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A really strong start! God do I know how it feels , watching the track paramedics work whilst you standby like an idiot , helpless , terrified , furious , sitting in that waiting room when they bring a bag of leathers they had to cut off his body! Then the recovery.
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How does that flour get all the way down there? And he stopped Liam from finding it! Damn that Russian restraint!
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Mine! Part Two Chapter Twenty-eight
deville commented on Cia's story chapter in Mine! Part Two Chapter Twenty-eight
Wow , superlative save, out of the fire and into a rockfall . ... and we're on the edge of our seats for another week with even more questions than answers. Still riveted though. Thank you. -
Derricks attitude is beyond disappointing , particularly in the light of what he knows of and about Will, even Theo's attempt at justification is a letdown. Well .. where there's a Will there's a way , and I have a feeling Will , will eventually allow Derrick to redeem himself. It's in his nature. A sad , complicated and necessary chapter.
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Well Daniel took the billions and millions in his stride, and is right , a man is as good as his word!! Raymond has a solid partner in Daniel. Paul lived up to expectation with his apology . He and Jeff seem to be moving forward again. And now ..,,,, the election .... and the Adams family and friends can take over a town . ( I hope ) .
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Nathan and Bryce should spend a little less time on Liam and possibly grab something by the horn(s) ?
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Mine! Part Two Chapter Twenty-seven
deville commented on Cia's story chapter in Mine! Part Two Chapter Twenty-seven
Well .... damn! The best laid plans of mice and men... when all else fails there's always spur of the moment..... and we'll have to wait a week. I can't wait!! -
Paul certainly is loaded with insecurities , seems Jeff has some too. Miss Julie definitely gave Paul a taste of the bitter consequences , that lack of communication can lead to. Fantastic make up sex.
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Gosh... that was a little out of the left field, but thinking on and reading back in the story the guys have only been in a relationship for a couple of weeks. Sensitivities and miscommunication are bound to occur. I'm certain they are going to talk it out.
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An amazing chapter , which delicately highlights the myriad and complex forms gender identity may consist of in individuals. A chapter filled with insight bravery and compassion.
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Teddy seems to be really invested in Ryder , but Mikes comments are a cause for genuine concern. Seems Teddy has done this before, more than once , and abandoned the "project" when things started to get tough or threaten his popularity, I hope that this is not the case this time as Ryder's life may depend on it and if a Teddy is playing with his emotions , knowing Mike is right, he is beyond cruel, even if he believes this time will be different. I hope it is and that he rides out the storm at Ryder's side. I am enjoying the story . Thank you.
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Absolutely lived up to my Raymond/ Daniel expectations ..... and then some. If Daniel is asleep , well the subconscious doesn't lie and the passion was spent. To my mind his reply has every indication that it is the truth.... but I'll have to wait ( Im) patiently to find out.
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Dating seems like a good start especially now that Liam has seen that he can have faith in what Alek does and says. Not all his friends will be overjoyed , which is understandable considering that they have lived through what his past with Alek did to him. Letting them in and allowing them to express their concerns will play a big part in winning them over. Besides Nathan was originally interested in more than friendship and is probably a little put out over this latest revelation ..
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Now the story is perfect. Thank you.
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Hesitant , you bet! , that doesn't mean that the sex scene was not incredibly hot. It was .... it is .
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Raymond seems to be setting up for an all male household and that he will win the undying loyalty of Larry and Runt when the park home arrives. Hope those were old silk ties because it sure sounded like they were solidly ruined ... all in a good cause of course!
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These guys are really focused and mature with the way they handle school and home responsibilities , I hope that if Seb moves in he fits in rather than upsetting the status quo. I would be riding the police for an answer after all they are there to serve and protect everyone, them being 'cagey' would not sit comfortably with me.
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Liam seems to be so much more comfortable with Alek , the growth in trust was tangible ... the ending. Aaaargh! Was Alek uncomfortable because his relationship with his dad is strained OR because Liam was there and his dad saw him? Please don't keep us hanging too long.
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Will really is an incredible person ,to set off and make contact with a distressed teenager when their home has been desecrated! To destroy , urinate and defecate in someone's home, what type of degenerates would do that?? I hope we learn who was involved and that the amount of community service they are sentenced with lasts well into their adult years!
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Johns quip about sounding like an adult seems to be becoming more truth than jest in this chapter. He has really embraced his responsibility to his students and is solid in his commitment towards them. He and Bobby seem pretty solid too , a little insecurity in the beginning of a relationship is something we all have experienced , at least they are talking about issues and as he says , he does trust him .
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A breathe of fresh air , after the back to back action of Christmas and its aftermath. The serious moments ( joint bank accounts , expensive shopping sprees , feeling out and settling into the ever expanding parameters of their relationship ) are balanced by the tangible feeling of true friendship and love between the guys and their extended family.
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Well Owen came through... as I mentioned earlier , I can be pleasantly surprised. Now all you need to do is surprise me with more Riley , after you have had your summer of fun... please . A truly great story!
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Cut from the same cloth , an apple doesn't fall far from the tree, a leopard doesn't change its spots, like father like son. There are so many truisms of how difficult ( impossible ) it is to change your basic nature. Riley changed because he never knew anything different and as we have seen , is fundamentally a good person. Owen has been surrounded by good people and is still a little shit! I don't hold out hope that he has changed... but can always be pleasantly surprised. What level of callousness motivates a person to sue to prevent an adoption , especially one in which you have no immediate interest, except a moral degeneracy .
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A truly exceptional tale, couldn't put it down. Thank you.
