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    Chapter 4 Lawman

    raven1 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 4 Lawman

    Sheriff Willard is one sharp man. He is observant both of objects and happenings, but more so of people. I like that he is both fair and not judgmental. He also is very honest as he proved by letting Boone and Coy know about the reward for the gun and information, then making sure they would return to collect it. He also made sure Wes and Lee's gold was given to Boone and Coy. He may be a tough man, but has not an ounce of corruption in him. It never ceases to amaze me by how much we learn about a character from just the conversations you write Gary! The same holds true of the way your writing makes me feel like I'm sitting there in the dusty jail beside Boone and Coy.
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    Hi Man, That sounds like a great beginning to the day.
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    Hi Clo! Sounds like a great meal. A good sleep is alway nice. I didn't get one last night, because I had some crazy dreams that weren't nightmares, just extremely weird. I love breakfast in the outdoors, or at least on my balcony. Sorry to hear about the allergies. I had them bad in the USA, but not so much here in Thailand. Have a great day!
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    I agree 100%! It would be so much like Laura's ironic humor to title this "Chasing Rusty Parker" and ending it by Rusty chasing Slicky/Matty.
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    I can picture that! Especially as they are ripping off each other's costumes.
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    Well Laura seems to have granted my wish for a quick reveal by Rusty before things got sticky between him and Matty. (pun intended) It's like we're in a funny house, with all those strange mirrors, in this chapter. August and Rusty's conversation was strangely mirrored in Zoey and Matty's conversation. Of course Zoey and August as the female BFs of the boys also make an interesting situation. I don't know why Rusty doesn't drop the hetero idea and just accept he is Mattysexual. Since he isn't revealing he is Rybalt, I am anxiously awaiting that reveal. Does anyone think that Matty will reveal his Slicky Coolplums when Rusty reveals his Rybalt?
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    Great get together with August and Rusty. She definitely knows him well, and doesn't believe his BS about Matty. I do wonder about Rusty going to her apartment. I love that the SHITs are feeling the pain of defeat. John, Connor and company were thwarted by the partying students, not Rusty. It is a great tribute to Rusty's voice that he stopped the whole mess before anyone got hurt. The gossip rag strikes again. The news will probably drive Matty crazy with worry. I hope Rusty sees the XPRESS blurb and acts quickly to assure Matty. I know, wishful thinking on my part. Laura is just using the XPRESS as usual to announce the beginning of the next round of mayhem and madness about to explode.
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    Hi All! Did anyone get any sleep? You all were very busy.
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    Tall enough that Drew would need climbing equipment to get to the top.
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    What is the KBL? Korean basketball or baseball league?
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    Good Night All!
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    So say you, but now you have made it our business. Also, some of us are familiar with these guys. I so love Chen! I'm willing to bet you'll say you already claimed him. I have been watch EXO for almost 10 years, does that mean I get him? Keep writing that list. The past cannot be reclaimed. Focus on the future.
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    But do you have written proof you filed a claim on him? Reading histories don't allow you to make a written claim.
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    Say Hi to Steve for me, and keep the flowers coming!
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    Hi Albert! Welcome to Friday Night at the Fights. Our two excellent fighters are the long time rivals, Drewster and Spikey! I have to get ready for my usual Friday night out with Aod and friends, so could you take over the job of referee? ❤️ By the way, I'm finished chapter 3 of Sidewinder tonight!
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    Short and hairy ho..has spoken. Even Yayo disagrees with you.
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    Just trying my best to protect young'uns like yourself that lack experience in real life, little one.
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    It's so typical of someone your age to ignore things like this. It's kind of like the patents stolen by some famous inventors. Ever hear the stories about Edison?
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    Chapter 6

    raven1 commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 6

    The kiss was great, but I did wonder why Blake had a sudden change of mood. At least Amber was able to explain that, but now I'm worried about Blake. It's a good thing I'm nowhere near Ron's pen and not a great storyteller like he is. I would have written a flaming, raging rant at Stacy and her feckless friend Maggie at the breakfast table when they were so hateful bashing Roni. My rant would have definitely gone way beyond the GA rules. One thing I didn't understand is how Seth is still considering Craig as anything less than a monster.
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    Chapter 5

    raven1 commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 5

    I liked the way Seth and Blake reacted to each other. They do make an adorable couple. Craig seeing Seth and Blake leaving together gave me a chill. Craig seems to think Seth is a possession. I hope when Seth gets home he has a lock on his door and remembers to use it before Craig takes Stacy back. I think both Craig and Stacy want to hurt Seth if for different reasons.
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    What you watch is no support for what you claim. You have to have stated you claim in writing.
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    TMI Who cares which position you are in when you........
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    Hey Spike, I'd get writing down all the Korean, Chinese, Gary's guys and Japanese guys you want in your herd. If Drew wants to challenge your list he'll have to prove he wrote them down before.
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    Either your too lazy, or have so many in your herd you have forgotten them all. Sounds ripe for Spike to lay claim on any he wants. You can't respond by saying "He's already mine." because you don't have any proof you claimed one of them before.
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    A sweet and fun romance between an older vampire and a spoiled young man stranded on an island together. With the huge generational difference and food sources needed by both, it is a very rocky road to romance fill with snarky exchanges, guilt, and more than a few bites. It is not long, but very easy to read. Looking forward to more stories from this new author to GA.
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