in the shadow of Colt, hanging around, hoping for some love that dare not speak its name. It's his nature. He is hiding from his parents, hiding his sexuality, and that makes him careful. As it was said, get out of your own head. Joel was unlikable for the first time. Like drenched in self pity and self loathing. The boy should not drink. If Davin was smart, he'd go back chasing Colt. Though if Colt's behavior tonight was any indication of how he behaved around Davin, no wonder the boy stuck around drooling all these years. How you've written Colt this entire story, he would not have covered up his bits. He would have dared Joel to look. Fun chapter and we even got it early. So thanks fabulous Krista.
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Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
That was a Friends reference, After that comment, never mind. I had dirty thoughts for a moment -
Frosted Hearts: The Gay Chicken
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Gay Chicken
Sometimes Percy comes up with something witty. -
Frosted Hearts: The Pool
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Pool
I think the only people still pretending are P & F. . Everyone else knows what the deal is. Call to Tyler's Dilemma. -
Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Hello, how you doing? -
Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
20 characters then. I can’t even sign my name anymore. It’s too long. -
I’m boycotting commenting on this chapter until I read it. not a peep more until I do.
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Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
And the straps and butons of overalls. It's all very slow and cumbersome.
