Whoa. A temple aboard a spaceship? Cool. And Lakshou sounds like he could be really good for Kohen. But what is it about Lakshou that inspires calm and sweet rest? Can't just be incense and soft cushions, can it?
He had a name, once, and may wear it again. He is relearning his humanity. Perhaps the others will help him recapture it quickly. But to experience taste and hope is a heady first step.
This is so terrifying and harrowing. The one thing one wants to do - to offer a hug and human warmth - will hurt him, cause him grievous harm. What possible purpose could this torture have served?
It makes me sad to know how right you are, tim. Perhaps our poems change no minds; that true, too, I think. Your kind words are encouraging, nonetheless. But maybe poems can let my tears flow faster, so I can get to the work of trying to mending things sooner. Thank you for reading and for your comments.
This is an awesome chapter, as Caleb perks back death’s layers one by one. The rivers flow back to the living; a perfect return. Yet there remains Orpheus to deal with...
Thank you, Def. I appreciate your reading these and responding to them. We do what we can. A friend of mine holds out the hope each time that this will really be the last time. May he be right, for once.
Jocelyn Elders, onetime Surgeon General, likened gun violence to a public health crisis, an epidemic - a public disease. You have hit upon part of the pathology, certainly. Thank you for reading and responding to this.
Tear Tracks
Tears fall
far more slowly
than bullets ever fly;
please explain, for I am sorely
confused;
why must
we be required to watch this race
between wild eyed anger
and innocent
children?
Pandemic
What madness
is there in modern man
that drives him to seek abundant death?
What vaccine, what immunization do we need
to stop this virulent pestilence?
Our tears and our rage
are
I loved these! Your images of woven mats of cloud, and whales of gray are inspired. Wonderful sensory writing, making great use of this form’s structure. You make gray days interesting and exciting.
Apples are far more sensual than they are given credit for, I think. Your comment points that out perfectly. A feast for tongue and taste and teeth, indeed. Thanks so much for reading this and responding to it!
The Apple
The apple with the smoothest skin,
such gentle colors blush therein,
which curves with subtle, perfect form,
it must inspire a man to sin.
That beauty's proof against the storm,
through chilly nights and days so warm
as might excite the flesh beneath
and appetites beyond the norm.
Arouse that flesh, it will bequeath
delight within its rosy sheath,
it lingers on the palate's thought,
a thrill to shake the soul and teeth.
This fruit, forb