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I really wasn't expecting a laugh there, and I think that's what made me laugh even harder . That's one of the best lines yet, and with how good this story is, that's saying something. No time for a real review, but thanks for writing! Drunk Alex is really cute, and Ysabel is one of my favorite characters no matter what mood she's in . Amazing chapter, probably my favorite yet
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Will wants to get famous - for Teddy? That makes him a way better person than I'd thought If his goal is really just to be with Teddy, then he had no personal reason not to stay at the camp and live happily with Teddy, so he's doing all this because it's right, and not for lust of fame . That also makes me wonder what 'rules' the city has in place against Teddy and Will being together - some kind of breeding program for betas, a prejudice against gammas, or homophobia? I doubt Will would care if people just didn't like it, and Teddy would probably be OK, so it must be more than a social stigma. Can't wait to find out!
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Policeman Channels Inner Diva With "Shake It Off"
faxity replied to methodwriter85's topic in The Lounge
That's what I meant in that context, 'killing' is a good thing -
Falay Falls, I thought. I have to admit, it does look intimidating. The waterfall was huge, far bigger than it had ever looked before. It was the same amount of water, but spread across the cliff like this it was easier to see just how much that was. I’m coming, Erin! I stabbed my fingers into the rock one last time, the magic shell I’d created around them piercing easily through, and grabbed the edge of the cliff. I pulled myself up onto the grass and lay there for a minute, trying to cat
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Awesome, that turned out really well for Alex - except that now Carlin thinks he's insane . Anyway, hopefully when you see this you'll have had an easy plane ride, and you'll have an awesome trip ahead of you!
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Carlin mentioned a 'job' maybe he is someone important in Tomacian society, that would explain the name . Then again, maybe it was just an expression, and I'm reading too much into it can't wait to see which! I loved the bit with Luca, he's got more determination in him than I'd thought! good for him, I can't wait to see how he pulls this off - or doesn't, it doesn't seem like he's thought it through much . Awesome chapter, and thanks for the two chapter day!
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Wow, what an amazing ending I love that the epilogue wasn't too long after, seeing Avery during the healing process was far more touching than seeing him fully OK would have been . I'm so glad he has Matt there for him, not only does he deserve someone like that, I think he needs him. Absolutely beautiful story, as usual I'm sad to see it ending, but at least I'll get a little breather before I have to say bye to Damien and Kay too
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A New "GFD" Chapter Is Available...
faxity replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
there's more? **pinches self** Awesome! -
Another chapter! Yay! Thanks so much, this one was amazing I loved the (paraphrasing) "sorry about Strings, he's high-strung" part .
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Wow, that was even more badass than I hoped! When Alex was on the Tomacian side, I thought he'd have to make Nabius lose, which probably wouldn't have people too happy . It was an awesome twist, and I liked how Mortisse never got to collect his bets The part with Luca was sweet! He's a really cool character, I'm glad you decided not to kill him off so quickly . I wonder what'll happen to him when Alex brings down Meko after how accustomed to this life he seems to have gotten, it'll be interesting to watch him have to deal with change Thanks for writing, you've made a really good story so far!
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Policeman Channels Inner Diva With "Shake It Off"
faxity replied to methodwriter85's topic in The Lounge
It's always fun to see people who can have fun with their jobs, especially policemen that being said, someone needs to report that as police brutality, 'cause he's totally killing those moves -
what an enthralling chapter! I couldn't stop reading, and I'm glad of it! Matt's POV being included was awesome, it added that much more to an already amazing scene... and getting to see everyone getting back at Carl was nice . I'm still way too excited to write any sort of actual review, so I'll just say that it was flawless and I absolutely loved it and leave it at that
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Warm hands on my bare chest, pulling me back against a solid body behind me. Lips met my ear, and one of the hands found a nipple as the other rubbed over my stomach slowly. I threw my head back, moaning, and the lips kissed my neck just beneath my jaw. I reached behind me, my hands slipping beneath shorts, and squeezed muscular cheeks, pulling closer. A low, sensual growl rumbled from the strong chest against my back, and I gasped as I was pressed forward and bent over my bed, his chest hot aga
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Thanks! I'm glad you like it, and sorry about the terrible estimate I gave on your last review (when I said the posting would be slowing down ). I didn't think I'd be posting this story just yet, and I didn't expect how much of The World Beyond the Mirror I'd get done Thanks for reviewing!
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don't worry, that's the last 'explicit' baking scene up to where I'm writing now - chapter 6 or something, I don't really remember (I'm writing too many stories to keep track of them all ). From here on out it should be a little more interesting Thanks!
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When I walked back into my house, still residually happy from ten minutes ago, I saw Tim at the table with a box of pizza in front of him. “Hey,” I said, flopping down on the chair and folding my legs underneath me. “What type did you get?” “Hawaiian,” he said, giving me a smile. “I know it’s your favorite.” “Thanks,” I said, putting the two bags on the table, taking a slice, and digging in enthusiastically. “You went to the bakery?” Tim asked, confused. I nodded, shrugging a little. “Mom s
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I wonder if we'll get to see more of Luca, he was cool . I hope he takes Alex's advice and gets out of there; his only reason for not doing it was that he's small, so maybe once he sees Alex beat down all the other gladiators he'll take the risk . Still loving the story, I can't wait for more!
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I wonder how much Nelson can get away with before Carl has grounds for a police brutality charge... hopefully a lot! Amazing chapter, by the way I read a lot of action-packed stories and books, and very few of them can even come close to how engaging and heart-pounding this chapter was - and that's not even mentioning the sweet moments between Avery and Matt
