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  1. Ben's family treats him like a tool, but one they don't appreciate. It's like one they use and then leave out in the rain to rust. On his first day Julian is already mapping the family dysfunction. Oh, are they gonna hate him.
  2. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    The unlikely Ronan becomes the hero of the Moot by guiding Lucas through his first shift. Then he got Pomeranian humped like a decorative pillow. He'll be trailing fluff for a week.
  3. Akk... Retrain your autocorrect.
  4. He SAT his ground.
  5. drpaladin

    Chapter 7

  6. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    Christopher is feeling the draw of the small village where he lives. It's part of him and he can't explain it. He begins having brief flashbacks of sounds, smells, and sights he has never experienced himself. Fascinated by the past, he teaches history at the local school. He is one of those rare ones who can rise beyond the pedantic rote of dry dates and facts and interest his students in a living past. He feels a peculiar familiarity with a stranger. Adrian makes cryptic, but spot on comments about Christopher. We are traveling along with Christopher as he has his enigmatic journey. How does Adrian know so much while Christopher retain so little of his past life?
  7. drpaladin

    Prologue

    I do have some doubts Druids were so puritanical.
  8. drpaladin

    Prologue

    A fascinating beginning with a curse and promise of unending chances or judgement.
  9. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

  10. Julian pegged it perfectly. Mason is like an overgrown child. Honestly, I'm surprised Ben had the backbone to make Mason move out.
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    Operation Capri Sun played out like the Marx Brothers meet the Keystone Cops.
  12. Confidence is generally a good trait to have, but you wouldn't want to be known as a confidence man.
  13. Speed lawyering. A pass or hard fail test. Partner level work on a pro Bono case. It makes for a spectacular win. Peter is still trying to repair the Will/Andrew dynamic. Marcus is a real wolf in sheep's clothing. The trap is working far too well.
  14. If in fact Mason gets this proverbial job, how will he get there? More rides from Ben?
  15. Evidently, and wisely, far away.
  16. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    Maybe just FLEA
  17. Most importantly Theo has been promised Whiteflame will be reborn.
  18. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    Oh my! This is too rich. They have SO misread the room.
  19. "I sent one of mine to help you. A feather from my frock, a star from my sky, a kiss from the Sun, and he was born.” Jack. A child of the Moon. So much more than human.
  20. Nah. Just a quici twist, and the fun. Everyone seeing Mason will say U.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 10

    They are toying with them and leveraging the structure of the system against them. But that can work both ways.
  22. I like that Julian already sees what Ben needs.
  23. More accurately, Mason is a user.
  24. It's probably not in his programming to pee on Mason's leg.
  25. drpaladin

    Chapter 10

    This chapter warped my mind
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