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  1. @Paladin -- I have heard the term "grey nomads" or "gray nomads" -- applied to persons who live full time in a motorhome or an RV (Recreational Vehicle) or Fifth Wheel (a large camper with many or all features of a motorhome or RV, but pulled (usually) by a high-capability pickup and/or truck. More commonly here in the US Midwest we call them RVers. Some other RVers are not full-time, but have a home they use part of the time. A few years ago, a couple moved next door to me who had been full-time RVers but got tired of the road all the time. They told me they had maintained a Post Office box in the state of South Dakota for stuff which required a legal post office address. Most full-time RVers I have met tend to be be very nice folks, retired from jobs, somewhat more relaxed than average, and resourceful -- and have more than average income.
  2. Dr. Kenneth Allen sounds like the proverbial stuffed-shirt, the self-righteous-prig, the prime example of thinks-he-knows-it-all, the I'm-better-than-you-and-I-show-it, the my=way-or-the-highway guy, and so forth. Also the "I can't ever admit I might have made a mistake" guy.
  3. Well, if Marie-Looser has been with anywhere near as many guys as she claims, she would also be an STD (Sexually Transmitted Disease) risk.
  4. Is there such a term as "comedownance"?
  5. Marie-Loser (but, with the way she acted toward Ryan, Marie-Looser may also be a correct term), could indeed use an attitude adjustment. Benjamin Fitzgerald will be a big help, with his medical knowledge. I question, since asthma and bronchitis have similarities, might persons with cancer and bronchitis also be spared? I do not have enough medical knowledge to hazard a good guess on that. Ryan has a good plan, gathering persons together and trying to see what is going on. If anyone is far-seeing enough into the future, they need to stock up on cell chargers -- both the plug-in types and the types able to charge from vehicle batteries. Many cell towers in the USA have reserve power sources which last from 72 hours to one week. If the power grid or sections of it go out, being able to charge from vehicles would extend the usefulness of cell phones.
  6. Some very thoughtful comments on this story. While all have been fascinating, I have really liked the comments of @Sherye Story Reader and @Summerabbacat and @Al Norris and @pvtguy and @centexhairysub , plus the analytical nature of @Anton_Cloche -- Almost as fascinating as the story itself. Does the gas have any preserving effect on the dead bodies, causing them to decompose less quickly?
  7. So far, the guys are being resourceful. It will be interesting to see what happens when electricity fails. So much of our society requires electricity to work.
  8. I agree, @VBlew While some things can continue, eventually coal, natural gas, and other power plants will stop working. Trains will crash or derail as engineers die. I went to more than 400 funerals before I was 9 years old. My parents sang at funerals, and unless grandmother was visiting, I had to go with them. I got bored with funerals very quickly. Since George has asthma, might his father also have it? And it is common for men to start having prostate cancer very early, and it grow very slowly for years. George's father could easily be alive -- somewhere.
  9. ReaderPaul

    Chapter 36

    Very good chapter, @P. E. Knapp
  10. I rarely read poetry. But this one was worth reading all the way through. In 197 words. Lee Wilson has packed in questions, explorations, feelings, and resolution. Well worth reading.
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  11. Okay, @Jason Rimbaud, you were right, the prologue does say Clinton, New Jersey. I was right about George Senior living in Knoxville, Tennessee. I will let @Lee Wilson explain how the cloud moved against the wind from east to west to Knoxville. @Gary L can watch as we all get super-involved in fiction. Perhaps @Sherye Story Reader and @chris191070 can referee --
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    Prologue

