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Chapter 10 Hallelujah and Amen
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Hallelujah and Amen
Hmmm...land available next door?? 🤔 Jubal better get that before Reid ends up being the nosey neighbor, peeking through the trees🫣 Just saying...wouldn't want any 'hunting accidents'😜 And noooo, it's not Coy or Boone, but i too shall try and keep my lips sealed also 🤐 love the interaction between these two, with all the sparks flying, Hallelujah...Amen❣️let the inferno begin🤗 You never disappoint, Gar!!!- 108 comments
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We luv ya, you know❣️🫶🏽
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Ok...let's get the "Hurry to Monday" out of the way, because we do realize that our impatience is not good for us in the long run, because near the end, we're constantly begging for more "Bear Paw Mondays"...whining for 'just one more chapter, Gary'😢...so I'm ok with the slow burn, to get to the real heat❣️😉 Now to my friend Reid 🙄 I've taken the liberty of ordering him a "Huber" ( for those unfamiliar, a horse uber) for his ''NO means NO" vacation he needs, for the head out of butt surgery I feel he needs😇...I really do like this guy😜 Nice advancing chapter, Gar...very NICE
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Great chapter, can't wait until Lucas gives Reid the "my boy"- boot to the butt! He's trying to be a page in a book that seems to have been slammed in his face a while ago...until further notice, Reid is officially on Knat Status😮💨 Besides, I'm more concerned with Jubal's new horse being spotted by the last menace and him trailing them back to Lucas' farm😬 Anyway, let's get back home so Lucas can get his 'saw-cut' and shave😍 Thanks, Gar...you did real good❣️🤗
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I have two words that keep popping into my quirky brain...JUST RIGHT❣️...right time, right place, right partners, right amazing story, by the right master storyteller...everything feels "calming" and JUST RIGHT Again Gary, for a soothing chapter after such a crap day!! Thank you, thank you, thank you
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Excellent description of the work ahead...had me almost believing even I might be able to help...NOT😍 Jubal rings all the bells...fabulous friend, perfect partner...and given time, hopefully a loving lover BTY, Gary my friend, that "Logmansion" you built, well, uhmm...I'm thinking Jubal could kinda lend you a hand with the "raze and rebuild" project you might need 🤣Hugs my friend❣️
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Thanks a bunch for this hilarious chapter❣️ 💯 We now understand why the fishing trip is out of the question, realizing that Reid is a 'catch and release' kinda fisherman and needs to sample all the fish in the lake😏, glad Lucas has chosen to move on to bigger and better fishing partners 😉 besides, he and Jubal are safe with each other, can laugh with and at each other...it can only get better
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PERFECTION❣️❣️ I must admit, I was a bit leery of the sheriff for a minute with his questions aimed at Jubal...but jealousy is a terrible thing to waste, I suppose 😁 Now he wants to throw his pole into a lake that's probably closed to him, now that Jubal is on the scene🤭Very well done, my friend
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Loving this one just as much as Larkspur...the characters are flowing seamlessly into the "chest" area and demanding as much love as we gave Boone and Coy I'm hoping they'll wait until they reach 'home' and bathe in the river (lake, big pool, ocean, whatever😀), together❣️I'm also hoping Bear Paw is not literally full of bears with paws! Not saying Jubal should have shot the thief in the back, but a nice butt shot would have been quite appropriate I imagine , just saying...a menace should be eradicated in Kema's honor😇 Great chapter, as usual, Gary🤗
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Sooo excited to see you back❣️❣️Very enthusiastic about our newest “Old West” tale…which we can all agree, NO ONE does better than you Already enthralled with Jubal and Lucas, sad about Kema and hurting for Jubal’s loss🥺, but along comes Lucas with a bit of sunshine peeking through his cloud of depression 🌦 So like the rest of your ecstatic fans…”Yeehaw”, “Saddle Up” and Let’s Ride❣️😍 Gary’s back in town 🌟
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So happy for the update...It's about to get REAL!!! Amber will be on the case now, and hopefully Jim's days will become like boiling lava, consuming him, his evil mother and stupid mother-in-law😈 Great story-telling❣️
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Shaking my d*** head! A town full of delusional, hateful, bullies with money...no morals, no empathy, no sympathy...nothing that signifies "HUMAN"! Run while you can Amber, whatever your Mom and Ben's "acquaintances" have, may be in the water and quite deadly for sane peeps. Interesting chapter...looking forward to either Ben or David picking up a real pair of missing genitals, sooner then later
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Wonderful❣️❣️ Thanks for this update, nice chapter for the twins to finally detain the doctor, so that they may display their marvelous gifts of torture on her...and hopefully her mother!!
