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Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Once again, you've told an awesome story with two interesting, lovable characters, in a setting of the old west...and made us fall in love!! Thanks Gary... Coy, Boone, Blue, and Daisy will not be soon forgotten, so feel free to give us lil snippets of their lives from time to time...I swear, we won't mind!! Stay safe, take extra care, and be well, my friend!! -
I totally agree, so well written, very unique, great pacing...waiting patiently🙄 somewhat😂, for the next chapter!! Looks like Cyn has a fan base, already!! 🥰
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So glad I took this western journey with you...well worth the cross country horse ride...FOR SURE!!! Thoroughly enjoyed these two cowboys, my fav Blue, and the hilarious little horse trainer/wagon maker!!!💖
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😭Epilogue???? Oh my...guess I'll have to brace myself...😔Well, I must say that even though we could all use a couple, a few, maybe a dozen more chapters...this was a beautifully written explanation of certain love making 'mechanics' and the expressions of what real LOVE sounds like, looks like, and ultimately should be about...is just fantastic! Thank you for this one, Gar...💯 Stay safe and well, my friend
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I've a feeling this is going to be very good...I'm all in!! 💯
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Thanks for this update...a delight!! Please have a very HAPPY NEW YEAR and Happy Birthday to hubby!! Take care and be safe! 🥂
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Best chapter yet...Merry Christmas to us!!!!! Coy and Boone...now on to dealing with the sneaky land agent!! Awesome chapter, Gar...🥂 Have a HAPPY NEW YEAR and stay safe, my friend!
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Chapter 10 Praises for Blue
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Praises for Blue
Loving the 'slow dance' they're doing with each other...Coy is a lot more insightful, whereas Boone is a "let's do this"...they'll be good together, for sure!! Another awesome chapter, with each chapter fleshing these two interesting characters out more! Even got me thinking about giving Blue a hug...😄- 68 comments
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Sweeeeeeet...Gary!!! That is my all time favorite song by the Temptations...a toast to Coy and Boone, yeah??🥰 And I failed to get into Blue...no angel there😁, he had to find someone to save Boone, afterall, GUILT is a terrible thing to waste!! 🤣 He'll be a good boy from now on, hoping Boone doesn't 'box his ears'!! I'm well, my friend...hope with the heart that you are staying safe and well, also!
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Coy...to the rescue!!! And I hope that Boone talked in his sleep and Coy heard it all..🤭I won't question why Coy was there..."who can explain it, who can tell you why...fools give you reasons...wise men never try"(beautiful old song)! Suffice it to say, for once I'm going to try the 'wise' way and let the author continue to work his magic, his way! 💯 Impressive chapter, way to smoothly bring Coy back into the mix, without having him traverse over 2000 miles without a GPS, I mean who does that!! 😉
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Chapter 7 The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
Geeezzzzzz, 😱 I'll have to let you know how I'm feeling, when I'm able to place my heart back into my chest, after MY terrifying(fabulously written), harrowing fall off of that cliff with Boone!!! Awww, my friend, HANDS DOWN... YOUR BEST DESCRIPTIVE, MOST VIVID AND DYNAMIC CHAPTER EVER!! I sure as heck hope Coy has been following, to save Boone(and me)from this 'cliff-falling' of yours!!🥺 BTW, can we please stick to 'cliffhanging' for a while after this...at least a chapter or two!! Storms, cliffs, swiftly running water(not from a showerhead), thunder and lightening, and stubborn mules...contemplating what the next chapter has in store for us with 'bated' breath(more like defibrillator on stand by)🤭 -
Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
Onim commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
Beautiful!!! Maturity arrives on the scene and just...'slays'!! 🔥So well written!💯 -
Chapter 5 Straight Shootin'
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Straight Shootin'
🥂 Thanks Spyke...minority is my middle name 🤭, Coy's age and his maturity has to kinda have an emergency meeting in the 'reality room' and come to terms with trying to be on the same page, in the same body, at some point!! So, Boone moving on might be the biggest help to Coy until that "meeting" takes place!! In the mean time, guess we'll have to come to terms with having to wait "PATIENTLY" 🥺 for six more days...or less???😇 -
Chapter 5 Straight Shootin'
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Straight Shootin'
"OUCH"!! Was this one of those 'this is gonna hurt me more than it does you' chapters, Gar...well, NOT TRUE 😭 I'm having a Kleenex moment before I can express myself! This convo between the two of them needed to be had, this separation...heh, not so much, with how the times were, I think they still need to have each other's six!! Coy is feeling the pain of loss and impending loss...but Boone has been feeling pain and a sense of loss (albeit silently) for a long time...man up Coy, and recognize Boone's pain and anguish for once! Superbly written, Gar!- 96 comments
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Oh snap...those are Sasha's 'natural' pack! He has an un-pack like howl, that matches the she wolf's. Hmmm, very interesting...
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Not quiet...just reflective and appreciative of having another of your stories to look forward to!💯 Besides, I try not to comment too much...it gets me into trouble..🤭 This is good...different, but VERY good, really glad Boone's not going to have to consult a magician to finally pull Coy's head out of his arse, hopefully he'll emerge in time to not be left in the literal 'dust'! 😉
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Yes, I suppose all good things come to an end😞...but these are our boys!!!😭 Anywhoooooo, great wrap up for everyone, writing as usual was spot on and superb...NAILED IT! Glad you are safe and hoping our guy is doing better, please send luv to him! 💓 Looking forward to the epilogue, much luv for ya, stay safe and healthy!!!
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What a beautiful way to deliver the 'mind slap' Ash needed to help him realize "yesterday's the past, tomorrow the future...today is a GIFT (hence a 'present)"...go get your present Ash!! Awesome!!!
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Does Melanie know that with a few 'keystrokes' on his social media platforms, Samson could place her on the 'cancel culture' list and put a serious dent in her illegal blackmailing tactics...he's under no obligation or non disclosure contract with her or her company to not let his fans and various media outlets know about her shady tactics...these days, blackmailing can be a two-headed bytch!!😇 Gotta luv Twitter and Instagram...😉 Smooth work..once again!💯
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Samson should handle her like the boss he is..."ahhhmm...that would be a HELL NO"...tomorrow is never a guarantee, her very first show is NOT a guarantee of anything, so she should check that overblown ego, when dealing with potential featured artists! Oh..forgot to tell you...loving how this story is so well done!!!
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So very sorry to hear that Joh...hoping and praying that he gets better soon!! Air hugs and many prayers for him and family! 😢 Take care and be safe, Joh💓
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Rossn, couldn't have expressed the majority opinion better!! Just think if we all had to write the ending to all the stories we choose to read...why read them?? Why take a chance on reading such a well written story, only to be left teetering on the brink of 'hair-pulling' frustration! People usually like getting to the end of a story, for a conclusion, a resolution...NOT a cliff-hanging mystery...just my opinion...and we all know what opinions are like, "____, and we all have one"🤭 If I could write like you, I'd gladly finish the ending...unfortunately, not my forte.😏
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That was by far the best "put you in your place, with dignity and grace" convo I've ever read!! Jimmy 10...Mom 0!! Beautifully written💯
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Love the start!!! I’m really liking Boone, already, Coy...meh, he seems to be swimming in the deep end of the self delusional pool of grief and confusion, he’s got some self discovery looming in his future!! Poor Boone...😢, he loves him anyway. Looking forward to this ‘Horse of a different color’ western, Gary! 😍With you, it’ll supersede awesome as usual!!!💯
