raven1
-
Posts
13,403 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by raven1
-
Only my opinion, but Nurse Judy seemed very protective of Donna, her fiancee and Michael. I think Michael will have to search elsewhere.
-
Brad and Charlie make a handsome pair, but they are at the lust-at-first-sight stage. It would be great if they get the chance to see if they have something more in common. I had to giggle when you mentioned Aunt May's Charlie. I suffered from the same confusion. Also, Stacy and Max are the perfect contrasting couple that complement each other very well.
-
The title of this story says it all on many levels. It is an excellent story of love and family. I agree with the other reviewers. This is a must-read story!
-
- 1
-
-
Chapter 1: An Unexpected Christmas Surprise
raven1 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: An Unexpected Christmas Surprise
This is a beautiful, sad Christmas story, Bill. Writing this was a very brave thing, but it is a wonderful reminder that the quality of life is much more important than how long the life is lived. Eric's life was filled with the love of his two fathers and many friends. His note shows he never took that love for granted. -
You got me in the feels with this chapter, Gary. Jubal had made some steps forward, but the large, attentive crowd got him feeling skittish. It twisted Jubal's thinking by the time he visited Lucas. Despite what Lucas and Reid discussed with him, he interpreted what they said incorrectly. I decided to use the actions of the wildings to prepare myself for Jubal's following mood and actions. They must sense what he's thinking before he does.
-
This a wonderful life story of a young man who grows and develops under the guidance of his grandmother's spirit. It is filled with love and adventure as it tells of the amazing family he and his love create. There are many chapters, but it is easy to read. I highly recommend this story.
-
-
Good Morning, Gary! Going out for a constitutional again today?
-
We both had a relaxed day. Like you, Aod slept in a bit. I got up as usual then did a little cleaning, cooking and lots of reading.
-
Are you willing to find out, Big Guy?
-
Hi Clo! Hope your day has been good! Has it warmed up yet?
-
Hey Drewster! Looks like your day is off to a blinding bright start! How are you?
-
Hi Frogman! I've read it, and you are right. Spike did a great job and has no reason to be hard on himself. How are you doing?
-
Hi Cassie! I hope you are doing better.
-
Not a problem, Spike. The message conveyed has both Craig and me on a high! Thanks again.
-
I'll gladly read all your Featured Story articles over listening to you two bicker. Not that I mind the arguments at first; those can be fun and interesting. It's the final degradation of the argument to one-word shouting matches. Give me your great articles anytime!
-
Thanks, Bill! I appreciate the vote of confidence. You are right that the stories are self-contained and interactive. I've read and enjoyed all of The Boot Universe stories, but not in order.
-
Hi Albert!
-
Nong Chai, I could kiss you in a big brotherly way. (I wouldn't like to be whined at and called a bully.). Your Featured Story article was brilliant!
-
A great review to end the year, @spike382! Aunt Mae's Magic is one of @Mancunian's small short story gems. He also has other longer stories, and the newest one you mentioned, "What Happened to the Baxter Boys", is my current favourite.
-
What starts out as a great sibling relationship is tragically changed by a fear-driven silence resulting in a rivalry that hurts both brothers. I loved the theme of reconciliation that results from an act of courage. This is a well-written story worthy of the time you will take to read it.
-
- 2
-
-
-
Thank you for this beautiful story filled with so much love. I've enjoyed reading each chapter. I would be very pleased to write a review, so I hope you take @weinerdog's advice and click the 'Complete' button for this story unless you plan to add an epilogue. Again, thank you so much!
-
Hi Page! I loved the clock tower picture and enjoyed learning about your trip. It sounded like you guys had a great time!
-
Good. Just finished some editing for my slave driver boss and am enjoying lunch. How about you?
-
Have you heard the story about the pot and kettle? Stats for this chapter: Raven's comment score (including this one)-14 The dog's comment score-15
- 171 comments
-
- 10
-
