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Hi Page! Love the story about Max. He sure is growing fast! It seems like he may be ahead of his mates, but for Morgan's and your sakes I hope he puts off puberty for a long while.
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Sawasdee Khrup Dugh! 🙏 I see in the news about all that smoke on the east coast. Alberts pictures make me glad I'm here. At least this smokey season we didn't have anything near as awful! How's mom? I have seen you reading some of the same stories as me. What are you up to now as far as the faire is concerned?
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Just finished and truly love this story. I only regret I have but one review to give.
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Hi Dugh! We've been missing you. As always you are so diplomatic. 🔼 I would have added a word or two! 🤔
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Yep! It sure is heaven on earth. I fell in love with the place a long time ago. Some might nice people there besides Virgil's uncle. I know Virgil and Wyatt will find like minded people there and make great friends. Speaking of great friends, my friend. It's not nice to tease unless those characters have nagged you enough to start writing about them again. Just saying. It sure would be nice if Virgil keeps his promise to Wyatt.
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I've never understood people like Lucas. He is evil and disgusting. The mystery is why he turned out the way he did. I am glad the other men in the saloon realized the truth in Wyatt's talk, and listened to Virgil's questions. Hopefully the whole incident will convince Wyatt that staying in town is like signing his own death sentence. I really love this short tale. It has great potential.
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Virgil sees a lot of good things about Wyatt. I don't just mean that the two are like spirits with a great attraction to each other. Wyatt is resourceful, brave and has a well tuned sense for survival. He also is a loving man and proud of his parents and heritage. Even if Wyatt hasn't a lot of hope, he is still doing his best to escape from this hate filled town. Virgil wants to help him, and will probably do his best to get Wyatt to leave town with Virgil.
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I do enjoy seeing Virgil and Wyatt. Don't like the town much, but Murray is a good man. War is an evil thing that spawns more evil even after it ends. The war with Mexico was shameful. It was a grab for land and power by American settlers who betrayed the Mexican invitation to settle in Mexico. It sounds like Wyatt's parents were part of that history, and must have loved each other very much.
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Back for my second read of this great short story! This time I'll see if I can find out more about a certain doctor that now works in Larkspur.
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Chapter 16 Roped and Tied
raven1 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 16 Roped and Tied
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Binging a bit, @Mancunian?
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Great comment, but Libby loves to tease the reader with lots of clues, but slow reveals. She does a great job in her stories to keep readers intrigued.
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I think you'll like this story very much. It is filled with action, danger and a very twisted plot. I had to binge on this. I just couldn't stop myself.
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All the young teens have grown a lot and are now in good places. Dani and Giaco are where they should be...together. It's been a long time coming to this point for them. Marco too now is showing great growth and potential. I like that you have created one new character in Cosmos who has potential for the future. He will do well living with Luca's new parents. I am glad the Valentina Forza is not like the corrupt head of police she replaced. Enzo is developing as a very intriguing defender of Ravello. I love this arc that has developed over several books in the series.
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Ravello is a beautiful village in summer. Overlooking the Amalfi Coast and filled with many wonderful gardens and homes, it is a great place to grow up. A young group of teens look forward to a summer break from school with anticipation. Their summer is filled with growing pains, discoveries and a dangerous mystery. This wouldn't be their first time together, but it is an important time in their relationships as they develop the love and trust while facing their challenges. This is another delightful story in the Ravello series and well worth your time to read.
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The Palace and the Parlor Tricks
raven1 commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in The Palace and the Parlor Tricks
A great chapter. I enjoyed how the NALC team put the emperor in his place. I kind of wanted to Empress and her sisters to remain in the void. I thing they may have a way to communicate with the evil force. That being may know about the Wights and Rodney. The overall show impressed a lot of the bystanders, but drove the insane Emperor to greater heights of madness. It will be interesting to see what happens in the morning. I like @chris191070' idea of Tau and his mate taking refuge, but another idea is that he might make a better Emperor. -
Good cliffhanger James! I was all ready to comment on Giaco and Dani finally getting back together. Giaco trying to help Cosmos is wonderful and Dani and Giaco talking about it shows the trust they have in each other is back in full force. Then....you had to go off racing over the cliff. I saw some speculation about Marco and Cosmos. It might be good material for a new story. They do have a lot in common even if their background is different, a lot of the parental issues are very much the same. Now to wait out the clock! Fortunately for me, that is only two hours more to go.
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I am currently following @CLJobe' latest story, Arrow, and enjoy it very much. Your questions Aaron are very good, and CLJobe's answers give me greater appreciation of him as an author and a good person. Thank you both!
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That's a surprise. Especially since the display below the belt line is impressive! You are either in an extremely generous mood, or taking something illegal!
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That's because Dugh knows Clo will fight Drew off tooth and nails.
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OMG! Drew told the truth. He doesn't want his men soft, especially when he bottoms from the top.
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That's what I keep telling Spikey!
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I'm thinking more like the Prime Time, Silver Fox, or Recycled Teen Gang. Or maybe Aged to Perfection Gang.
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Thanks for the thought Man. I appreciate your support. I think Drew may have a problem with the first one. He's got that tough, scruffy Nordic look Valkyrie loves.
