he has such memorable lines; these especially stick with me -
his soul is a restless place...
...he reaches out
to hands inaccessible
to an equal heart...
...the universe teems with it
and the universe disavows it
he wanders a path parallel...
I read and re-read and re-re-read this, looking at it as a faceted diamond in perfect light.
you appealed to the sense of observation, and brilliantly so, floating above, beside and around.
then reminded me of a musical scherzo, maybe because it seems to have a faster tempo, or perhaps there is the sense of possible freedom from ghosts and skeletons.
If the previous poem was a scherzo, then now may be a brief rondo; the recurring search for happiness likened to nurturing and rebuilding the flame of love.
Each of these spoke to me in your own unique voice, and wonderfully so.