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I got a chuckle out of the description of the school's transportation. It definitely made me think of a Magic School Bus. Hecuba's appearance followed by an apology was definitely surreal. Rafe vs Raphaelia could make an interesting Battle of the Sexes event. I kind of suspect Andre's alpha to make an appearance as well as Toby and Beau.

Jophiel, God's beauty, is a perfect name for our dyrpath. I also looked up dyr and path. Dyr is the Norse name for animal and path is Old German for path. Path could also come from Latin meaning suffering or feeling (rarely). Animal path, animal feeling and animal suffering could all apply or even describe a timeline. (Animal suffering, animal path then animal feeling. Now that Jophiel has made his leap of faith into Winter Havens' realm, I look forward to his new adventures. Of course there are some interesting questions brought up. What animal form will Jophiel take? Are the two ill-omens his sisters? They were innocent also, but we don't know if they were also dyrpaths. Why was the stag sent to lead Jophiel to Winter Havens? Fascinating beginning to this story.

Rusty wants to be in the middle of a sex sandwich with Matty and Catboy? Maybe he'll be satisfied with a Catboy striptease that reveals Matty. Fun chapter especially with the every gay guy's fantasy in the locker room. Matty needs to reel Rusty in slowly so Rusty stays on the hook until he is netted. It's interesting to see how deep into the Catboy fantasy Rusty is. I wonder if Matty's tail is a butt plug, or if Matty needs to visit the sex shop before his reveal. 😈

Ya got me hooked when you featured my two favorite shifter couples in this story. I also like we got a second sample of the cross-over you are creating. Hope you get back to work writing. I'm waiting for the posting of the first chapter! As for the next game, I would like to see a version of The Bachelor. @kbois leave a wake of bachelors in her stories and maybe some from Cernunnos. It would be fun to see Terik in the new and improve Stephan body take them all on! I'm having a great time with this story. I did forward a motion to the KKK (Korner Krew Kouncil) to put a temporary block on the Korner extended to the universe you two are trying to dest...save. I think we need evaluate that Korner after we see the fallout from your visit, or maybe expand it if you two are successful.

Like I said before, gnomie and kbois have corrupted our little Aaron!

@Danilo Syrtis is such a stickler for details. I'm sure it drives kbois to her habanero whiskey. Or...at least he is her excuse for the massive consumption. Aaron might be able to give you a better idea since he is her hookup for alcohol.

Nuh uh! I've read both your stories from before you started to conspire together. Aaron got the "all's fair" virus from both of you.

Knowing you two, it will be the last chapter ending in a cliffhanger with us all hanging on for our lives!

Massive muscles. (Hope the probe was proportional!) 😉

Well @kbois finally gave my Kage back, but it didn't surprise me he ended up in Hell. If he does his job well as a Guardian, maybe Luci will give him a sexy demon to play with now Elijah has his twin to play with. I'm almost willing to forgive her for Kage's death. Missing him! So Hot, even before his move to Hell!

Smart guy! You are great to think ahead like that. I hope your room came with a nice looking probe to use. Maybe something steamy like this? Sorry I couldn't use CH, but Valkyrie would have my.... twisted in a knot!

Maybe we'll find out if Mallory survives his meeting with Luci in the epilogue. I think it would be funny if his luck changes and Luci gets pranked by him. I think giving Luci a pair of shoes that makes him dance all over Hell would be appropriate. Either that or turning the whole place upside down. I like the idea of Mallory running Hell, and Luci running to Gabriel for help.

Not this time @weinerdog, I was taking a vacation from GA for the holidays. Now I'm back to harass these twisted authors with renewed strength and determination! I am happy to say you and the rest of the Krew did an awesome job keeping them in check. The only reason there was no room for @Mrsgnomie's ego on the ship is because @kbois had already filled the room with her's. I'm sure that @astone2292 was barely able to fit. Of course after this story, Wythuf may need to beam the two down separately. Hope you had a great holiday!

Innocent @astone2292 has been lured to the dark side by the infamous @kbois to create this story of leftover threads twisted into an out of this universe plot! As @Danilo Syrtis said, the tone is hilarious. It is a new take on what to do with holiday leftovers.

On it now @Danilo Syrtis! Thanks for the reminder. 😁

I am. Wythuf must be from a very twisted universe if he/she thinks you two write "wholesome plots". I'm gone for two weeks and you two are stirring up a mess of trouble in the universe. Fortunately not this one.

With all the gnomie bashing going on here, I thought this might be a cross-over with the HP universe.

Hey! Me too! Small world isn't it? I also speak some Thai. Mostly for food, drinks and cussing.

Please make sure to describe the probe from this advanced civilizations when you get it. You know, size, shape, color, speed and special features.

@Valkyrie and @Mrsgnomie would be a scary combo to give you and @kbois some competition in saving the universe @astone2292. It would be like a collaboration of Flash Gordon and Ming the Merciless. I can hear them singing a duet in their songbook. "Death and gore, death and gore laughing all the way" (to the tune of Jingle Bells). 🤪

Hi @Danilo Syrtis, I'm back on the job after taking the holidays off to visit the real world. You're right, this is a hilarious story. Good to see your on the job harassing these two miscreants. I wonder who sprung them out of jail.

The ill fortune of those who have taken advantage of the innocence of this dyrpath is justice served. The owls who the dyrpath believes to be ill omens may actually rescue him by delivering him to a safe refuge in Winter Haven. I wonder what adventures our dyrpath will experience there.

An interesting character tortured by the knowledge he is responsible for the bad things that happen to people who are close. He has magic, but does not control it. The snowy owl is a mystery so far.

I knew you'd understand my concern. Drew making his glitter bombs in a factory doesn't stop glitter from getting everywhere. Every teacher knows that a glitter project in the classroom will spread the glitter over 4-5 kilometers in all directions immediately after school is out!😛