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  1. craftingmom

    Chapter 1

    Thank you! I do actually have thoughts of continuing it, most likely through a series of the anthologies. Here's a hint: you've met Ryan before in another anthology, but not his POV yet.
  2. craftingmom

    Chapter 1

    I like that imagery too of being in the dark, wanting to come into the light... Glad you liked it!
  3. craftingmom

    Chapter 1

    Thank you. So glad you liked it. I do have plans to continue Ryan and Brady's story, so we'll see!
  4. craftingmom

    Chapter 1

    I'm glad you noticed that. There is more to their story. I 'plan' to continue it through the anthologies. You've actually briefly met Ryan in another anthology (but not his POV yet).
  5. craftingmom

    Chapter 1

    Thank you. This is such an internal struggle for all the Brady's of the world. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  6. craftingmom

    Chapter 1

    It is sad, and unfortunately true. I am thinking of more pieces, maybe a series with the anthologies, continuing Brady and Ryan's story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
  7. Wow, great story. It's one of those I wish was so much longer (like some of your other readers have said...hint, hint)
  8. craftingmom

    Chapter 1

    Another great story, Parker! You had me worried there for a bit, but that's a good thing! I love a little tension and angst (okay a lot of tension and angst). It's always hard to read about the bigotry in world.
  9. craftingmom

    Chapter 1

    Great Story! Loved the bantering, it flowed so naturally.
  10. Guarding the Line He was in charge of holding the line. His comrades in arms were doing their best to hold off the offensive moves of the Raiders, but he was the last line of defense. Brady's sharp eyes cut to his right for only a moment. Ryan. He knew exactly where he was. Waiting. Cheering. For him. His heart thundered in his chest. Ryan. He didn't know what it was about the new kid, but Brady couldn't stop thinking about him. The shy teen had pushed every one of the desires B
  11. Brady sits on a line. He guards it viciously. Nothing is going to cross it. Not even himself.
  12. craftingmom

    Chapter 8

    Yes, their anger at Rowland's poisoning is blinding them a bit, and Kye feels like he is partly responsible since he didn't stop it when he could have.
  13. craftingmom

    Chapter 8

    Thank you!
  14. craftingmom

    Chapter 9

    Chapter 9 A hand shook my shoulder. "Come on, little one, wake up." No, please, I'd just fallen asleep... I tried ignoring Donnelly, my self-appointed keeper. I think they had decided to torment me by depriving me of sleep because every time I finally managed to drift off, the man was here waking me back up. Throughout the entire night, I was sure I'd only managed a bit of actual sleep. "You know what Dr. Fulbert said. I need to wake you up every couple of hours, make you drink and eat
  15. Congratulations, Cynus!!!!
  16. craftingmom

    Chapter 8

    Chapter 8 "Sir!" I sputtered instinctively as I jolted up to the icy water dousing my face. I scrambled to find my footing, yet only succeeded in crashing my shoulder into a wall when I stumbled incoherently. A rumbling laugh echoed around me, and it took me several long punishment-worthy seconds of leaning on the wall before I could focus. The drab gray stone walls were unfamiliar, so I did my best to pull myself together into position. Once I finally got my feet planted, drawing in a
  17. craftingmom

    Chapter 7

    Kye is very self-deprecating. He's been taught by his father and Barrett that he's nothing, especially after his brother left. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  18. craftingmom

    Chapter 7

    I'm so glad to hear from you! Thank you so very much! Let me know what you think of the rest!
  19. craftingmom

    Chapter 7

    Sam's view of Kye has definitely been jaded by his stay at Barrett's, seeing Kye as the pampered pet his master wants everyone to see. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  20. craftingmom

    Chapter 4

    good guess!
  21. craftingmom

    Chapter 2

    so true...
  22. craftingmom

    Chapter 1

    Oh, I definitely suffer with them. Lots of tissues while I write.
  23. craftingmom

    Chapter 6

    Thank you!
  24. craftingmom

    Chapter 6

    At least he's free of Barrett for now...
  25. craftingmom

    Chapter 6

    Thank you!
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