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  1. flesco

    Chapter 11

    Me too! 🤣
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    Chapter 12

    Another outstanding chapter! Drew and Amar’s Lunch was revealing yet frustrating. There’s definitely something going on that involves Amara, possibly Ben. Drew definitely needing to find out about what’s going on with Amara. I suspect that once Amara has built up enough trust in Drew, he will let go with whatever is bothering him. That should help him and Aria to move forward with their lives. Your ominous statements about upcoming chapters doesn’t bode well for the boys. I sincerely hope that there will be some hope that they will get through and that they might possibly have a chance at a happier future. I know that you’ll have your fun with us before that point. Just leave a glimmer of hope for them please. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 11

    Outstanding chapter! The panic attack brought on by “twatopotomas” was handled expertly by Drew, Alicia appears to be a little more caring (We’ll have to wait and see). The envelope arriving just makes things more complicated for Drew, clearly there’s someone inside the family or support personnel who is deeply involved and sharing information. My guess is that there are several moles involved and a mastermind pulling the strings who hasn’t tipped their hand yet. Amara seems to slowly be trusting Drew. Aria needs counseling that “twatopotomas” can’t get her hands on! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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    Chapter 11

    Amazing chapter! The relationship between Milan and Rory is threatening Rory’s relationship with the pack. He’s so overwhelmed that he’s not hiding his emotions and feelings for the human. He’s also making Milan nervous about how intense he’s being. He really needs to take a step back and proceed slowly and carefully before he destroys any possible future with his mate. Rowen is dangerous but may be like Rory, overly intense. I really like Jack. Going to Milan’s house after school could blow up in Rory’s face. First love and the hormones, emotional stresses and anxiety is really difficult to manage and is most likely more difficult for werewolves. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 16

    Simply Amazing! This was a spectacular chapter in an exciting and inspiring story. Thank you so much! I really appreciate the effort you put into the story! I really hope that there’s a sequel planned. It would be cruel to let these amazing characters disappear. 😃❤️
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    Chapter 9

    Great chapter! The relationship between Rory and Milan is so cute! Rory is headstrong and impetuous, Milan seems more intellectual and pragmatic, they say opposites attract one another. Kiyo was very abrupt and rude to Rory. His new treatment hopefully will get the results they’re looking for. Kiyo’s new secret lab seems a bit out of the ordinary for treating his son’s illness. This secrecy and security would be more appropriate for biohazard or a biological weapons research laboratory. The people of the town seem pleasant, but deeply divided. There’s a major upheaval coming. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 8

    A simply amazing chapter! Milan is just beginning to feel the devotion of his new found friend Rory. He’s as attracted to Rory as Rory is to Milan. These young men are embarking on a wonderful journey of discovery. I’m loving this story and very much looking forward to seeing how the story and characters develop. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 7

    Excellent chapter! Rory has it bad! A lovesick werewolf who wants nothing more than to be with his mate Milan. The Alpha seems much more supportive than I thought. Milan stayed home on New Years Day due to his continuing illness. It was very nice of the Beta’s wife to give him the pie to take as a welcome to town gift. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 9

    Outstanding chapter! There’s a saboteur loose in the base? What’s there to gain from this fire in the bio labs? Is there a traitor amongst the children? Alex and his Senior team now have to become a 24\7 operation. The security and command centers need to be manned at all times. Alex needs to question the A.I. about the virus and lab fire. She monitors the base at all times. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 9

    Excellent chapter! Aria and Amara are amazing kids who’ve been dealt selfish and monsterous parents. Now that Drew’s been brought into the situation and had them confirmed by the business manager, hopefully he can help the boys with their abandonment and emotional issues while guiding them through until they are of age to control their own lives. He’s definitely got his work cut out for him. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 30

    Excellent chapter! The fact that Dylan walked into another trap, but was successful in his mission despite being critically injured. The action, drama and suspense in this chapter was intense but very enjoyable. The cliffhanger was a nice touch, however we know that he’ll survive. My guess would be the IDF eliminating the snipers to allow the medivac helicopter to take off safely, and to help secure the location until the armored infantry can arrive. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  12. Thank you for another amazing chapter! The revelations between Dylan and Prime Minister Sharone were fascinating, the level of spying by the Israeli’s is shocking. The CIA are clearly holding information back from all interested parties. They could be mixed up in all of the usages of the gifted around the world. There’s almost no controls over how they operate and extremely little oversight. They’ve got full knowledge of the program and haven’t informed me President. I’m thinking that he’ll want answers as to why they’ve held back.The death of another circle member has shown Dylan that he’s not hated by the members. The new Prime Minister is extremely knowledgeable about the people who were born through the fertility program, he’s not made any demands at this point, however he could at any time if he doesn’t get what he wants. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 6

