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Ooh, 'that corner' this is gonna be a fun next chapter! Loved this one, sorry for the short review Thanks for writing!

Thanks! Fiona will be playing a bigger role soon, hopefully Thanks for reviewing!

Nice! It's good they were gentle about it, although I still feel like they took advantage of him. Oh well, if he's enjoying it then no harm was done, although it was still wrong of them to do it. I expected more of a violent reaction from the other soldiers, considering Hani's innocence would make him easy to look down on and forget how dangerous he is. After that intro, I was scared for Hani because I anticipated the soldiers being jealous of him and ganging up on him to make his life hell. I'm happy to be wrong, although those two seemed pretty untrustworthy, so it wouldn't surprise me if they just did this for some easy sex before they started tormenting him. Hopefully I'll be wrong again! I can't believe this is only the third chapter, you've already introduced the characters so well! Amazing job with all of it!

Ooh, since there's no proof to the contrary yet, I'm gonna hope that was a dragon! I wonder what else is out there? probably nothing sentient, because Greaseball managed to survive yet doesn't seem to know much about interaction with other people, and I doubt someone that stinky could stay hidden for long . I'm really happy I started to read this story, it's awesome! I came for the references to radiation particles (or so I thought), and now I guess I'm staying for the characters and plot .Will's a lot more tolerable now, and I genuinely like him I'm worried about Teddy, though, he doesn't seem to be able to handle the outside world well Hopefully he gets used to it soon!

I guess that makes us even, considering how hooked you've got me with 'Snow' . Don't worry, it gets worse lolThanks for reviewing!

That's awesome! It's a beautiful place, huh? Hang in there, it gets worse Thanks for reviewing!

Ooh, I like it! Finally someone said it! I feel like that all the time, reading it here was awesome Anyway, awesome start, can't wait to see more of it! Hopefully it'll be this storyline again? It's really good! Then again, seeing another and getting teased wouldn't be bad either

Hopefully Becca uses her 'vacation' to cool down, and not grow even more resentful of Kier I feel like she's a good person, underneath it all, and she's just stubborn. I really hope she can get over this, 'cause it's doing nothing but straining her marriage. She has a right to feel protective of Sparrow, especially around Kier, but at this point she's just ignoring all the evidence that he's changed. Even if she doesn't believe that he really does love Sparrow, she should be able to see that nothing she says will change Robin's mind, and leave him alone about it. Anyway, loved the chapter, it was so beautifully romantic

Thanks for reviewing, then! Have fun at the beach, if you decide to go!

Thanks! I know the name's weird, but I thought (and still think ) that it suited/suits him . Good to hear you're as attached to him as I am no promises about the ending, but if it doesn't turn out happy we can cry together XDOh, I laughed at 'fax-tastic'

Haha Sawyer seems to love messing with Daryl, it's cute. Hopefully he explains more soon, it's involving Daryl a lot more now so he deserves to know. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Huh, I like the insight into Tallen's life! Speaking of insight and lives, I'm starting to think the thoughts in the middle of conversations are glimpses into other lives. I don't remember if that was obvious before and I just forgot, or if this is the first I've picked up on it, but it seems likely. I can't remember what tie The Butcher had to The Wolf, but I think there was one, so I'll have to reread to find out. It'll be a while before I can, but hopefully things'll become clearer when I do Loved the chapter, as usual! Good luck with writing the next one, and I hope you like your new house!

That answers a few questions, and raises a bunch more . All the animal pictures makes me think there's more shifters than just werewolves, but maybe they're just nature-loving werewolves XD. Oh well, I can't wait to see what's behind the door too tired for guesses at the moment lol. Hopefully you have more fun writing ch 5!

Shit, I wrote a giant review, and then it didn't post oh well, I was fanboying, anyway, so an opportunity to redo it will probably make it less embarrassing Uh oh, not everything's so perfect when you've got a blinding headache! Adam freaking out like that was still surprising, though. He really didn't seem violent at all to me, I would have expected any violence to come from Ste. I guess he'd be pretty scared, after having his heart broken three times already and now falling for Dan so quickly, and the hangover and not getting off last night probably just made it worse, but he'll need to provide better reasons that that, in my opinion. I can't wait to hear his reasons for losing his shit like that, but I'm hoping their first date will be a little more romantic than that I'm dying for ch5 already, I love this story way too much Thanks for writing this beautiful story! It's so addictive, and it's got me hooked. Definitely one of my favorites, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes, if I can survive the wait! This is the type of story I wish I'd found when it was completed, because I'd just stay up all night and finish it in one go . Oh well, I guess I'll be getting acquainted with patience as a virtue . Good luck with your writing!

They seem pretty lucid for how drunk they must be, hopefully they still feel the same in the morning! The way you've written their love is just perfect, I'm struggling to stay out of 'gushing' mode love like this just gets me, and how you wrote their 'sex' (not really XD) scene was incredible! That was honestly one of, if not the, best sex scene I've ever read! I have to go read the next chapter now

Wow, I kinda expected the story to keep getting better, but... wow! That was so sweet! I love the Dan and Adam couple, and I'm glad Dan's found someone more deserving of his attention (I don't mind Ste, but I don't like the idea of him and Dan nearly as much ). Your descriptions only got better in this one, and there was more than one point that had me laughing out loud (only one I remember off the top of my head was 'fancied the fucking pants off him' ) I hope chapter 3 picks up where this one left off, 'cause having it end was excruciating! I guess I'll go find out now Thanks for writing this beautiful story!

Oh wow, finally got time to read this, and I'm glad I did! I'm hooked already; I love the premise, the characters are filling out already, and your writing is awesome! The description of the lake in particular stood out, it really brought the moment to life, but all your descriptions were really good! I like the setting already; the image you've created in my mind is making me wanna go for a swim . Anyway, at the moment I'm torn between wanting to write a review that would properly convey how much I like this story already and reading the next bit, but ch 2 is starting to win out . Anyway, to sum it up, amazing story, totally in love with it so far . Thanks for writing, you're good at it!

Mysterious already, I like it! I wonder when December will come into play, and who he'll be rebelling against! Damien seems like the most likely candidate, unless that's just the name of another month (like Nate being November and Felix being about to become a month). Oh well, I'll have to wait to see, I guess Awesome job on your first story!

Loved the story! It's amazing to see how much your writing has developed, although if I'd read this before 'Redemption's a Bitch' then I wouldn't have thought there was too much room to improve . It was absolutely awesome, and it made me fall in love with the ocean all over again Thanks for writing it!

yep told you I was pathetic thanks! Glad to hear you smiled ...cocoa

This is probably my favorite song ever, it's just so good! I can't decide if it's happy or sad, uplifting or depressing either way, it's amazing Almost anything by Of Monsters and Men is good, but this is their best by far (followed by 'Six Weeks' and 'Little Talks')

Happy birthday Peter!

Haha thanks! Surprised?

Huh, starting to mistrust their government now, perpetuating a lie so people become reliant on them is something I could see happening. I wonder why Greaseball thinks people would be looking for him, that points to him being interesting . It's starting to look like Will and Teddy are gonna be finding more than they expect/are looking for can't wait!

Aww, Hani's so cute! This story's quickly getting even better