Joen

This story sets the scene and provides a good insight into the lives of each of the characters. A tale filled with a lot of drama and excitement, making every moment a surprise. Thanks for the great story! ☺️

The characters draw you in, and you feel like you are a part of the story, being there, watching it all happen, sharing in their joys and sorrows. A wonderful tale, that makes for a really good read! Worked perfectly to brighten my day, especially in these trying times. Thank you! ☺️

I enjoyed reading this story! Thank you! 🙂

I really enjoyed this story, thank you!

I like the way you build up the introduction and suspense in this chapter. It creates great interest and opens up many doors in my mind. I can see that this story has a lot of potential. Looking forward to explore the direction this newly created world will take. Thank you! 😊👍

Thank You for such a wonderful story! I really liked the way your stories flow. It is as if you put your heart into every word. I find it hard to put down the story once I start reading, it totally draws me in. Thank you once again Cynus!

A remarkable story! I loved the different point of view! Thank You!

A truly heart warming story! I can really relate to feeling like summer when I would see that special someone smile, it was like the whole world would stand still just to be lost in he's smile! I am glad that this is the first of the stories written by you that I have read. Wonderfully written, plain and simple yet heart touching! Thank You for taking me back to that bright and lovely sunshine smile!

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Welcome Stuart!

I really enjoyed reading this story, it brought back fond memories to me! Thank You!

Wonderful ideas depicted very creatively! The way you have co-related it all together is amazing!! Was an interesting and enjoyable read! Thank You!