    I hope that you’re fully recovered from your hospitalization and are doing well. Amazing chapter! The excitement and fears were expressed beautifully, the emotional turmoil is building up but the hopefulness of a young seldom trusting child is there. I’m certain that his special wish will be coming true. Jack and Maggie will make all of the arrangements necessary for his gift to be delivered. If you keep writing chapters like this you should consider buying stock in tissue manufacturing companies! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
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    Chapter 28

    Amazing chapter! The negotiations went very well except for the Ayatollah learning of Dylan’s unique abilities. The threat that was given is goiter to create headaches for the administration. The assassination of the Israeli Prime Minister has caused Dylan and his staff to go directly to Israel. The order by the President to track and kill the gifted causing problems around the world, no matter the body count is a new challenge for Dylan. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    We Need a Hero

    Outstanding chapter! I’m glad that Nick is home and on the mend. His forever family is really making him feel loved. Noah has got to be the greatest brother on the planet! His boyfriend Billy is really devoted to him also. The meeting with the CPS caseworker was really amazing, there are too few that are as supportive and caring as Mrs. Rodriguez. Her advice about being a hero was inspiring. The potential new boyfriend Liam for Noah is hopefully the right person. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    The Opening Act

    Outstanding chapter! The negotiations appear to be going well with the Ayatollah, Dylan is holding his own while being charming, tactful and brutally honest. He’s keeping his emotions controlled and has impressed the Ayatollah. Hopefully the prayer service will be successful and the 2nd round of negotiations will produce positive results for all interested parties. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  17. Excellent chapter! The reporters were being very harsh with Dylan during his meet and greet. The networks are just as anti-government now as before the crisis. Dylan’s conversation with them seemed to have diminished their distrust and anger. The car bombing and loss of two of the circle were very hard for Dylan, he felt them dying and their true feelings about him and the bonding were revealed. He was shocked and angry with himself for his actions. Fortunately Brian and Paul were able to make him understand that the rest of his circle does not feel like that, they’re grateful for the opportunities that they’ve been given. The Ayatollah is in for a shock now that Dylan and the US are prepared for the next step in the process. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 29

    Great chapter! It’s nice to see that Troy isn’t suffering from the school shooting. Adam seems to be becoming quite adept at baking. The relationship between Adam and Mrs C is developing quite well. The screening of Love, Simon went very well and it was inspiring that Mr. Edgars was able to attend with his partner of 20 years. The ovation he received was touching and he’ll be missed during his recovery. Hopefully there will be a period of calm. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  19. Great chapter! Getting to see how Dylan manages the varying personalities of his circle to manage interpersonal rivalries and keep them all happy with each other is very nice. Jennifer is more headstrong than Alan, and is more suspicious of what’s going on. The crisis that they’re flying into is very dangerous and could have very long term effects on the entire globe. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    The Time Between

    Outstanding chapter! Dylan and his circle came through all of the crises with their heads held high. He and Henry graduated with honors from their Ivy League university’s. They helped get a special school set up for the gifted children they’d found where they would be safe and taught ethical behaviors. The United States was returned to civilian control and things were running smoothly. Two years after the nuclear attacks a new crisis is beginning and the Special Ambassadors were dispatched. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  21. Excellent chapter! Now that the cats out of the bag with the top ranking military leadership, they seem to be accepting so far. The President was understandably upset with Dylan over the entire assault on the plane. The fact that Dylan was able to successfully escape captivity and free the hostages as well as eliminating the leadership of the rogue State of Utah was enough to allow the President and military leadership to develop a counterpoint and allowing the state of Utah back into the union. They’ve divided the provisioal government between the church leaders and the secular civilian leadership in even numbers as well as a federal mediator to break any ties. The appointment of Dylan as federal mediator is problematic for him since he wants to rest and recover. The reporter should be left in Utah to fend for himself. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 9

    Excellent chapter! The friendship is very nearly deveped, they’re revealing more of themselves wth each letter. This letter has opened a unique opportunity for both boys to air their feelings about being gay thanks to the “Love, Simon” reference. If this goes well for each of them then I think they’ll be ready for the face to face meeting ! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 8

    Outstanding chapter! The complex is amazing and. They seem to be working together more now. Amanda needs an attitude adjustment. The wrist computer is interesting and the A.I. Is monitoring the entire complex plus externally as well. Once Alex gets comfortable with his position she should be able to assist and advise. Alex told Toby that he’s not interested in anything romantic, now the air has been cleared and Alex is free to pursue Nate. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 3

    Excellent chapter! The family moved to a town that is home to a pack of werewolves. This should prove to be interesting, the son who’s sick and the son of the alpha, both of whom are gay, what could possibly go wrong? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 15

    Amazing ending to an amazing story! I’m happy that Devon is getting the counseling he needs and that his family is very supportive. Welcome Nathan who appears to be just exactly what he needs. Thank you for this story! 😃❤️
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