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Since it is how Thursday in Thailand, HAPPY BIRTHDAY STEVE!
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We are doing well. Went to lunch with friends yesterday. The food was great, but the restaurant had only one cook. It took over an hour for the food to be served. It was a good time, however.
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It's getting bedtime for me. Take care all and see you again tomorrow!
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Hi back at ya Bucket. I forget to do that also.
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So many questions. I don't even need to ask them, because all the questions I had were made in the comments before. Of course, you WolfM have already given an answer: Fortunately for me reading an already complete story, it will only take as long as I can stay awake. I have to go now and find out why all the lights are on.
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JP is one of the most complex antagonists ever created. He reminds me of Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader. I know only one thing for sure, Ethan and Aiden will protect these pups and eventually end up as beloved uncles if not more. This chapter is a magnificent set up, so I am excitedly looking for what happens next. Alpha Stockdale and Jackie are in for one hell of a surprise when the boys return. I think that couple that had such heart ache will probably need a few pups to spoil. If not, then Casey's folks are sure to take them in.
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Oh! One thing I forgot to say. I like the idea of a three party wedding, just in case anyone wants to know.
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@centexhairysub said it all for me. I loved this chapter. I do enjoy centex's comments and the one's for this chapter said everything I wanted to say. I'm lazy so I am glad he said it for me. 😁
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Good Evening Bucket! How has your day been? The weather here is both warmer and wetter, but today no rain.
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Hello sweet Clo! How are you today? I hope the weather is continuing to warm up for you and your sweet little ones. 😁
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Hi Albert! Sawasdee Khrup! 🙏 Hope you are doing OK. I went to a restaurant that has amazing food that is cooked to order. There were 6 of us and one chef. The first dish was served an hour later and the last dish 2 hours later. It was good enough to wait for. Say Hi to Steve.
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What a wonderful chapter of beauty and warmth. Playing with the close pack in the snow, choosing a Christmas tree, decorating the houses, a honest conversation of their small packs relationship, Ethan looking at the Christmas tree, the family together for dinner and finally, the best part, Ethan and Aiden exchanging vows of marriage. I did especially love the way you described Ethan and Aiden together watching the Christmas tree.❤️ I almost forgot. Gaelan's sentence was fitting for his crimes, and give hope for his remaining in the pack. Also, I loved the comment about Cody Coyote being the jokester. Great way to include yet one more mythology.
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Essell will have to do some grovelling to Ases, but I think his friend will accepted his apology. Using the mech in the manner they described should be able to get the Kardoval to at least delay any action to consider the consequences. I believe that the public support and logic of what Garjah and Essell are doing will sway the Kardoval to their favor. Their people are smart enough to know that very few species that do no evolve survive for long. Their culture has been stagnant for a long time and needs to go forward to survive. The encroachment of the galactic civilisation will soon lead to conflict anyway if there are not ways to settle differences. The Kardoval should be smart enough to understand this. I am looking forward to the coming home and reception they get.
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Brilliant chapter. JP sounds like Aiden has influenced his thinking. At one point JP talking to Aiden mentioned he started out having high ideals. In this conversation he indicated he was reevaluating his thoughts. Great chapter once again.
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I honestly don't think Michael will survive his mother's attack. She may love him, but he betrayed her pack, her larger family. Her act may be a way to avenge that as well as provide a quick and merciful end for her son as one last gesture of love. It seem like the corruption is very high on the Lycan Council, and probably doesn't end with just JP's pack. More trouble in sight for the alliance of packs as well as Aiden and Ethan.
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The rescue went well and thanks to the pack commander the security suits from the Lycan Council are under arrest. I thought for a moment that it might be JP trying to sneak back to secure information and assets. What the scene did show is that the corruption of the council reaches deeply and probably to the top. Great description of Ethan's healing of all the ferals. Now the secret is out for good and will be a topic for the Lycan Council very soon. I hope that any conflict will be mainly political, but with JP on the loose, anything could happen. Michael needs to stay as far away from his parents as possible, especially Jackie.
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Hey Gary I was happy to hear you are feeling better. I think the Covid situation is becoming more an epidemic instead of a pandemic. However, keep safe. I also hope that your family is also doing better. Hopefully spring will bring some more warm weather your way.
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Good Day Page! How are you, Morgan and Max today?
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Hi Albert! Hope you have been OK today. Are you guys doing well?
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This chapter did not disappoint! Awesome writing. It struck me how this story as well as the Lycan world you have built contains many of the beliefs of Taoism. I am thoroughly entranced by Aiden and Ethan. I like that they are gaining powers together since they are equals in all respects now. Michael will face justice and his parents, so Ethan sparing his was OK with me. I said it once that Michael greatest victims were not Aiden and Ethan, but Michael's parents Jackie and John. I remember that Jackie made John promise that either she or John would kill Michael. I think that if that happens, it will give these two the closure they need to go on. Thanks for this great story.
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Good night Bucket! Sweet dreams.
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I hope so, I just had a slice of blue cheese. 😲
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Hi Everyone! It's late here, but thought I'd check in to say Hi before going to bed. Hope all is good with you. Sorry to be out of touch for a while. I have been feeling a bit down, but am better today. Had one he&& of a storm last night and was without power. The lightning struck about 0.3 km from my condo. I heard the thunder almost at the same time as I saw the lightning. Scared the sh#t out of me. 😳 Take care all! 😁
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Darien's talk with Gaelan, then Ethan has lead to a breakthrough. Ethan's powers are even stronger as he heals so many ferals using more than one power as well as one power different ways. However..... The big surprise is the cliffhanger. I only have two guesses. First, since the mating bond is complete and growing stronger, not only is Ethan more like Aiden, but Aiden is more like Ethan and now has some of Ethan's power (without control). The second guess is that now Ethan knows that there is a connection between Aiden and he can see what Aiden is seeing, Ethan projected his power to create the fire in the distant headquarter prison where Aiden is held. Great chapter which is extremely imaginative and has definitely twisted the plot once again.
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This is one of the best chapters in the book. Your development of Jean-Pierre is phenomenal. He is one of the most interesting and intriguing antagonist I have ever seen in literature. I almost want to find out his story before this ends. I would recommend his own book, except it would be so dark and without a HEA ending that I would not want to read the story. His dialogue with Aiden was so compelling! The other interesting antagonist, solaris "Paul", also deserves his own story, but hopefully it will be a happy ending. Once again, Casey is a hero as he challenges Ethan out of the stupor Ethan is in and gets him back into action. Mary, Craig, and Ethan's friends are there for support, but it is Casey who makes the difference. Fabulous chapter!
