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Chapter 22 Bonus Snippet and Author's Note
Onim commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 22 Bonus Snippet and Author's Note
Lovedddddddddddddd it!! Next story...Bruce Trains Rosie and Tater...with a side of Bo and Noah???? Ok, sue me for wishing for another spin off of this wonderful story...geeezzzzzzzz😇- 41 comments
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Late hearing this...so very sorry...RIP Comicfan, you were truly appreciated and loved!
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Fantastic story from beginning to end! It'd be difficult to choose the best of your stories, since they are all superbly written, so I'll just place this one up there at the top...with the rest!! Thanks for sharing...
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A fabulously written tale of love, adventure, intrigue...this one had it all, and MORE!! Can hardly wait for the 'shorty's' to start, whenever you're ready...we will always be ready for any updates to the wonderful saga "SILVER SHORE FOR EVER"! 💯 BTW, so glad Nisa didn't get to live and soooo hope Revi is headed for the same fate. 😇
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Geezzzzzz, hanging off this cliff is excruciating, exciting, exhilarating, and just EXtra darn nerve wracking!!! BTW, that's my wish for Marc Greene's head!!!Thanks for an exceptionally well done chapter!! 💯 And NOOOOO I don't need anger management...😇
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I'd like to say this was a good chapter...it wasn't; I'd like to say this was a feel good chapter...it wasn't! This was FABULOUS, FEEL GOOD ALL OVER chapter! Found myself throwing my 'Werk it Cyn' fist up in the air...looking around hoping no one was coming to cart me off to LILM(Looney Institute of Lost Marbles)!! Kinda forgot I wasn't at home...so sue me.😅 Thanks for this one...
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Ah-Mazzzzzzzzzzz-Inggggggggg chapter...and amazing grace will be needed for Corey!! Poor Zeke surrounded by deceit and dishonesty most of his life...hope he can restore Tyler and go Beast on Corey's arse!!
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Oh darn...I only suggested we take him outside...for some much needed sun and fun...for his 'health', you know! Afterall, when does he get outside??
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Just another little 'suppose'...suppose we slice G up, as he did Ty, wipe his memory, and take him outside to a 'not' so safe house! Just a pleasant supposition
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Tala has got to start using his gifts more!!! With all the greed and deception around him and Jay, they're going to need every advantage they can get...and use them forcefully, i.e. "bug crushing" Nice, informative, but secretive chapter!
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What a unique, fabulous little body-switch story! This was so nice...and I agree with travlbug, PROM could be an excellent series...thanks for this one Brian. 💯
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Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
Onim commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
I actually thought that Tied Up In Knots was THE best 💯...you proved me wrong, once again!!! This...Boss-Nanny, this right here is THE BEST!!🥂 There are 3 or 4 authors on here that grace us with their writings that could be commercial successes without a doubt, if they chose to be, you are definitely in that group!! We are so fortunate...just know that your characters with their hilarious, oft sorrowful, romantic dramas are loved and appreciated! So...thank you for Moose, Matt, AidoPotato, Jay, Loe, Kas, Hil, Scott, Will and the anchor Brad...characters not easily forgotten...- 79 comments
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Highly recommend this delightful, oft times hilarious, sometimes steamy, drama! These characters will NOT be forgotten, I just want to scream “please don’t take away my Aido Potato, my Moose, my MATT….”!!😫 This was a fantastic tale…
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Very beautiful, Gary...amazing how you were able to take us through the "track of tears"...first the empathy tears (slow moving down the cheeks), then the sympathy tears (rivers down the cheeks, including the old runny mucous); the anger tears (accompanied with angry swipes of the eyes); to the final joyous tears (with smiles and hope, and the old nose-blowing)!! And all of this in one chapter...a whole new level of awesome from you, my friend...Thank you!! 💖
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Would love to see Mike arrogantly headed off to be Bubba's "CFT" , but, as Mawgrim said, he's probably managed to get away with his crimes...seems to be par for the course nowadays! This has been a fantastic, mesmerizing story, just as all your others..THANK YOU!! 💖💯
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Fabulous!! ...and the plot thickens, I hope Toby sues the crap out of them and makes them pay back every cent they've stolen! I also hope there's dire consequences for the heinous thieves...dividing their clans and giving control to worthy or should I say 'trustworthy' alphas!! Great story...awesome writing!💯
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Awesome!! Loving this different perspective on the Lycan community!💯 Looking forward to Tala having to "introduce" himself to the Council of the Clueless, very soon! Nicely, of course...just a few drop kicks to a few butts...done with 'love'!! 🥰 Thanks for the quick updates on this very interesting and well written story!
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So very sad to hear of your medical situation...though we will all hope and pray that somehow, your indomitable spirit will see you through this...simply because we LOVE you...always 💖 Much love and hope for you, my friend!
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Thank you, thank you, for the quick update It was much appreciated!! Poor Cyn in a den of wolves, and he doesn't even realize he has the top of hierarchy wrapped around his finger!! Shea, the big bad wolf, is going to protect him with his ALL! 😉Great chapter!
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This story with it's wonderful characters...Coy, Boone and others (Blue and Daisy, especially), ticked all the boxes for me, written so well, there was laughter, tears, adventure, cliffhangers, LOVE, a uniqueness, etc, etc, etc!!! Loved it, the ending was perfect!!
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Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Once again, you've told an awesome story with two interesting, lovable characters, in a setting of the old west...and made us fall in love!! Thanks Gary... Coy, Boone, Blue, and Daisy will not be soon forgotten, so feel free to give us lil snippets of their lives from time to time...I swear, we won't mind!! Stay safe, take extra care, and be well, my friend!! -
I totally agree, so well written, very unique, great pacing...waiting patiently🙄 somewhat😂, for the next chapter!! Looks like Cyn has a fan base, already!! 🥰
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So glad I took this western journey with you...well worth the cross country horse ride...FOR SURE!!! Thoroughly enjoyed these two cowboys, my fav Blue, and the hilarious little horse trainer/wagon maker!!!💖
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😭Epilogue???? Oh my...guess I'll have to brace myself...😔Well, I must say that even though we could all use a couple, a few, maybe a dozen more chapters...this was a beautifully written explanation of certain love making 'mechanics' and the expressions of what real LOVE sounds like, looks like, and ultimately should be about...is just fantastic! Thank you for this one, Gar...💯 Stay safe and well, my friend
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I've a feeling this is going to be very good...I'm all in!! 💯
