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Good Morning Spike!

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This time reading again, I picked up more of those many little hints. I still loved and enjoyed reading this chapter once again. ❤️

I haven't caught up yet, but I am making headway today. Right now I'm starting Chpt. 18. Glad to see you having a good time. I knew you would like this story, and you've reached the halfway point quickly. I'm also enjoying going back and picking up a lot of the subtle details that I missed the first and second reading of this tale. This has me thinking I need to read two other books of Gary's that I love a lot. Sidewinder and Larkspur. Have fun!

🤔 He's probably bored again. Although, since no one has been picking on him, he might be doing it to get attention.

I hope these to get bored of sleeping in the bed all the time and find something else to do there. I think that Tilly truly recognizes what is happening with the guys, and does want to have the same happiness she sees in them. Tobyn will take more time. He does recognize that Tilly is right. However, he needs more time to figure out how to rebuild a future much different than he had planned with Tilly.

The nuances in Kellar and Tobyn's words when talking are definitely more noticeable this time around. I can appreciate the way you have carefully and naturally crafted to words which convey greater depth of feelings these two are experiencing.

As you know now, it took a second reading of Endings to appreciate and change my first reaction around 180 degrees. I also am amazed at how many comments I made when I first started to read your stories. I think I need to go back and read Sidewinder and Larkspur again. Boundaries as well.

I may have let up on the relentless hinting for more Sidewinder/Larkspur stories, but I have to say every cliffhanger since then always gets compared in my mind to what happened in those rapids.

I have to admit that I was surprised by @Dan South' comment. The shift in the POV was smooth and natural to the point that I didn't even notice it. Tobyn is so entrenched in his responsibility to the pack, that although he seems to realize his bond with Kellar, he still plans to keep his commitment. At some point Tobyn will reach a breaking point.

I do love Miss Sybil! Thanks for all the wonderful information in this chapter. I love how you use dialogue to reveal this. It is so much more interesting to absorb the information from a dialogue than a narrative.

While looking forward to the trip, I had to laugh at my first comment on this chapter. The trip will bring some big surprises, but not the way I first expected. Instead of head bashing, it's going to be head butting. However, if I remember correctly it won't be in the next chapter.

As I said before the healing had a very dramatic intensity. The writing was tight and propelled me quickly through the scene without a need or desire to pause. The exhaustion they felt after was written in a way that made me feel how emotionally and physically were drained. It was a nice touch that neither man could fall asleep without the other.

I still feel the same about my other comments regarding Tobyn and Kellar's talk on the way to Adelin's house. I was also impressed by the recognition of both men that Tobyn can also sense the feelings of Kellar. It's a two way exchange and not just something Kellar can do.

As I said in the comments, I love range of emotions shown by your writing. These make it so easy to bond to the characters and make me personally invested in what they are doing. I also appreciate the pictures you create with your words that help me feel like I am there with them. Tobyn and Kellar's arrival at the lodge is a prime example of this. Their flirting jokes were great. I fell in love with Elinor immediately as she switched in and out of the pack leader, mother and then host modes. I am picking up more of the subtle clues you left in the conversations and actions that lead up to what will happen in the future. That's just one of the reasons I love this tale. Great writing!

Hi @Dan South, I thought you must be binging when I didn't seem to be catching up to you. Good choice for the background music. As for the tissue, you better stock up on it.

I'm remembering more as I reread each chapter. I also feel the same as I did when I commented on the pacing and flow of your writing. It's the best, and makes it difficult to stick to my resolve to not binge the story once more.

Hey @Dan South, How ahead of me are you? I'm betting your binging.

This little germ...gem, I didn't catch before. Also, I had forgotten how Tobyn is so focused on the future of the pack that he considers it his duty to stick his growing emotions for Kellar in a box and bury it. I did find it funny that Tobyn still hasn't regained control of his mouth and ends the chapter with a bit of flirting followed by panic. I do love rereading this story!

It is nice to experience with Tobyn both the pain for his pack, then the playfulness of the run. I'm glad he was able to relax afterwards with Kellar on the rock. It feels right that both Tobyn and Kellar are attracted to each other. Their conversation about the pack led to some answers for Kellar, and finally got to why Tobyn was traveling so far from the pack. Adelin sounds like she has more problems than just the malaise affecting her health.

It was amusing to see Tobyn confused about his sexuality. I loved his questions that seemed to pop out of his mouth without forethought. I didn't realize how informal his feelings were for Tilly, either.

Except when he took money to vote "no".

I won't tell you what your SE Asian guys are saying about his politics. Let's just say no matter how he looks, they will act more like a bunch of Vegas when violently pissed off. You might wish to put him in solitary confinement to protect him.

Congratulations @Laura S. Fox! While Connor stirred up his pile of poopers to little effect, your chapter stirred up the readers very successfully. Don't be jealous that the comments had me laughing harder than your words. Throughout the comments I was imagining a group of boys fighting in a cow pasture flinging cow pies at each other. The idea that Rusty could or would subject subject the Might Thor to enter Connor's massive hole was just gross! Rusty isn't that kinky. What the others forgot to consider is that as big as Connors hole is even with the big stick up it, the rest of the space in his hole is filled with s**t due to Connor's massive case of constipation. 🤢 Please feel free to stretch out the delayed gratification of a happy ending as long as you can, as long as the chapters are as fun as they have been so far.

Good Night Everyone! See you all later. Going to bed with my tiger! That's Orange of course. Aod's my monkey!