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I love how your mind works, my enemy may become my friend when a worse enemy turns up. Kyle is too sensitive for frontier life however Jim's support will get him through. Will the sudden hostility between Argos and the human military leave Tantalus as a kind of DMZ, a "no-mans" land, might be good for the "Furballs." Will Echo be able to force a treaty of equality in exchange for militarily advantageous information regarding the threat from Argos. The possibilities are tantalising in the extreme. Awesome chapter and I am eagerly awaiting the arrival of the next instalment, very well done. Thank you for sharing your tale.
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"I've Really Fucked This Up, Haven't I?"
Dathi commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in "I've Really Fucked This Up, Haven't I?"
Yes there is no "I" in either team or partners, oops! It is an easy enough thing to forget when one changes from single (effectively single) to being in a relationship but communication can sort out, fairly well, all inter-relationship issues. Very well done and thank you for sharing your tale with us. -
I have just finished the marathon of "Space Pioneer" before tackling this chapter. Awesome writing and I am now eagerly awaiting the next edition in this engaging saga wistfully looking forward to the trials and tribulations of the crew of "Horus." Thank you very much for sharing this tale, very well done.
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Let me guess the last of the "Others" turned off the switch, let's just hope that turning it back on is an easy enough task. Awesome chapter and as always I am left eagerly awaiting the next instalment. Thank you very much for sharing this wonderful story. Very well done.
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Thank you Elder for sharing this very, very, very exciting story. I am again, left eagerly anticipating the arrival of the next chapter. You ability to maintain the level of excitement continuously through each chapter has also kept each chapter fresh, vital and engaging. Mirri's vivid eagerness and Jarra's calm stoicism are excellent balances to each other. Very well done and again thank you.
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Awesome, a stress break, just what the doctor ordered. A chance to get hearts and minds settled on the same page in the same song book. Levity arriving at just the right time to keep it all real, very well done. I am looking forward to the next chapter, thank you for sharing your tale.
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Awesome, the Elder species left some fun toys behind. This is getting even more exciting, I am anticipating the next chapter with eagerness. Thank you for this chapter, very well done.
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Excellent chapter, very well played with Michael helping to speed the acceptance that Kendall needs when dealing with his father. A naughty afternoon break is always a good idea, especially when interpersonal tensions are high. An extraordinary special bonus getting a deposit sum for a house, very nice. Thank you for sharing this excellent tale.
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This is getting exciting I hope that you have a cache of weapon systems available for the "Furballs" to use or something that the "ancients" left that will activate in order to protect the planet and inhabitants from the invaders. Anyway keep writing (fast) and thank you very much for your story.
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Scarily dark poem my man, well constructed, just haunting. One small point last line I think that you want the line to read "Encased in a prison of my tears" this is a small point but there is a different meaning otherwise. Very well done.
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Awesome, now I feel that the fun is about to begin. The "Furballs" I am guessing are about to find their strength and collective power and the Government forces hopefully will get an unpleasant surprise. This just get more and more exciting thank you so very much for sharing this tale with us. Very well done.
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Kid's of the Warrior Caste
Dathi commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in Kid's of the Warrior Caste
Intriguing prologue and calmly balanced first chapter. I am extremely curious how and where this autobiographical beast is going to go. Good luck and be careful of yourself in doing this work. Thank you for sharing this personal tale with us. -
Awesomely well written, brought back lots of memories. It was as if I was right back there waiting and hoping, tension mounting as the minutes drag by and the almost anti-climatic relief when it is over. You captured the emotions very well, I have to say. Thank you very much for sharing this heart wrenching tale with us.
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Having worked in palliative care for many years this brought back many memories, you have covered a severely sensitive area competently and well. The healing within the family dynamic is an extremely powerful event and the effects are usually incredibly profound on all concerned. Very well done, I await, eagerly the arrival of the ensuing chapters. Thank you very much for sharing this tale and you have, in my opinion, handled a very delicate circumstance very well.
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Hmmm! Reminder that when one demands for an answer one should not roil against the new reality, suck it up. Structural modification to function within this otherwise hostile environment is going to be somewhat massive. Digestive tract is going to need modification as well, so that it can cope with the inherent toxins in plant matter that is frequently grazed, as I understand "Furballs" are vegan after all. Awesome chapter, very well written and I eagerly await the next instalment, reminiscent of 19th century publishing where a new chapter was printed weekly in a news paper. Thank you for sharing this increasingly wonderful tale.
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I can see several branches for future stories growing here. Very well written and in your usual engaging and believable style. Well clever, thank you very much for sharing this tale.
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I hope that the temple is not too far away. Very well written as we are become to expect. I am eagerly awaiting the next episode. I will admit to a level of greed in that I want the whole story complete so I can read it in one sitting, so for any burning ears I apologise. I am intrigued as how a the relationship between Kyle and the "Furballs" develops and b the relationship between Kyle and Jim develops, so I am sitting here fuming at you to write the tale and only write the tale! However the realist says take your time get it right while I practise being virtuously patient (Ah crap I want to kill something) Thank you very much for sharing with us your excellent story very well done.
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Chapter 17 Opening a New Deck
Dathi commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 17 Opening a New Deck
Engaging and very well written chapter, family dynamics in my experience are usually minefields. You have managed to masterfully traverse the battle-zone and brought everyone through successfully. I await eagerly the next chapter, thank you very much for sharing you work with us. -
Thank you very much for sharing this wonderful tale. The adventure of Mirri and Jarra is both heart-warming and exciting. Yirgella's system advancements are amazing to read of and the development of full AI personality is spectacularly well written. I am eagerly awaiting the arrival of future chapters. Very well done, thank you again.
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That mother; seriously she needs some humanity beaten into her. The prologue set the tone wonderfully and I am now looking forward to reading the ensuing chapters as this tale unfolds. Thank you for sharing this wonderful tale, very well done.
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I hate cliffhangers! Absolutely awesome chapter, you have not gone through the death bed confession thing just to have them die like that so I am picking that the "furballs" declaration of ownership indicates that they are up to something vital to the survival of our two humans. Thank you very much for this very exciting chapter. Very well done.
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Very well written chapter and thank you for sharing your work with us. I have read all eight chapters in one session and I am excited to see how the story will grow and develop. I feel that there will be several trials and tribulations for all parties involved. Thank you again for this engaging story.
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Zealots, in my opinion, should be executed out of hand. Bullies well there is a special level in hell just for them. Very well written, sickeningly accurate unfortunately and very appropriate for the story. Joshua got off to a rocky start but should manage to create a safe environment for Ezra. Thank you for sharing your story.
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Awesome chapter, very well written. Thank you for sharing you work.
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Time to refurbish the bar front to inch steel plate so that it's bullet proof. Otherwise things seem to be heading in the right direction for all concerned. The group of solicitors sound like a good group to have involved, I can almost see a side line of some low key fund management developing out if this, legal of course. Thank you for another very well written chapter and I am eagerly awaiting the next instalment.
