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  1. raven1

    Chapter 6

    I love this version of the song and the GIF. However, this had me ROTFL: Hope those two Buggers enjoy spending time in Guido's cell with the 2000-pound boy popper!
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    Chapter 40 S1

    Very reminiscent. I suppose that Mac should have gotten used to it by now, but suspect he's a bit irritated.
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    Chapter 18 Peace

    Hey Albert! Don't forget to set the timer so you can get in the photo too.
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    Chapter 18 Peace

    🤭🥰 Thanks, @84Mags!
  5. raven1

    Chapter 1

    Two weeks late @Backwoods Boy, but I found this song and thought you might like listening to it while looking at this picture or the story cover picture.
  6. I came back to look at the cover picture and suddenly thought of this song. I dare readers to look at the picture while listening to this song. Have the tissues ready.
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    Chapter 6

    Missy is fun, and I laughed at how she got to know Jason quickly. Janice had an interesting mini-arc going from angry neighbour to rescuing Jason after the fight ended. As to the other interesting points you made, all I can say is . Damn it Craig! Stop with the tape. I wasn't going to give anything away.
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    Chapter 6

    Glad you enjoyed the song, @akascrubber. Stacy is serious about his martial arts training and uses it effectively. His last move could have broken an eardrum, but that's the price the punk may have had to pay for trying to take a life. I also agree that Michael is fitting in and should seriously consider going back to school. However, all I can say now is I honestly don't know. At this point, @Mancunian is all .
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    Chapter 40 S1

    It was nice to see Devin and Mac meet new friends and have a great time with the family. I've had several straight friends who are not afraid to even be affectionate with gay people. I wonder where Mac's parents are taking them tomorrow?
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    Chapter 12

    Although Charlie's fate has yet to be decided, this is an intense chapter with many new aspects of Greg's new world. Greg took a big risk in confronting Prince George, but in doing so, he won the respect of the prince. The power of the vampire world is based on centuries of life during which they have gained both wealth and influence in the world of humans. Like @wenmale64, I'm also hanging on tight! I look forward to seeing what happens to Charlie in the next chapter. You have made some changes from the original, so whatever happens to Charlie will be a surprise.
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    Chapter 6

    Let's add some background music to enhance our reading experience while going through the chapter. Music to read by
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    Chapter 6

    I love this chapter which is filled with so much action and excitement. I love Missy. Janice is also interesting as a character.
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    Chapter 6

    Whoops! I have my dictionary set for UK English just for the story. Apparently, it doesn't work when editing links. 🤭
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    Chapter 6

    Here are a few links you can take to walk through Brentbridge Road and Old Broadway Street neighbourhoods on Google Maps. Brentbridge Road Old Broadway Neighborhood
  15. Just check your PMs. I've given you even more to do.
  16. That's my reading of the Treaty also. I did notice that neither Spikey nor Drewdo have taken any of their complaints to Page for adjudication, so all their fighting is just hot air. 😛
  17. It definitely was a change. It is kind of like a change from a country girl to a sex kitten city girl.
  18. What kind of writing? Stories, poems and/or non-fiction?
  19. I forgot to mention I also did some cooking. I made Mexican-style Chilli. Aod likes to call it spaghetti sauce but definitely loves it. Oh...I got the car washed and waxed. Not by me, but by the carwash across the street from our condo. They do a great job cleaning inside, outside, and under the hood, wax the car and put something on the tires that makes them shine like new. I can't believe that they only charge about $15 for everything!
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    Chapter 18 Peace

    You are more than welcome. I always read your comments and enjoy the insightful points you make. ❤️
  21. We're fine. Yesterday was a chores, cleaning and shopping day. I got a lot done. I even worked in an hour or two working on Craig's story. How about your family?
  22. Hi Albert! Loved your comments in the latest chapter of Bearpaws.
  23. Hi Spike! Keep up the good fight!
  24. Good Morning Everyone! I hope you all have or had a...
  25. I agree, Clo! Also, I love the new profile photo! ❤️
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