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I think you and Martini would be fun together @weinerdog! More like: or or probably this, knowing you. I know Boss Lady. I'm heading to the Korner now.
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Yep! There will be a lot of comments in the future to remind you of this one too! Thought you'd like to see the Korner Krew's reaction to this comment.
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You are most welcome. I think I would enjoy working with @Danilo Syrtis very much. I think we'd have a lot of fun gossiping behind your back, and kick around some snarky comments to make. Seriously, I would do it again if you ask. It was a lot of fun!
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If he's like Aristotle O he must have also had an amazing collection of alcohol. We know who would be attracted to that.
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She did. I also think Nick was worried about his ears if he didn't text Brock. She definitely did have all the kids well-trained.
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In case other readers missed some of the subtle humor, I though you might like an example. Don't check it out if you are like and want to discover things on your own. I had read the story many times before I realized this little gem. Amber, a realtor, being a combination of these two characters says so much with so few words. LOL Marge as a balloon. Dolores as her usual hoity toity bwitch.
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juxtapose - Word of the Day - Thu Oct 12, 2023
raven1 commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
@kbois and @astone2292 also juxtapose their contestants in Hell in their Iron Mom game in Storyverse. Also roasted many characters, the Krew and administrators from GA in the following chapters. Even Myr had a moment in the spotlight! -
Just finished watching the Canucks slaughter the Oilers. Boeser was amazing in the crease! Low scoring game with the Bruins defeating the Blackhawks was an entertaining game. I love it when it's a battle of the goaltenders. I got the trifecta of watching three teams I like winning! Thanks again for the reminder, Gary!
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Thanks for the reminder, Gary! I immediately went to the NHL highlights for the game. OMG!! That was a not to miss game. Bleak start for the Leafs in the first half, followed by a comeback, then behind two again with 5 minutes left, Leafs pulled the goaltender and scored two more to tie, then overtime followed by a shoot-out! It left me breathless! Also cheering for the Leafs' win! Now some real hockey talk. Leafs need to be working on their passing and goaltending. Their power play was great tonight!
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Featured Story: Baring My Soul by Kbois
raven1 commented on wildone's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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I like #Calas. It doesn't remind me of food, only an opera star. Since said performer is female, I don't think the dog would even give a sniff. For the sake of the safety of the Korner Krew, I think your suggestion is excellent!
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I agree with you. Your statement did get me thinking about Asa healing the pups. I think that Asa will use both his healing knowledge/power and power to manipulate light to fix the molecular problem(s) in the pups' DNA which prevents them from shifting.
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Hey @kbois. I love your anthology entry! As @drsawzall said, "5, count them 5" hearts.
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She'll just blame MrsG again. Correction: Now you are being targeted! You need to send this card back to @kbois
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I do have to point out that you wrote this: Huntington is/was alive at the time, rich, powerful, evil and smart enough to find out he wasn't Vann's father. He had the resources to track down Vann's real father and get revenge. He would savor the slow painful march to death that Caleb is going through. I like the idea of the takeout food poisoning. However, this would mean the poisoning had been begun a very long time ago. In all honesty, I don't think the story needs a rewrite to include this thread. *Acknowledging it could already be there originally.* Although...It would give many of us researchers a lot of opportunity to frustrate @kbois. 🤔 I need to rethink this!
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A wonderful tale excellently developed. It's a light and fluffy romance filled with everything you could want. The humor is often subtle, so read carefully. The details created a wonderful, textured setting and mood. This is kbois at her best with a definitely must read tale!
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The tribute to your friend was special with details that painted a picture of a very lovely person. I love the story and all the subtle humor you added like the HP reference to Umbridge followed by the balloon deflating (accidental magic?). The story is just as you described to me, light and fluffy. The plot, character and rich details were skillfully done. It is unusual to see such a well developed story in a short story format. Excellent entry!
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That's at least one mother I wouldn't mind as a villain. She was corrupt from the start and never part of Caleb's pack. May she rot in Hell. I don't think @kbois will resurrect Vann's mom. She didn't resurrect Kage and has been grouching and whining about that.
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I did some checking and found nothing that suggest traitors in the pack. However, it is open enough for that to happen, Oh Twisted Lady. If you do, I sincerely hope you don't throw any more major characters under the bus. It will be war if you try to do that with any of the wonderful mothers who cook for the pack! leads to
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It's the only way we can keep up with Gnobois! Or is it Kbomie?
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Good day to you all.
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Hi Gary.
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Hi Spike! Good morning Drew. You look good in orange.
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Hi Albert!
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Hi Big Green!
