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Chapter 13: The Mote and the Beam
drpaladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Mote and the Beam
Speed lawyering. A pass or hard fail test. Partner level work on a pro Bono case. It makes for a spectacular win. Peter is still trying to repair the Will/Andrew dynamic. Marcus is a real wolf in sheep's clothing. The trap is working far too well. -
Chapter Four - Julian's POV
drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Four - Julian's POV
If in fact Mason gets this proverbial job, how will he get there? More rides from Ben? -
Chapter Four - Julian's POV
drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Four - Julian's POV
Evidently, and wisely, far away. -
Maybe just FLEA
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Most importantly Theo has been promised Whiteflame will be reborn.
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Oh my! This is too rich. They have SO misread the room.
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"I sent one of mine to help you. A feather from my frock, a star from my sky, a kiss from the Sun, and he was born.” Jack. A child of the Moon. So much more than human.
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Chapter Four - Julian's POV
drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Four - Julian's POV
Nah. Just a quici twist, and the fun. Everyone seeing Mason will say U. -
They are toying with them and leveraging the structure of the system against them. But that can work both ways.
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Chapter Four - Julian's POV
drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Four - Julian's POV
I like that Julian already sees what Ben needs. -
Chapter Four - Julian's POV
drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Four - Julian's POV
More accurately, Mason is a user. -
Chapter Four - Julian's POV
drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Four - Julian's POV
It's probably not in his programming to pee on Mason's leg. -
This chapter warped my mind
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Only the absence of the pull of the moon and atmospheric influence could render the seas steady and still.
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Gardeners? Sunday gardeners?
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Everyone has a rope tied to Will. It's a huge burden to always being the responsible one, the one holding things together. Will desperately needed the night of freedom Jared crafted for him. It was a respite and reboot, but not a fix. Not yet.
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I think the infections are incompatible.
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I always felt Eddy and Jake would be a better couple.
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Who he be? Edwina Twilightoes?
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I'd say the errant leg gnawer is more important.
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The question is why hasn't Andy hunted it down?
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Chapter Three - Ben's POV
drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Three - Ben's POV
Maybe Mason is homeless or at least itinerent. -
Chapter Three - Ben's POV
drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Three - Ben's POV
I expect his family to actively try to wreck this new dynamic. -
Chapter Three - Ben's POV
drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Three - Ben's POV
Ben has only seen a photo of Julian and he is already beginning to shape his life around him. Halcyon already knows more about Ben than he told them. -
presence - Word of the Day - Sat Aug 1, 2026
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Cats have the presence to dominate a room.
