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What's next? -- After Spirit of Fire
Scary replied to Stellar's topic in Stellar's Fan Club's Topics
I never managed to care about the characters in Spirit of Fire (at least the main character and his long haired dragon "friend") and stopped reading it half way through for that reason. Instead I reread the Hidden Sunlight series, so I would Definitely like to see that continued (and concluded). I hope I am not alone here. I guess I would also read something else entirely from you, but it would be a bummer to have to wait another couple of years for the conclusion of the Hidden Sunlight series. -
Do people actually go to the restroom out of all places to eat lunch alone?!
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Well if you remember, in the first chapter Asher said "Kenan is a good name. At least it's not a pun" implying that his own name is a pun. ;D
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You have a really funny style! Nick may be a bit too cynical over all, but he sure has a way with words. looking forward to reading more of this.
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Great chapter, although a little sad at times. I just want to say that, even though I know that you don't have to mention every little detail when describing events, I was extremely bugged by the fact that Jack never pulled his shorts back up before Tracy's mom came into the room. How did she not notice that?!😅
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Chapter 123 One Big Horrible Mess
Scary commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 123 One Big Horrible Mess
Overall an extremely good and satisfying chapter. Don made his move, but it wasn't as effective as he might have hoped. Sue finally grew a pair of balls, and the siblings are still supporting Robbie. I am also happy to hear that the damage Alex has done might not be so permanent after all, and I can't wait to see Conner again. Literally the only bad thing about these chapters is the nagging fear while reading that the next paragraph might already be the last in this update, because with this story time really flies. Thank you so much Dodger! 😚 -
It's amazing how much more intense this story has become over the last few chapters. And it is a good thing the upload schedule has tightened to match. You really can't let us hanging for long with this kind of climax! I mean, I am pretty certain that Tyson will be fine, after all he has worked so long and hard to get himself into a better place mentally and even deviced this ingenious plan to change his life for the better. No, I just want to see Chase get what he deserves, and maybe a little reunion with a certain Russian boy as an extra in the end. 😄
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Chapter 120 I Never Claimed to be an Angel
Scary commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 120 I Never Claimed to be an Angel
I've been waiting for the next chapter of Robbie's adventures for weeks, but I have to say, now that it's there, it was definitely worth the wait. I don't know how you do it Dodger but the pacing just always feels right. Only thing that bothers me while reading is the feeling of "oh no the chapter is gonna end soon and then I'll have to wait again to know how it goes on". But I guess you can't do anything about that. Even if you write faster I am just gonna read more and I like the excellent quality as it is so please keep it up! Thanks for this awesome story! 😚 -
A nice, heart warming story that can easily be read in one sitting. The setting is nothing new for gay high school stories, but Dodger manages to breathe life into the characters and make it all feel special, but yet real. Definitely worth reading!
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A lovely update, and the ending doesn't feel abrupt either. This chapter really warmed my heart, good job!
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I fully agree with Timothy. The way the story is written makes Richie's emotions seem completely justified and realistic to me. If I was in his position, I would probably have acted differently, but people a re different, and I think it is perfectly understandable to act the way Richie does. The people around him, especially his father, don't seem to understand that he needs space and time, and honestly, expecting a teenager to behave in a certain way when his mother just died is plain stupid. Mr. Furgison is just getting what he set himself up for. I also don't share the worry that some readers have about Wade. He might become a bad influence by putting the wrong ideas for how to cope with his problems into Richies mind, but Richie can already think for himself and it is very much possible that he will treasure the memory of that night with Wade as being with someone who genually wanted to help him when he was griefing. Oh well, I really want to know how the story continues, and if there will be a happy end for Richie after all.
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Chapter 117 The Happy Clappers
Scary commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 117 The Happy Clappers
Ich bin beeindruckt, dass du der Geschichte so gut folgen kannst, obwohl du Übersetzungssoftware benutzt. In den Zitaten scheint das meiste richtig übersetzt zu sein, aber manchmal scheinen doch z.B. Verneinungen verloren zu gehen. Da musst du ja richtig mitdenken um zu verstehen, was gemeint ist, und merken, wo wahrscheinlich ein Übersetzungsfehler gemacht wurde. @Dodger don't really know why, but I liked this chapter more than the past few. Maybe because Sue seems to finally be growing a backbone, or because there was some positivity in the form of Rory's visit and Robbie's humor. Or because Robbie has talked to Alex, which was probably necessary in order for the mental wound that Alex's assault has left him with to start healing. -
Wow this was a really fun little mystery story! Well written and kept me guessing until the end. Would be cool to read more like this from you.
