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    Chapter 6

    raven1 commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Stacy and Michael were awesome in the fight! Charlie and Brad now have the two mischievous devils making sure the two guys will get the chance to know each other better. Janice is really an old softy who knows how to make Harry behave. Missy, isn't she adorable? I'd love to have a pet like her. I'm glad you used the link to explore Harry's neighbourhood. It is great to know it brought you some good memories.
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    Chapter 6

    raven1 commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 6

    It's an addictive story! I may be ahead of the readers, but I still wait impatiently for Craig to send me new chapters. Right now I'm...
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    Chapter 5

    raven1 commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Michael is a very compassionate young man, and I think his adoption of 'Gramps' was critical in saving Harry's life. The connection Stacy has with Harry's son makes it easier to understand why they all want to help 'Gramps'.
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    Chapter 5

    raven1 commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Vicious! I love it! I felt like both Nurse Judy and Dr Evans, and was screaming some very rarely used cuss words as I read that part of the chapter.
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    Chapter 4

    raven1 commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 4

    I was equally impressed by how real the hospital emergency felt. Danny and Jason are lovable imps. I love how Jason and Stacy give each other a bad time with their playful banter. The humour between Danny and Jason is also fun, and they use it to balance each other. I wonder how it would work if they ever get in a real fight.
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    Chapter 3

    raven1 commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Only my opinion, but Nurse Judy seemed very protective of Donna, her fiancee and Michael. I think Michael will have to search elsewhere.
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    Chapter 2

    raven1 commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Brad and Charlie make a handsome pair, but they are at the lust-at-first-sight stage. It would be great if they get the chance to see if they have something more in common. I had to giggle when you mentioned Aunt May's Charlie. I suffered from the same confusion. Also, Stacy and Max are the perfect contrasting couple that complement each other very well.
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    The title of this story says it all on many levels. It is an excellent story of love and family. I agree with the other reviewers. This is a must-read story!
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    This is a beautiful, sad Christmas story, Bill. Writing this was a very brave thing, but it is a wonderful reminder that the quality of life is much more important than how long the life is lived. Eric's life was filled with the love of his two fathers and many friends. His note shows he never took that love for granted.
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    Chapter 19 Skittish

    raven1 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 19 Skittish

    You got me in the feels with this chapter, Gary. Jubal had made some steps forward, but the large, attentive crowd got him feeling skittish. It twisted Jubal's thinking by the time he visited Lucas. Despite what Lucas and Reid discussed with him, he interpreted what they said incorrectly. I decided to use the actions of the wildings to prepare myself for Jubal's following mood and actions. They must sense what he's thinking before he does.
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    ARROW

    raven1 reviewed CLJobe's story in Fiction

    This a wonderful life story of a young man who grows and develops under the guidance of his grandmother's spirit. It is filled with love and adventure as it tells of the amazing family he and his love create. There are many chapters, but it is easy to read. I highly recommend this story.
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    Good Morning, Gary! Going out for a constitutional again today?
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    We both had a relaxed day. Like you, Aod slept in a bit. I got up as usual then did a little cleaning, cooking and lots of reading.
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    Are you willing to find out, Big Guy?
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    Hi Clo! Hope your day has been good! Has it warmed up yet?
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    Hey Drewster! Looks like your day is off to a blinding bright start! How are you?
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    Hi Frogman! I've read it, and you are right. Spike did a great job and has no reason to be hard on himself. How are you doing?
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    Hi Cassie! I hope you are doing better.
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    Not a problem, Spike. The message conveyed has both Craig and me on a high! Thanks again.
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    I'll gladly read all your Featured Story articles over listening to you two bicker. Not that I mind the arguments at first; those can be fun and interesting. It's the final degradation of the argument to one-word shouting matches. Give me your great articles anytime!
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    Aunt May's Magic

    raven1 commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Aunt May's Magic

    Thanks, Bill! I appreciate the vote of confidence. You are right that the stories are self-contained and interactive. I've read and enjoyed all of The Boot Universe stories, but not in order.
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    Hi Albert!
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    Hey All, Check out the Featured Story by @spike382 It's a great review of one of my favourite short stories by Mancunian.
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    Nong Chai, I could kiss you in a big brotherly way. (I wouldn't like to be whined at and called a bully.). Your Featured Story article was brilliant!
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