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  1. raven1

    Chapter 13

    The chapter started nicely, but I'm afraid for Charlie now. I still see you like cliffhangers, Justin.
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    Chapter 1

    Hey Albert! I know you will love this story. There is a sequel in the making according to remarks made in @drsawzall's Anthology story this year. Have fun reading this!
  3. This is a fun short story that is spooky, hot and easy to read. I'm sure it will inspire GA authors suffering from writer's block to seek out a possessed typewriter of their own.
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    Chapter 1

    A great story, Chris! I enjoyed the characters and the idea of a typewriter possessed by Grandpa's spirit. It is a well-written short story. I'm sure it will inspire GA authors who experience writer's block to go out and buy their own possessed typewriter.
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    Chapter 239

    I enjoyed the humour of GG playing the part of a vengeful cop as opposed to her usual mentoring grandmother. It is nice to see that Pierre has at least one person he can trust in Paris, Meme. GG seems to have some powers not seen before. The rainfall and renewal of the chapel and its grounds were great.
  6. Hi Clo! I'm doing fine. How are you today?
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    Chapter 6

    You two can have both of these cars from my youth. I still want a 1974 TR6, preferably red.
  8. G'day, dear Clo!
  9. Hi Albert! Hope you had a good take taking care of the dark-haired stud with those amazing blue eyes.
  10. Hi Gary. That cold sure has lingered a while. Sending more get-well wishes your way.
  11. Hi All! You all must have had a busy day doing other things. I just got up to find less than a page of new comments.
  12. Hey Frogman, You have a very long memory. However, I won't lead you on. I'll have to wait until Song Khran to get you pictures of men in wet shorts.
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    Chapter 6

    I was going to give you a love reaction, but then you made me laugh! Since the other pillock has a bat, I would assume the knife could do at least as much damage. "Not a double entendre!!😂 " Oh yeah, right!
  14. Christmas is a season for miracles. For a young lawyer and a professional shopper, the season has given the miracle of love and family. This is a delightful tale for any season and a must-read for Christmas!
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    Chapter 18 Peace

    Dang, Gary! You almost made me give you a laugh reaction. Here I was going on about poetry, and you switched to hockey. You know me too damned well. To hockey fans like us, a dipsy doodle down the ice, a finessed deke, and a well-placed slapshot is pure poetry in motion. Your narratives are never frozen on the boards, though they may describe a frozen pond with kids playing hockey.😄 Your comments about engaged readers are very true, but that is because you know your readers as friends and engage them also.
  16. If you use that for toilet paper, you must have a very large b...
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    Chapter 6

    Me too. Between Jason's storytelling and the doctor transferring Harry to a general ward, Harry has good reasons to feel better.
  18. Really Nick? Tears? Drewdo's attempts on your life and the extinction of frogs worldwide are on that list!
  19. You should ask Clo. She has a list of things.
  20. Sorry to say Page, but the guy with the rusty halo and god complex has taken Hell to new lows.
  21. "ichor demon in the 25th Coil of Hell"
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    Chapter 4

    As far as Michael, Charlie and Jason are concerned, it's a done deal! You aren't the only one fangirling. I'm there, too!
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    Chapter 18 Peace

    I'm with you on this, Dan. I hope that when Lucas returns to the home Jubal has built with love, he will understand how much Jubal loves him and give Jubal a passionate kiss that Jubal cannot second guess. 🤞
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