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Finally, two things happened that I was really waiting for. 1. They told a responsible adult. 2. Woody finally found himself a gay boy who isn't all about sex, but who will also kiss him and probably later on even love him.😁
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Ham, Cheese and Tomato (With Mayonnaise)
Scary commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Ham, Cheese and Tomato (With Mayonnaise)
Wow, that last scene makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. It's a shame we didn't get to see Vladi in this chapter, but his mom kind of made up for it. Can't wait for the next chapter!❤️ -
Most of the blackmail attempts in stories I read, this one included, are pathetic. Why does Woody even feel threatened? If Brandon had threatened him with a video that shows Woody naked and clearly identifies him via his face, it would be different, but like this, everybody would only think Brandon for a weirdo, showing pics of some gay porn around. Woody clearly has the stronger hand here, he just doesn't realize it. I am just glad his fear didn't make him do some things he would seriously regret and suffer from later. This is a great story Ronyx, as usual.
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You've dropped a few hints pointing towards Bidad being Woody's biology teacher, Mr. Dewberry, like describing his age when Woody meets him at the church, mentioning him quite often for a side character, and bringing him back to our mind with the biology assignment in this chapter. So my guess is that he's the mysterious Bidad.
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Chapter 111 Private Tuition
Scary commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 111 Private Tuition
Very nice chapter. I think you gave as the best possible while still realistic outcome regarding Rory. I imagine coming up with the exact wording for that conversation must have been difficult. Yet I think you handled it perfectly. I also appreciate the very dependable upload schedule, most of my favorite stories have either finished or the author apparently decided to take a break in recent months, which leaves me kinda starved by now. But you are feeding me regularly, and seeing a new chapter of this in my notifications always makes my day. -
Wow I had totally forgotten that Mikom was actually still alive. I reread this story thinking she was dead and even in the beginning I thought "Nah, ya gonna die soon anyway, old lady." Though, as things are currently looking, prospects are that she will "die again" pretty soon, but this time for real. I honestly don't know how you intend to get humanity out of this mess in one, not-sharpling-sized piece, Stellar. Well, I am excited to find out, hopefully in the not too distant future. Love you for this story either way, though. 💓
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I don't really understand why Aiden would rather walk through half the town than just ring the doorbell of the first house in the neighborhood and ask them to call the police. Why do people never call the police in this kind of story?
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All the drama aside, the link to the map of Aurum doesn't work anymore. It would be nice if you could fix that, Stellar.
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I had somehow taken Stellar for a nice person, but rereading this, the only reason I can think of why he didn't loose his head the first time I read this was because I was too occupied with reading the next chapter back then. How can you leave people with a chapter like this? And it's Mira out of all people/ angels! The only way I can think of for you to make up for this is by posting book 3 of the series soon. 😡 No seriously, I usually love you for what you have given to us with Shay's and Mira's story, but you can really be cruel to your readers sometimes. 😕
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Chapter 104 The End of the Rainbow
Scary commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 104 The End of the Rainbow
I think you did an excellent job narrating the downfall of this relationship. It doesn't feel rushed, the signs were there, neither side was willing to compromise anymore, and finally one little argument blew up way more than it would have if they were still loving each other. It felt very real. Now I am excited to see the beginnings of a new era. There are so many opportunities for Robbie, after he gets over the pain of loosing his first real boyfriend. I doubt he is going to choose Alex, though, since that guy can't be trusted after he tried to make Nathan cheat on Robbie. But there is still a phone number from a certain shy kid sitting deep inside Robbie's pockets, as well as the newly introduced boy from the countryside. I hope the next chapter comes out soon! -
I am still rooting for Robbie and Nathan, so I don't really like how thinks are currently going. Alex is more just more exciting for Robbie at the moment because he is not his boyfriend. He shouldn't give up what he has with Nathan for that. Also, to contribute to b that little survey, I am right handed but some things I can only do properly with my left hand, like wiping my butt or wanking. So I guess I fall in neither of Robbie's categories.
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Not much to say here, a really short chapter. Just one small pOint of critique: it sounds like joshua is speaking in English to his mother on the phone, which is highly unlikely. Since German is kind of similar to Dutch, I suppose Adam would be able to guess what it's about, but it should be presented differently then imo. Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter!
