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Maria certainly is a little heroine! Why so many adults are so dismissive of children and there ability to recall and recount incidents always astounds me! What an idiot! Josh certainly met his match in Maria and now has the whole clan after him and has just lost everything. I had a feeling the whole incident with the older vet was just too tidy... but your introduction of so many other events soon eclipsed that disquiet. Really well written. And now Tom returns and I'm sure it will be with a vengeance.
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Events are definitely moving ahead apace and things are heating up. New blood and new brooms , seems the attack is going to shake up and benefit the whole town. Danny and Raymond... ? Hope Danny doesn't run too fast or too far.
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Paul and Uncle Raymond definitely seem to have a history, yet only Paul has a reaction. Maybe Uncle Raymond's extensive dealings with all manner of people gives him an edge in not overtly reacting . If there are any skeletons in the closet , let's hope they're not malign ones. That Maria casually tumbles the Russian titan is priceless and shows that although it appears she has been raised mainly by Daddy , her confidence has never suffered. I'm never comfortable with firearms and hope that the changes Paul senses are not too drastic or damaging . The investigations seem to be proceeding full steam and are heating up... can't put the story down..... damn!!!!!
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Gosh, I did mean Paul.
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A truly captivating story so far. It's great to meet characters you're already fond of , in a new setting. Jeff , despite all his wealth , is an extraordinarily down to earth man. The ' Adams Family' , in fact all seem to be amazing people , with an eye on their community and extended ' ranch family' . I couldn't be happier than knowing Julie is back in town for a little more 'Twin peaks ' type flavour. A solid relationship is building between Jeff , David and Maria. Dare I hope that it continues?? A solid story , so far... so let's see!!
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A truly captivating story so far. It's great to meet characters you're already fond of , in a new setting. Jeff , despite all his wealth , is an extraordinarily down to earth man. The ' Adams Family' , in fact all seem to be amazing people , with an eye on their community and extended ' ranch family' . I couldn't be happier than knowing Julie is back in town for a little more 'Twin peaks ' type flavour. A solid relationship is building between Jeff , David and Maria. Dare I hope that it continues?? A solid story , so far... so let's see!!
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A really good read so far, I love the easy interaction between the characters , even when they're feeling a little uncomfortable.
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Liam is surrounded by people who care for him and time after time give really solid advice . Although I can empathize with his need to protect himself from further hurt that Alek may cause, he also needs to come to the understanding that his indecision has the potential to cause even greater pain. Elena is right to point out that Alek has made some pretty huge strides in changing his circumstances and that he loves Liam. I don't envy Liam for the position he finds himself in and hope that the decision he makes, is made with his eventual happiness in mind.
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An excellent story! The elements of transformation and ultimately redemption were written with insight and care, albeit with some heartstopping moments. Thank you for s fantastic read.
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An awesome chapter, entrenching the development of a strong family dynamic.
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With everything else , he has himself , absolutely that's going to get him somewhere! The realization that he is needed is fantastic, daunting, on top of everything he is dealing with, but I feel it is another valuable point he will be able use to anchor himself to. Not comfortable with Dom , being so close..not comfortable at all, but Bobby and love are there too, so maybe it can balance out.
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The depths of the reservoir and Jim's subconscious mirror each other. He is drawn to the reservoir at night, usually when his subconscious would have free reign. It is almost as if his fear of the reservoir is a fear of accepting what his mind already knows , and when in the end he accepts the knowledge the future opens up. I keep coming back to the last two chapters, they really are sensitive , thought provoking and enlightening.
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Thank you for a fantastic story. Jim becomes an amazingly complex and strong character. I can't help but feel that the future all his running towards has led to is going to be really something great.
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Well that was abrupt, but ending when all went black is appropriate, I suppose... Although Dom is a bastard, I think I may also be driven slightly over the edge if the person I love, and it appears he does love John, is still clearly enamoured with someone else. Even if it only comes out when his subconscious is given free reign, in fact I think that makes it worse. That said and done I do hope he rains a world of pain down upon Dom. A great chapter. Thank you.
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All's well that ends well. A different but good read. Glad that Jerry and Sam came out of it together.
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A fantastic story. Like the sea and sand meeting... so natural .
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Fantastic story. Amazing group of characters who take friendship , caring and giving each other sheer hell to a completely unheard of level. Thank you for an excellent read.
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Prompt 518 Who gave you the right to read my journal?
deville commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 518 Who gave you the right to read my journal?
No Rob.. only a passing reference to him? Great chapter. It's really great that the boys can talk , communication is the basis for the greatest relationships.,.even when you are sometimes forced by circumstance to ask ! -
Cathartic!! It is good that he got that release , the sex and the emotions afterwards . Maybe some tears are for what he now can have? In a way I feel for Dom, seems he's lost a great deal and realised it way too late. Giving himself up in the manner he does , his surrender(?) , even after all he's done is quiet a shock. Moving and more than a little sad.
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The growth of angry , hurt and , well self- centered John in the initial chapters , to the John who wakes with Bobby is heartening , despite his current trauma. That his PTSD does not surface with a vengeance after the imprisonment and rape and that he can stand to wake with someone close to him , shows that he is making meaningful connections to people around him at last. A really great chapter . Thank you.
