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Hmmm! Catching fish like that is cheating, sort of, the worry would be are they edible. Another really good strong chapter thank you. Kieran is getting better at adapting to the situation and is able utilize the Opal's power to very good effect. This will only make him stronger and better able to defend against attacks from the Elven folk.
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How unfortunate, panic in the high office, oh dear, how sad, never mind. Well done, another excellent chapter and a strong tactic of attacking the carrier rather than the carried, poor Fetch. I like where this is heading and can envisage a confrontation coming up.
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Awesome chapter again, dumb bigots that sounds about normal. Although Geston needs to be kissed by a shovel several time really, really hard. Practice of the abilities without the Opal, while initially exhausting, will make the practitioner stronger in the overall scheme of things. Thank you for sharing this chapter.
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Awesome chapter again, not that we expected anything less. Ten days of chanting and practice with the artifact will make them all stronger and more able to resist the attempts by the Elven kind to interfere. Chants have been used to strengthen spirits, promote healing and bolster courage for millennia, they continue to be used because they work. Well done and thank you for sharing your tale.
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Good now the main players are back on an equal footing. We wonder what the reaction is going to be from the mongrel court? Another excellent chapter thank you.
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Awesome chapter, more power to the old ones, do not mess with earth magic it will always win. The guys may need to obtain smaller opals and have them empowered by the main artifact as magical wards to prevent further incursions by the Elven royal house, that and a good security system for the house to keep out mundane minions as well. Well done and thank you for sharing your story.
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May I wish many a heavy migraine upon Lord Maynor, interfering old goat! Another excellent chapter, thank you, enjoyable as always. Dathi
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Another awesome chapter, I find the description of some of the First Australian culture and practices very interesting. Thank you for these insights along with the very exciting story, very well done. Dathi
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Another excellent chapter, although I am feeling a vindictive streak appearing because I really want to see Geston get his comeuppance well and truly. Thank you for sharing you story well done mate.
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The Osserians of the Fens
Dathi commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in The Osserians of the Fens
I discovered you story on another site and read the first two chapters there, I was pleased to see you publishing here (I monitor this site very much more frequently). I am thoroughly enjoying this story and am hoping that there is much more to come. Being a Skyrim player I found that the references were easier to understand as I had a point of reference already in my head. These characters are nicely developed and the story line is sound, very well done and thank you for sharing this story. Dathi -
Another good and sound chapter, I mean they cannot all be outstanding and amazing. Laying ground work and stabilizing are important too. Thank you for sharing this story.
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Lime Toothpaste?? Eww! Thanks I will continue with good old porridge with a little milk and berry jam. Another intriguing chapter, thank you.
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Awesome the Far Seer is shining forth again. A thoroughly enjoyable chapter and I am eagerly awaiting future developments. Thank you for sharing your tale, I know that I will enjoy the journey.
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Just one point and it is on the order of preference. The Honourable Deputy Administrator should come first in the address ahead of the Shire President, being as it is a technical regal appointment. Well that is my understanding of that process, however I am prepared to be corrected if wrong. Otherwise I am enjoying this tale immensely. Thank you for sharing. D.
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Okay I'm hooked! This was an excellent start and I am eagerly awaiting future chapters to see how your story develops. Thank you very much for sharing you tale.
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A very interesting start I am keen to see where this develops. Very well done and thank you for sharing your story with us.
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This has me intrigued, sound start and I am looking forward to seeing how you develop this tale. Thank you for sharing and well done so far.
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Fun tale and lots of laughs, just not sure I like being reminded that I remember the song when it first came out. LOL
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A very intriguing start, I am certainly looking forward to seeing where you take this. Thank you for sharing this story.
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Exciting start and I have to say that I am eagerly awaiting future chapters to see how your tale unfolds. Thank you for sharing this tale.
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Thank you for sharing your tale. This is a great start, at a place, altogether, far too many of us are familiar with. I look forward to reading the story as its tale unfolds.
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The start is awesome and leaves you so many possibilities I am hoping to see more of this tale.
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My deepest and most sincere condolences at this time. He will live forever in your heart. Requiescat in pace.
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An excellent chortle invoking start, I am looking forward to reading the continuation of this story. Thank you for sharing your story,
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Act 2 – Prelude to War Part 1
Dathi commented on Brayon's story chapter in Act 2 – Prelude to War Part 1
I am enjoying, very much, your story. Science Fiction is one of my favourite genres. Thank you for sharing this story and I look forward to reading the following chapters as they are posted. Very well done.
