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This story sets the scene and provides a good insight into the lives of each of the characters. A tale filled with a lot of drama and excitement, making every moment a surprise. Thanks for the great story! ☺️

The characters draw you in, and you feel like you are a part of the story, being there, watching it all happen, sharing in their joys and sorrows. A wonderful tale, that makes for a really good read! Worked perfectly to brighten my day, especially in these trying times. Thank you! ☺️

I enjoyed reading this story! Thank you! 🙂

I really enjoyed this story, thank you!

I like the way you build up the introduction and suspense in this chapter. It creates great interest and opens up many doors in my mind. I can see that this story has a lot of potential. Looking forward to explore the direction this newly created world will take. Thank you! 😊👍

Thank You for such a wonderful story! I really liked the way your stories flow. It is as if you put your heart into every word. I find it hard to put down the story once I start reading, it totally draws me in. Thank you once again Cynus!

A remarkable story! I loved the different point of view! Thank You!

A truly heart warming story! I can really relate to feeling like summer when I would see that special someone smile, it was like the whole world would stand still just to be lost in he's smile! I am glad that this is the first of the stories written by you that I have read. Wonderfully written, plain and simple yet heart touching! Thank You for taking me back to that bright and lovely sunshine smile!

Happy Birthday!

Welcome Stuart!

Wonderful ideas depicted very creatively! The way you have co-related it all together is amazing!! Was an interesting and enjoyable read! Thank You!

Thanks Aren't cats soo adorable! <3 Your avatar is cooler! xD

Welcome Yumi!

This is one of the best stories I have read on here! Such an interesting, magical and lovely tale. Hope to read the end of this series in my lifetime! Thank You!

I really enjoyed reading this story! Thank You!