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Marco is trying to protect Christopher from a catastrophic collision with his previous life. What would happen if he's not eased into it?
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Chapter Eight - Julian's POV
drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Eight - Julian's POV
Julian is incrementally reducing Ben's stress by managing the household. It's fully within his configuration. Rachel was trying to lawyer her position with Julian, implying because it's always been this way you can't come in and change it. This entire family dynamic will require Julian building Ben a spine so he can say no without feeling guilty. -
Andy should have used the rolled up newspaper across the muzzle method.
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continuity - Word of the Day - Thu Aug 6, 2026
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
In an encounter with downed power lines, avoiding continuity will save your life. -
Chapter 16: The Prodigal’s Journey
drpaladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 16: The Prodigal’s Journey
Sometimes you can't stop a cataclysm even when you see it coming. -
Chapter Seven - Ben's POV
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One of those New Clear Fuchsia thingys. -
Chapter Seven - Ben's POV
drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Seven - Ben's POV
Good question. No mention of a charging station. -
Then there's that fearsome rabbit.
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Anne was always crap at counting.
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It does seem absurdly small
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This pull is not something either one of them can Ignore or walk away from. Marco is just as trapped
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Chapter Seven - Ben's POV
drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Seven - Ben's POV
No, I won't buy the boots. I've sold your accumulated debt to Vito the loanshark. I strongly suggest you figure out a payment plan. -
Chapter Seven - Ben's POV
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Her deal is guilt trip -
Chapter Seven - Ben's POV
drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Seven - Ben's POV
Quesadilla is basically Mexican pizza -
It also depends on the extremely unlikely event of the research bearing success.
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Which would be a moot point if someone else snapped up controlling interest.
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Lucas is a fluffy pseudo-Alpha.
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So hunters have sniper rifles. Tech works both ways. If investors in the corporation find out the bigwigs believe in vampires, the stock would crater overnight.
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Without growth, barbers and landscapers would go broke.
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Chapter 15: The Writing on the Wall
drpaladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Writing on the Wall
Darius is having a crisis of conscience. Tanaka was shocked and he's never phased. -
And make yellow snow.
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Chapter 14: Thirty Pieces of Silver
drpaladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: Thirty Pieces of Silver
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harmony - Word of the Day - Tue Aug 4, 2026
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Successful musical trios, like the Bee Gees, are masters of three part harmony. -
The terrifying maelstrom of familiarity and conflicting emotions is overwhelming Christopher. At first, the assumption was Adrian was his reincarnated lover, but he is another puzzle. Perhaps one who knows the legend and believes. Marco. Of course he would be Italian and irresistibly drawn back to this place. And he remembers more than Christopher does yet.
