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Very awesome chapter. It seems like Devon is becoming a regular fixture with the band and he enjoys his time with them while both on and off stage. I think the fans are going to be very disappointed in the fact that Carlton won’t be performing with them after this one night in Inverness, Scotland in the highlands. I have a feeling that they’re going to do a concert in Australia and they’ll talk him into performing with them there. Fantastic story quokka as always.

Fantastic chapter, it’s great to see Devon so relaxed and singing the amazing rendition of Amazing Grace like he did with the band on Vanuatu. I’m glad that he was able to enjoy some of the concert as a member of the audience, I think he really enjoyed it. He’s gained some great friends from the UK and the Isle of Man they seem to be a great bunch of guys. I’m really enjoying the story, although at some point Devon is going to have to get back to the university in order to finish his degree in architecture even though he’s become quite famous already in the architecture community with only one design that started out as a project for his class. I can’t wait to see where the story goes from here.

Fantastic chapter, it seems like Devon is more popular than even he thought he would be after the media found out his identity as being the one who designed the prison that there was so much press about the fraud and theft from his professors office. After the money was awarded it didn’t take the media long to find out about him. Fantastic story so far, I’m reading it again from the beginning.

Great chapter, Robbie is correct in that he just got back to school and they get a lot of snow that causes the school to be canceled. Jo might be the best person to help Robbie get through this anger and resentment. She’s already figured out that he’s holding back on some things.

I agree with the other comments that this was kind of a hard chapter to read, especially since it was the last chapter and the end of a short life of a very determined young man who through no fault of his own he falls and hit his head on some rocks while on Rottnest for his Easter break. Because of the fall he spent a lot of time in and out of the hospital and had many surgeries to get him back to some what a normal condition again. I’m sorry that he passed away when no one was with him but as they were informed he passed very quickly due to a brain aneurysm, his wishes were carried out by Sebastian as he wanted to be buried in the Falkland Islands where he spent many happy times with his friends who he became close to while he was working on the farm and also staying at the lodge in Stanley. The send off that he got as his casket was taken from his cabin and loaded on the plane that was chartered by Sebastian for just one trip to Deepdale Island and back to Perth so he would have the postmortem done by the state coroner. I hope that everyone who knew Huon is able to come to the point where they are able get on with their lives even as they struggle with the memory of him no longer with them in life. I think I have an idea why Sebastian had to go back to Switzerland after the funeral and everything else that he had to deal with afterwards. It seems like he was reminded of Huon everywhere he turned so he decided it would be best for him and the twins to get away from the memories.

Quite an interesting chapter, it seems that Huon can’t help but be struck in the middle of something or another. I hope that he doesn’t get another headache from all of this and wind up in the hospital again. I know that they have the two doctors on board and hopefully one of them will have a neurological background so that he can be at least stabilized before being sent home to recuperate. I hope that between the Australian navy and the US ship as well as the other ships from the RAN they’ll be able to keep the French and Chinese away from the island.

I agree that this was a fantastic chapter. The island sounds like a great place for a small settlement for research purposes. I like Huon’s idea for the signs that trespassers will be shot hung and shot again. I know that they couldn’t put that sign up for legal reasons it should just say that Deepdale Island is a private wildlife sanctuary and research station that is an Australian territory. I’m off to read more of the story, great writing quokka.

I myself haven’t spent much time in a wheelchair although I took care of my paternal grandmother who was confined to a wheelchair due to a massive stroke and then being diagnosed with ALS or Lou Goerings disease a form of muscular dystrophy. I helped her get into bed every night and did other things for her, she bought a used Volkswagen bus for me to use, I even built a wheelchair ramp for the van with a sheet of plywood and a couple of piano hinges which worked great. I talked to her at length about her experience with being confined to a wheelchair and what it felt like. She said that she had to get used to it very quickly.

I have to say that this was an awesome story and the last chapter was great seeing all the hard work Huon put into making the holiday a bit more special than it would’ve been for the underprivileged families in Stanley. I’m glad that Rev Davies and Kyle were able to come spend Christmas with Huon, Sebastian, Louis and Joachim as well as Mrs Cooper and they were able to have a total of 64 people who would not have had a very good Christmas if they hadn’t had gotten the invite to have a Christmas meal on the Southern Explorer ship that is owned by Wagner International which is owned by Sebastian, the twins and Huon. I thought it was great that Huon had recuperated enough to do the special hymns with Kyle and the boys choir at the cathedral especially after he blacked out on the ship while going to see the doctor. Thank you for the great story.

Awesome chapter. I agree that Kohen is now a daddy even though it’s not a human being but rather a creature of some kind. The baby has more of Kohen’s DNA than the others do and it shows from the description of it.

Interesting chapter. Derrick has to watch out for the other shoe to drop and then Chris will be holding the fact that he helped get his mom the job in his dads restaurant. Derrick is definitely in love with Tanner and it shows, their love making is out of the world. It sounds like Derrick’s mom is an excellent cook/chef just from the way she’s going about making the meal for them.

As this is my first time reading this story, I had a hard time figuring out what set Huon off about the meal arrangement. What was the problem with him just wanting to be around simple people who in my estimations were like he was being just simple people who are there to do their job and not be bogged down with the other things happening aboard the ship. I’m interested to know how it came about that he was bumped up to business class for his flights instead of economy, I have a feeling that Sebastian is behind the upgrades and that he’s in the Falkland Islands the same as Huon. I’m enjoying this story as it tells us so much about what it was like for both Huon and Sebastian after they both lost their parents, their fathers on the same day and in similar circumstances. Sebastian’s dad had always wanted to repay the kindness of Huon’s dad after he saved Sebastian’s dad from drowning when they were in college together.

