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This Isn't About You, Not Really.
albertnothlit commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in This Isn't About You, Not Really.
Such a wonderfully tense chapter. Even though I wanted to reach over and shake Ryan out of his self-inflicted isolation, I know I'm the very same way so I can understand. 'Don't want to overstay my welcome' - yeah, I've thought that once or twice when actually it would have been healthier, and better, to simply reach out instead of drawing back. I guess the complexities of emotions and relationship interactions are kind of hard for some guys to grasp. Also, I want to know Clayton's secret! It's coming, I can feel it! -
Astute analysis as always
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Aaargh, I know! I got blocked on this one. You're not the only one who's asked for more, and I swear I'll get around to finishing it, hopefully after 'Life Seed' is complete. It sucks to be left hanging but I reached a point where my brain was like, nope, can't go on. Anyway, thanks for reviewing!
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Now I'm real curious as to what's going to happen next!
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Short yet awesome. I already care about the protagonist and, man, did he have some bad luck in the love department. But he's unapologetic and takes things as they come, good and bad, which just feels good to read. And that last paragraph... I don't think I've ever had a birthday present that nice.
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This is so tragic. People who push the boundaries of artistic expression like Mr. Bowie have truly earned their place in history.
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I love these questions because they always give you a whole new perspective on the stories.
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Glad you liked it! I do love happy endings
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Thanks for all your reviews, Timothy! Although everyone hates her, killing the commander would have been something Kyle could never do.
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thanks for reviewing! gah, there's so much stuff I want to write, and so little time... but this one's 2nd part is definitely on the pipeline.
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glad I spooked you!
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lol! furballs are definitely a fan favorite
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lol! furballs are definitely a fan favorite
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Sorry I made you cry, but I'm glad you liked it!
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I'm on the fence on my personal opinion of swans, but they really are regal birds
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Thanks for the awesome review and analysis, AC! It's awesome to see that the stylistic choices I made in tense/person worked as intended
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So sorry for the tears!
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Thanks! I've always believed in hope in spite of all, and this story tries to reflect that in the end.
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Thank you for reviewing!
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Thanks. I tried to convey the beauty of a love that goes on after death.
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winter and sadness seem to go hand in hand in my mind for some reason.
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*blushes*
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Sorry about the tears, Gary, but thank you very much for the review!
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thanks!
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You're welcome, and thanks for reviewing