    Wow, @Jason Rimbaud. You were right, it does say Clinton, New Jersey. (Population 2,773 in the 2020 Census.)
  13. George Senior lived in Knoxville, Tennessee. Prevailing winds blow from west to east except in rare cases. Since Mission Critical Labs are in San Francisco, the winds would blow west to east, and must have been moving VERY fast Bing says it is about 2,400 miles from San Francisco to Knoxville. For the death cloud to reach Knoxville in 14 hours or less, the wind would have to be blowing about 171 miles per hour (275 km per hour) or more. There are 34 towns or cities named Clinton in the USA.
  14. There is a slightly unclear sequence of events quoted below: The two boys ventured out on their bicycles. They initially covered the area immediately surrounding their houses. Less than a minute after they turned onto Austin Hill Road, a car drove by. They missed it then, but the driver, sixteen-year-old Marie-Louise Small, was doing exactly what they were doing. She was also roaming the streets hoping to find someone else alive. So they had turned a corner and Marie-Louise went down the street where they had been? Or she drove by and they missed it?
  15. ReaderPaul

    Prologue

    @Jason Rimbaud -- Mission Critical Labs were in San Francisco. I was thinking New Jersey also until I used Bing to find out where M C Labs were However, with the distance from San Francisco to Tennessee, @Lee Wilson, it would have taken more than one day -- not just 12 or 15 hours -- for the death cloud to get to Tennessee in the next chapter.
  16. According to the follow-up song, "A Girl Named Sam," by a different artist, A Boy Named Sue married A Girl Named Sam, and they named the baby -- "Who?"
  17. There have been several story titles that have intrigued me enough to read them, including -- It All Started with a Shuttle Flight, by @P. E. Knapp Prompt #134 - "Why is your underwear in the swimming pool?" by @wildone Makarovia? Where The Hell Is That? by @R. Eric One Dark and Stormy Night, by @drsawzall La Tombola, by @drsawzall My First True Christmas, by @Bill W Crash Landing, by @Bill W Take Me to Your Leader, by @quokka The Case of the Short, Short Prince by @Geron Kees (Okay, I would have read that one anyway, since Geron wrote it, but the title caught my eye, and it is a really good story -- but gets even better after the first twelve chapters!) The Charm of Being a Pig, by @Geron Kees -- helpful to read the rest of the Charm series first, but not strictly necessary). Thrift Shop Nation, by @Geron Kees Any of the science fiction written by @Myr Retail Ninja, by @astone2292 Peter the Meteor(ologist), by @Lee Wilson The Beard, by @dkstories I am sure I can think of others, but these stand out.
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    Chapter 37

    A six pound lasagna is available at several of the wholesale clubs. That should feed several persons, but not as tasty as what could be made at home.
  19. Poor pompous "powerful" politician! Australia (and Earth) need to stop assuming they hold the proverbial upper hands. Amixorp is being very gentle when it is considered what they COULD do in regard to Earth. I think there is also somewhat of a disconnect on the part of Amixorp in understanding some Earth's tribalism and stubbornness. @quokka is trying to show how both sides can make wrong steps in relating to a totally different culture and technological level. I do hope the second part of this story appears soon.
  20. ReaderPaul

    Chapter 35

    In the first paragraph of this chapter, who is Terrence? It seems logical that Sebastian would be bilingual at least, possibly trilingual or quadlingual. Are any of the other houseboys multilingual? Are any of the husbands multilingual? I would be reasonably sure Orion, Quinn, and Tanner at least know some Spanish terms. Enjoyable chapter.
  21. ReaderPaul

    Chapter 33

    What an honor for Jessica to do so much of the bonding ceremony! Excellent chapter.
  22. I am absolutely loving Ark II and Makarovia. I like Bluebloods, and also hope you eventually continue Cinderfella 3 and Prince Vincent.
  23. ReaderPaul

    Chapter 32

    Very good chapter. Will we learn some of the reasons Aiden is so vulnerable? When do we get to learn more about Angel?
  24. The first book in the series was excellent. Each successive book was more challenging as the detailed details derailed thoughts as they tailed off into tangential threads of tangled tree branches of trails traveled seemingly in multiple directions simultaneously. (It might have also had something to do with the fact that I was working 60 to 80 hours a week for some years when the books came out.)
  25. I agree that Jordan put in bogging down detail. I stopped reading the books after Book Four.
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