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Hi Cassie! Knowing Drew, you just gave him his reason.
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Hi Craig!
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Hello, Albert!
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Good Morning, Page!
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Hey Drewster!
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Hi Nick!
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Good one, Cane! My story is that I'm just catching up with the rest of you miscreants. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. If I just so happen to reach the 25 comments in a row to do it, that's only a coincidence.
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Oh look! I'm First on Six!
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Trying to beat your own record? I'm game.
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Another red herring??? You're full of them today.
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The size of the fortress already created would probably suit the purpose well. Huntington kept them in separate cells. If they get dumped in the fortress Sebastian had created, they'd probably kill each other off before the next batch is delivered by Caleb and Asa.
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I love the first part of your idea, but since they cannot be cured, maybe dumping them in a currently erupting volcano would be a good idea. If not, then the holding room would at least keep them out of the battle until Huntington and the rest of his army are destroyed.
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Verrry Interesting.... Does this mean that monsters can be driven back? Like turned around to attack Huntington's forces??
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Silver-exploding bullets work in other paranormal worlds; why not here?
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Is there someone in your paranormal world that can control lightning? I'm sure a lightning bolt aimed at the monsters' hearts would do the trick!
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Sometimes short and sweet is much better. Three pages might tire out readers and require them a lengthy time to recover before finishing the chapter. This leads me to ask, do you practice this kind of scene to make sure it works when you write it? How tired does this make your husband?
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Hey Doc! They only mentioned using bullets. What's your opinion on using a TOS-1A thermobaric rocket launcher on the beasts?
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Hmmm...I can't decide if this is another red herring or if Enya is the one you've targeted for death in the battle. 🤔 And yes, it is a very good chapter!
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Hey Chris! I know you said it first, but I agree and hope @kboisis listening closely to your advice. You're good for much more than keeping her on time.
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Now they know that Enya's talent for fire can destroy the monsters, do you think they could roundup more like her to help in the battle?
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Who’s The Toppest Dog, After All?
raven1 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Who’s The Toppest Dog, After All?
A bit biased, @J.El? All he has to do is the same as he did in GGDDBB and hide until the end of the year when Rusty and his friends graduate. I can understand you wanting him to stick around to bring trouble to next year's students. I'm sure there will be another rebel student for him to fight and then lose to. -
Jenny taught Scott and Greg a lesson on Baby Making 101 for Vampires. Then Justin left us with a cliffhanger instead of seeing if the guys passed the test! Grrrr... Do your job, @stranger! Justin really deserves to be disciplined for this! In addition to the lesson by Jenny, I was impressed that she is Frederick's daughter. I also had to laugh that Chris thought she was hot until he thought she was a cougar. Jenny has a century or more to go before she looks that old.
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Apparently, the Soggy Bottom Boys in "O Brother Where Art Thou" are the exception that proves this true.
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I now know what to ask for Christmas, Santa (Bucket), Baby!
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My kind of food.
