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Rick took to the water to try and clear his brain. I think Rick’s unconscious led him to veer toward Cedarcrest, rather than any predetermined plan. The children were probably too intent on their chase to notice Rick; he definitely has no wish to be discovered. It does seem that he felt obligated to stay in Eagle Lake, and perhaps felt stuck with that. Thanks very much for reading this chapter, and for your great questions.
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Rick set out across the water, enjoying the growing darkness. All the cares of the fading day were left behind. It had been a hot afternoon, but out on the water, it already felt cooler. Weary or not, he never seemed to tire of propelling the heavy wood and canvas craft over the surface of the lake. Canoeing somehow satisfied a part of him. Perhaps it was the rhythmic quality of exercise, or maybe it was the chance to use combinations of muscles he didn't employ during his working hours. W
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Fergus reacts with classic anger when it’s apparent things haven’t gone his way. The results were a problem for him, they affect him and his status. The safety and future of the pack - such as it is - are secondary. And something tells me Granger, though submissive now, is unlikely to remain unswerving in his devotion. Great chapter!
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You’ve hit it exactly. Rick knows Eagle Lake, knows people there, and knows how to live up to expectations in that community. Leaving Heinrich Senior behind would cut himself off from his community and what family he’s got. For now, Rick must dream when he’s not working. Thank you very much for reading, and for your thoughts.
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Visitation and Chained
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Visitation and Chained
The first and second were separate occasions; one didn’t lead to the other, never fear. Thank you for reading these and for letting them spend some time with you. -
Visitation and Chained
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Visitation and Chained
I can see how the sunnier first sonnet cast a warm light to take the chill away from reading the second. The second came from a difficult day and place; the first from a much more pleasant dream. Thank you for your thoughts. -
Visitation and Chained
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Visitation and Chained
Thanks for reading these. -
Visitation and Chained
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Visitation and Chained
Thank you, tim. These came within a few pages of each other in the sketchbook; just a few days separated them. -
Visitation and Chained
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Visitation and Chained
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Visitation Bedevil me, imagination's sprite, paint visions of my love behind my eyes and sound within my ear his joyous cries, or conjure up his scent upon the night. I beg you, spring of sweetest dreams so bright, from aether clothe his spirit in surmise, that he in arms of Morpheus descries such yearning that no distance can disguise. Yet softly sounds the night upon my ear, I wonder, lest the silence me unmake, for sudden
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Chapter 7 The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
Parker Owens commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
I can’t very well call it a cliffhanger... the cliff has crumbled! But I can hear the roar if water... is that a waterfall? -
Chapter 7 The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
Parker Owens commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
Down the cliff we go! What a time and place to be caught in a mountain storm like that! Incredible! What a description you give us of Boone fighting nature’s attempt to erase him and his animals. And now we have to wait a week to see if he makes it...- 114 comments
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I really, really like this. It's beautiful, and makes me feel the power and beauty of autumn, and the duality of the changes I see happening around me. The last two stanzas are fantastic.
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Rick struggles to find autonomy against Heinrich Senior. It seems the old man can’t be pleased. Yet Rick has a solid reputation and people are genuinely glad to know him. His work is fine, but as you say, the upper management is brutal. Thank you very much for reading, and for your thoughts.
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Rick doesn’t see that losing his father might not be a wholly bad thing. It’s hard to let go of the idea of family, especially in a small town. Yet Heinrich can be maddening. He’s like a dog with a bone, and nothing will make him let go. Thanks for reading this chapter. I’m glad to see your comments.
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Rick certainly puts up with a lot. He’s gotten along so far, but that’s it. The word oppressed is very apt. I’m glad you read this chapter; thanks for commenting.
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You might have alluded to your possible disinclination to endorse the old man once or twice. Possibly. Seriously, Heinrich must be bored in Arizona if he wants to control matters in Eagle Lake so much. Thank you for reading this. I’m enormously grateful for your kind comments.
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Heinrich Senior hasn't stopped trying to run Rick's life in forty years. He's used to it, why stop now? Rick's relationships aren't a private matter to him; they're family strategy. What a good thing the old man never ran a kingdom for real. Thanks very much for your comments, and for reading this chapter.
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Rick has been paying and paying and paying for his summer of Willy Kohler. Heinrich Senior isn't exactly the understanding sort, is he? Even if the old man knew the whole awful story, his response might be less than sympathetic. It's no wonder their long-distance relationship is rather strained. For the moment, what the old man wants is a grandson who can carry on the business into the future. Thanks very much for reading this chapter, and for your comments.
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Heinrich can't let the reins slip from his grasp. Unfortunately, that means Rick seems to wear bit and bridle for the foreseeable future. But you're right; the situation is hardly sustainable in the long run. I'm glad you continued to read the story, and I'm grateful for your thoughts.
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Did you like that epithet? It made me smile to see you'd noticed it. Heinrich Senior has an agenda that puts Rick's happiness somewhere on one of the lower rungs of the ladder. Rick is indeed a kind, good neighbor. Even when he is tired and a bit peeved, he'll go and chase chickens across the neighborhood. I think Mrs. Lee's Labrador is a confirmed Chickenhound by now. Thanks for reading and for your thoughts.
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Rick does many things well that Heinrich Senior takes for granted. But the old man expects grandkids, as well as a business in which things are Done His Way. That’s getting increasingly difficult for Rick. The whole town seems to know Rick’s business - but then again, Rick knows a lot about everyone else’s too. Thanks for your comments, and for reading!
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And here I was thinking of a Wagnerian paterfamilias in titling this chapter. Heinrich Senior can’t stand being out of the action - or being unable to secure the family business into the great beyond. The old man can be pleasant and well mannered except with his son, it appears. Thank you very much for your interesting comments and for continuing to read this story.
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Rick and Mrs. Lee are good neighbors and friends. It’s a pity her chickens get out at inconvenient times. Despite this, she seems to be a better friend than Heinrich Senior, let alone Rita. Thanks for reading, and for your thoughts.
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Rita seems to echo all around Rick, doesn’t she? Thanks for reading this chapter, and for commenting.