Amazing chapter, I think it was great for Sebastian to arrange for Kyle & Xander to visit these great churches and be able to sing 4 hymns at each one while it was being recorded. The last church was quite a shock to the film crew and when asked about it they informed Sebastian the church is located in the royal palace of the king and queen of Sweden, after the last hymn was sang in the royal church they were all able to meet the Princess of Sweden. I can’t wait to read the last chapter of the story.

Fantastic chapter and story so far. It’s great to see the family all together and also seeing Alexander (Xander) for the first time. Now that Josephine has signed the required paperwork for Sebastian to become Xander’s full time caregiver and guardian allowing Josephine the opportunity to have a very comfortable life from now on with a monthly income of 5000 pounds per month. I’m glad that she decided that it wouldn’t be good for Xander to be raised by her at her age, not that she wouldn’t still be a part of his life, she feels like it would be too much of a strain on her physically even though he’s a good boy. I hope that we get to see more of her before the end of the story.

Fantastic chapter, Devon is definitely going to be needing the Dean of Law at the university because I think there’s going to be a fight over the prints and the original blueprints for the prison. Even though they have proven that they belong to Devon I think the company that had them is going to fight to get them back so they can get the bids to build the new prison. I’m glad that the dean told Devon it was best if he could get away from everything going on right now and he would call him if he were needed for anything.

Sorry for the confusion, I was trying to say that the firm in the United States is trying to say that they designed the new prison. I know it was Devon with help from his friend who was doing time for drunk driving, he was the one that was telling Devon all about the way things were set up and ran in prison.

Awesome start to the new story. I also think that Devon is in for a fight with the Australian government over the new prison being developed by a architecture firm in the US who is trying to say that they were the ones who had designed it. I agree with chris191070 in that hopefully with the help of the University he will be able to prove that he is the rightful owner of the blueprints as they were stolen from the University office of his professor the night he turned the blueprints into get graded as his assignment. I think it’s going to be a very long fight but it will be over after he shows his means of identification on the blueprints that are not visible to the naked eye.

Fantastic chapter. I too was a little bit upset about Travis and the way Trenton treated him about the business card, I got over it very quickly after I realized that he was being treated as an employee who hadn’t done his best job which would have been to turn the business card over to Trenton, his father or his uncle no matter what was happening at the time. I was surprised to find out that the business card belonged to Xander who is the nephew of Sebastian Wagner, and also that he is only 16 years old in this story. I have a feeling that they will be working very closely with Xander and possibly Sebastian as well. What a great way to reintroduce these characters as we haven’t seen them in awhile, I think it’s great that the way that quokka introduces Xander into this story was great, I just had another thought about the way Travis acted when he gave Xander’s business card to Trenton I don’t think he knew who Wagner International was by the way he said that he thought it was just a spoiled rich kid.

Fantastic chapter, what a great way to end the series of CJ and his adventures growing up after going to live with his father in Washington DC. It’s to bad that his grandparents didn’t live long enough to see him campaign for and win the most prestigious job in the country, the President of the United States, although I’m sure that they would be very proud of him and all he has accomplished. I’m glad that he has made it possible for the squad to hold key cabinet positions and he has Brad as the Secret Service agent in charge of watching over Liebe who is the first child that CJ and Owen adopted. I have followed the story from the beginning and I think I’m going to go back and reread it again because there’s always a good chance I might’ve missed something. Thank you for the great story.

Awesome chapter, I think it’s great that the Sea Naval Cadet unit was able to see some of Aquaria as well as getting to go out on board for a 3 day trip. The Naval Commodore stated that he would make sure that the parents got and signed the permission slips allowing their children to go on the trip. I can’t wait to read chapter 8 to see what the interlink is about and also to find out how the tours went.

I think this is why Sparkles wanted Kohen there when the eggs hatched, because the biggest egg has more of Kohen’s dna in it. Not even Aparoe can say why it is that way.

It’s truly great to see the fleet expanding, this will allow more crew with families a chance to have them on board. Congratulations to Trenton and Travis on their wedding. With them moving back onto the Aquaria that allows Derrick the opportunity to become the new captain of the Ociana. I can’t wait to read about the public getting the chance to see 4 decks of the Aquaria and the reactions of the media crew that will be the first to see it, I think it’s a good idea to not allow cameras or cell phones on board because cellphones today have some pretty good cameras in them. I have a feeling that someone’s going to try to get into one of the restricted areas of the sub during the public tours.

Another great chapter. I feel bad for Tristan as he was trying to do the right thing by calling his dad to tell him that there was a danger to the family, he wouldn’t listen to him or Carl. I have a feeling that something is going to happen to Tristan’s family and then his dad is going to be begging him to come back to the family and apologize for not believing him in the first place.

Awesome chapter. Tyler & Ariel make a great couple, the love making was just that “love making” not just sex. I like how Ariel got up over Tyler and then lowered himself down onto his hard pole in order to get another chance to feel Tyler deep inside him before he has to go home. The description of Tyler hitting Ariel’s birthday spot as he calls it and the subsequent orgasm they both had was fantastic. Great story, it shows that anything is possible even for teenage boys looking for the right person who can be their equal and possibly be their soulmate.

Interesting story about a six year old boy who says he has seen the Dark Man and has even gone for walks with him. I’m sure the doctor didn’t want to believe David about what he was saying about the dark man. For such a short story I found it to be very believable, although I also think that the dark man could be his dad after it was said that he could go with him when he turned 18 or nineteen. Also when he was describing his walks he said that the dark man would tell him to put on his long pjs and to get a jacket so he wouldn’t get cold. That’s what makes me think of it possibly being the dad.