That did go well. Nathan's stand on being picky stung Bryce, but somehow it seemed to reveal an insecurity, too. One can hide behind the mask of being choosy to avoid getting hurt, too. Yet Bryce has that attractive, flirty, slightly dangerous openness which attracts Nathan. Could be a spicy dinner party.
I am very happy you liked that line. It was a delight once it appeared. So glad you got it, as you always do. Many thanks for reading and for enjoying the offerings from the rack.
You are so very generous with your kindness.Thank you. The first two words you mention express so much in this context, connotations leaping out at the mind as it absorbs the rest. At least, that was the intent.
Thank you for your very kind word. The line you quote is a favorite of mine, too. I am glad it struck a chord with you also. I am grateful for your comments.
Thank you Val, for your immensely generous and kind words. "Mirrored madness" seems an apt description; I'm glad it appealed to you. You are so good to read and comment on this collection.
Again;
impossibly
it stirs down at the core,
insatiable, unquenchable
hunger;
only
equal love and mirrored madness
slake the thirst, fill the soul,
arching, pleading,
for more.
A great start to this story. I am surprised - very surprised- that Will and Troy actually promised to be modest until graduation. That seems almost quaint these days.
This is terribly, terribly sad. Galen needs real professional help, in addition to food and comfort. He will surely find the latter two with Alannah and Josh. But can anything break the barrier fear and hurt?
It was irresistible to use this approach once it came to mind. Perhaps it illustrates how some strains of thought permeate one's consciousness. Thanks so much for reading and for your comments!