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At some point, Ben is going to have to get away from these narcissistic, sociopaths and decide that he's a man and doesn't have continue to be LapDog and WhippingBoy, his woe is me is starting to get old!! Borrow a pair from somewhere, and tell your spineless dad what is going on, at least let David in, so that he can show you what "living" and loving looks like!
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Not rough…intense and all encompassing, for sure❣️Definitely a lot going on simultaneously, but Tala is multi tasking quite adeptly and getting closer to identifying and eradicating the thieves…one domino at a time, they WILL fall! Great to have you back and hoping you’re feeling much better. 💯 Love the chapter, thank you❣️👏🏽
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Chapter 5: They finally meet. What's the way forward?
Onim commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: They finally meet. What's the way forward?
Like mother, like son...gimme, gimme take, take!! These two have mastered the AP Sociopath classes...Quick!!! Give sane people a chance to plan their demise in peace 🤔 Once again the father has taken one of his SOS (Stupid On Steroid) pills, before merrily joining his beautiful, sad son on the steps..."Are you ok?" "You seem sad." "Why aren't you inside?"...Can someone just slap Jerome and tell him that all the roles for "CLUELESS" were cast years ago...geezzzzz😬 On a lighter note 😜 Awesome chapter❣️ -
Sure hope Mom doesn't find out what Don The Moron did to her son...Mom's tend to take rape of their children a bit more seriously than Don's tiny little mind can contemplate! Very nice chapter!!!💯
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The WORST person in all of this is Jerome, the spineless, balls-less, scrap of excrement, that would allow someTHING like Elena to still be breathing, after all he’s witnessed of the things she’s done to his son…Ben is an innocent caught in the midst of this tsunami of pain and terror😭 David also needs to grow a pair and offer his control freak of a mother, one of two choices…attitude adjustment (AA) or lip and dental replacement(L&D)🤕 Nice chapter, though some things seem a bit implausible, they’ll mesh in the long run!
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This is an excellent start...I'm in❣️ Can't wait to see how he extracts himself from the infestation of manure, that are his petty 'friends'! But he's going to have to do some 'mental advancement' of his own also...a little self evaluation, much?
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Chapter 2: Destiny at work. Will it favor Jim or Ben?
Onim commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Destiny at work. Will it favor Jim or Ben?
I’m going to agree whole-heartedly with “mfa” on this one…a nice, huge, semi truck speeding happily along would be option #1 for me, since No balls-No spine daddy Hernandez is ALWAYS a no show!! A father like him, money or none, is any kids’ worst nightmare! The Elena monster should and could have been slayed from day one…my anger and hatred towards the father almost exceeds that towards Monster E! Very nice chapter❣️ -
Nothing Clears the Head Like a Walk in the Moonlight
Onim commented on garfwiz's story chapter in Nothing Clears the Head Like a Walk in the Moonlight
I’m a bit confused about the duplicitous Avery, and whether or not her call was able to be screened from the other phone. Her lazy, disrespectful butt should fired…guess that will come when Matthew returns, hopefully he’ll get to do the honor🤗 Appreciating the long chapter…more than you know❣️ The Rancher..🤔🤷🏽♀️ -
Wow! What a tense-filled, exciting chapter…talk about cliff-hangers❣️ I’m thinking the owner of the oily blood donor could be Wolfgang helping his newly acquired Vamp friend! Hopefully, he was able to make it through the battle to assist his mate and return the favor to Kavan! Beginning to understand the Giddy one a bit better now, how the ‘angel’ in him was abused and left him cynical and bitter. 😢 Thank goodness our favorite little hard-headed Kav was ready and willing to jump in to help🤗👏🏽 Wonderful chapter
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Chapter 1: Enter the world of the Henandez family.
Onim commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Enter the world of the Henandez family.
Very nice beginning...though the father is sickeningly weak, and can't wait until Ben lays a few fingers (preferably closed) on that reject from hell, mother!
