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Chapter 3 - 1.800.273.8255
deville commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 3 - 1.800.273.8255
So we’re given hard , cold insight into Nessay and the events that have forged him, but this chapter creates more questions than answers , so please post quickly to alleviate my suffering . -
Chapter 2 - Your Achey Breaky Nose
deville commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Your Achey Breaky Nose
A really good start. Well , that’s a homecoming Brady won’t forget . -
Setting up such an interesting dynamic. I can’t help but question Klaus’ real motives at this stage. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Loved Jakes hard nosed , blatant honesty. His admission that there was a trigger for his actions .
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As for the garden , so for the soul. Autumn is the time to prepare for the mental/spiritual inertia and introspection of the coming winter months. The garden and the person(al) are intertwined so beautifully , for me, in this poem. Thank you.
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Very powerful and scary.
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These are heartbreaking.
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Beautifully written , but incredibly sad.
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Writer's Toolbox Prompt 1
deville commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Writer's Toolbox Prompt 1
Loved the balance between the two stories , one on beginning , the other on ending . So different , very complimentary . -
Weirdly intriguing, love happens in the strangest of places and situations.
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An extremely touching tribute.
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Makes me want to travel more too.
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What an emotional roller coaster ride , the butterflies in the stomach and then the relief and happiness are still palpable as I write this. Lovely , realistic chapter.
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Chapter 17 Imminent Arrival
deville commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 17 Imminent Arrival
Autumn caught in all its retiring grandeur. -
Another fantastic chapter, each time the imagery and tension subtly. Can't wait for each new post, when it arrives I'm really captivated . Thank you.
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A wonderful chapter, I loved the way the relationships were featured in all their elements from the mundane , the poignant to the sublime.
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A wonderful chapter, I loved the way the relationships were featured in all there elements from the mundane , the poignant to the sublime.
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Beautiful and evocative. Made me feel the slowing , darkening of the season , even though we're entering summer here .
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It seems that Liam taking a little control back after the talk to his parents may just be the catalyst to new experiences. Thank you for the new chapter.
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Loved this , so subtly sets out the Lore!
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So I'm late in reading and posting a comment , the chapter was extremely interesting, a persons esoteric views highlight , for me , a great deal of where that person may be evolving from or towards .Each of the characters have gained some substance from their beliefs . A thought provoking chapter.
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Welcome back, better later than never.
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Fantastic story.
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Dom's handling of Miriam was masterful. I really appreciate how the content of each chapter highlights the title.
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So I read a lot , I'm an insomniac, I have recently read and am reading , enjoyed and am enjoying the following ; Where'd you go Bernadette by Maria Semple, Baking Cakes in Kigali by Gale Parkin, The Ministry of utmost happiness by Arubdhati Roy ( a really difficult but superb read) , The improbability of love by Hannah Rothschild , The elegance of the Hedgehog by Muriel Barbery and finally re reading yet again Terry Pratchett ( when I need a break from all the other books I have going)
