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    Tanka

    mollyhousemouse commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Tanka

    sharing your work here is a wonderful idea! i hope that you'll include some notes on your process poetry is a very individual kind of art, from the words the poet chooses to the images it evokes in the reader Tanka #2 has painted a marvelous picture in my head: there's a boy, not too young, 10-ish but not more than 15, standing in a yard, park like expanse snowing but not storming dark mittened hands held in front of him snowflakes standing out in relief and you can see that one has started to melt, right next to it's brother thank you for sharing these
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    Tanka #3

    mollyhousemouse commented on MacGreg's story chapter in Tanka #3

    this is so good Sir that the hawk is "Brandishing freedom" it sounds very much like a taunt while you are "mired in gridlock" full of emotion, Sir i really like it!
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    cookies can be quite the incentive! have a good day y'all!
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    i'm guessing it's school related do what needs doing
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    those sneaky ones are the worst try some ice on the bruise, could make it fade faster
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    good night tim
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    good night, Sirs and friends sleep well
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    i don't know any other authors as well as i know tim but there are a few of these answers that don't say "yes, yes, this IS tim"
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    good night Def sleep well and hello to the rest of you! was a busy day at work but it was good! hope everyone is well
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    Phil says i'm going to bed early too so good night Sirs and friends good night @Thorn Wilde and BF good night @Mikiesboy sleep well good night @Reader1810, make sure you go to bed tonight hon! for those that need a light to find the way
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    the Tanka was very difficult for me, i'm sure you will do it beautifully you write a pretty awesome ballad, i love the story in this one https://gayauthors.org/story/mikiesboy/tims-bits-and-pieces/1
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    thanks can't wait to see the Tanka
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    oh yes Sir He laughed, big belly laugh
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    yes Sir and the ones i don't get to will be only 1 day overdue, so not too bad
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    no panic just a deep sigh..... and now moving on thanks
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    that moment when you realize you've been working from tomorrow's To Do list 😫 thanks @Mikiesboy for the good advice i'll pic the three most urgent & start there
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    good for you A! i've 30 minutes to wait before picking up Number One from work a light in the window to show the way for any walking in the dark
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    Moral of the story this made me laugh! it's true though, it might be harder to not be one, than to be one, but still Another side note, all of you here have been so... damnably nice. Jesus. Like for real, it makes me wanna cry, because I cannot believe that even a few people have said something kind. Keep on doing you, you guys. I wish you all the best. there are quite a few really good people here, i'm glad that you have discovered that If you never say anything, nobody can help. You might feel like you're causing drama, or anxiety, but unless you yell as loud as you can no one will pay attention. this is so true, people can't read your mind, if you don't let someone know there's a problem, it's not ever going to get fixed
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    these are wonderful Parker! i really like how the dream lover in the first, leads to the completion in the third thank you for sharing them
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    after i started to watch this, i remember Oprah having him on the show it's something to think about for sure!
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    i hope the colours return soon
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    and it was a pretty good day Kitt! went through my to-do list!
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    you ever have one of those days when you look at the clock and it's 9:00 and you think "i think i'll take care of this one more thing, then go get that second cup of coffee" then all of a sudden your 11:00 meeting is pinging you to tell you that they'll be late and you're like "huh? that meetings not until 11, why is he letting me know now?" so you look at the clock and it's 10:59? yeah, my whole day hi there Sirs and and friends hope your day was a good one
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    thank you Sir good night Sir, and to tim
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    hi Sirs & friends it's been hella quick! as in where the heck did the time go!?
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