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    Chapter 10

    drpaladin commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter 10

    The unusually low tides are a locus of power and time. It is also the meaning of the glyph with the wavy lines. The question is how does Christopher avoid a bad consequence when all he gets are vague warnings?
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    Alistair is much weaker than it seems. He lost his own muscle with Denton and relies on Levasque. Alistair who sees everyone as pawns is a pawn himself to Levasque.
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    Chapter 21

    drpaladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 21

    Homegraund advantage.
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    Chapter 21

    drpaladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 21

    I wondered when Bartholemew would turn up. He is one of Andy's greatest strengths. There is fierce loyalty and love there which Esca cannot get from anyone.
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    For once Ben's ecosystem is adapting to him rather than him bending before it.
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    Merrick will be livid. He has no clue all his secret plots have been exposed. Oh Alistair, sucks to be you.
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    Reconciliation requires some type of difficulty taking place between parties first.
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    Chapter 21

    drpaladin commented on Painawakened's story chapter in Chapter 21

    Pause or paws?
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    Anyone else feel the urge to drag Rachel to the toilet for some swirly waterboarding?
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    Chapter 9

    drpaladin commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter 9

    The fragments are accumulating and are too solid to dismiss. The flashes of recall are too vivid and detailed to be dreamed or imagined. He is realizing these are real memories of a terrifying, distant past. It was painful then and now.
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    Not yet. Not yet means there will be a later and l aters are worth the wait.
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    Chapter 20

    drpaladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 20

    I don't know which is worse, the absurd modern house or the cherry pipe tobacco. Who smokes that cough syrup flavored crap? Declan eviscerated Esca's threat masterfully and then conquered Andy with the leather jacket. I haven't seen one of those ancient cameras in decades. But I loved Ronan's description of it filming in potato.
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    Stability often becomes a problem as we age.
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    Alistair is a sociopathic monster who sees the entire world only in black and white transactional terms. The only thing which matters is the execution of his will.
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    My memory of the lines wasn't bad at all.
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    Chapter 21

    drpaladin commented on Painawakened's story chapter in Chapter 21

    Austin's history makes him the perfect Alpha. He will do anything necessary to protect his pack, even to laying down his life.
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    Chapter 19

    drpaladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 19

    When Esca forcibly separated them by moving h Andy to his house.
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    Really what they need is a family counselor and intervention therapy. Though it'll deliver the same hard truths Julian delivered. Nothing is wrong with Mason a stint in the Marines won't fix. God, what selfish people.
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    Chapter 8

    drpaladin commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter 8

    "Because knowing is not always a kindness." The same type of caution as Vale. I see Christopher has forgotten Marco said earlier he has never been to this town before.
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    That is exactly why Vera said nothing.
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    If this situation was put before any group of unbiased people, they would say the same thing Julian did. It's true. Julian can't lie, and interestingly no one argued it wasn't true. The truth hurts. Of course, Ben actually holds ALL the power here. All he has to say is loze my number and forget my address. BAM!
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    I'm sure he's frozen some sperm. Narcissistic bastard.
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    Wouldn't a pillow over the face while he sleeps be more effecrive?
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    "Hold me closer, closer." "If I hold you any closer, I'll be behind you." Real closeness.
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    Chapter 19

    drpaladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 19

    "I am so screwed." Isn't that the idea?
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