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Excellent chapter. I like how Jeremy & Angela have enough faith in Lloyd to leave it up to him to settle the insurance from the damage the station sustained during the cyclone as well as getting the new plans for the rebuilding of the accommodation buildings that were destroyed as well as the shearing shed and the new shed for the batteries for the wind generator. All in all I believe he’s doing a great job of getting everything organized and in record time too. Lloyd has already arranged for the builders to start earlier than the two weeks originally planned.

Fantastic chapter. With this story we actually get to see the other side of the donor after they have given the life to their recipient, now the slag hunters come in and do their job of dismantling the donors body and then removing it from the area. We see that the slag hunters are actually human and not vampires which I thought they might’ve been. I think it’s great that we’re getting the story from a new recruit to slag hunting and he is telling all about his beginning to his new job thinking that he’s being set up for a big joke only he finds out that this isn’t a joke it’s real.

I agree that something doesn’t seem right about the rush to have the man killed. I’m worried that Adam may wind up being hunted by his own team as they want this job very badly.

I have to agree with you that she got what she deserved, she was a viper’s viper with her own agenda. She realized that she was not going to get away with her plan as Freska had the AI air the audio and video from the place where they were as well as to her ship and then outwards so that it was known every where in the solar system. Also the controls placed on Kohen & Danie have been disabled and then destroyed so they could never be used again.

Excellent chapter. I hope the two men who took it upon themselves to cut the lock on the gate for the cattle station and then drive like maniacs both while on station land as well as the main road all of which were closed due to the cyclone. After they flew past Lloyd and sped down the highway they got their car stuck in some water flowing over the top of the bridge. Once there Lloyd saw the men arguing with some truckers he backed up a bit and pulled onto the shoulder of the road before walking closer to the scene on the bridge after listening to some of the talk of the spectators and then he asked four of the bulky truck drivers to follow him and then made his way to the men one of which was the same man who kept calling the station wanting to stay, he was informed that the station as well as the roads being closed. The man wasn’t going to listen to anything he said and Lloyd realized that the men were already in the area only they wouldn’t listen to anything anyone had to say about the closures. The men were arrested and given a warning that they were not allowed on the station property at all by Angela who is not just an owner of the station but also someone who has some law enforcement duties as well. After getting their identification and pictures taken of them and their vehicle, Angela started to search the vehicle due to the fact that they had an unsecured rifle luckily the rifle was unloaded although ammunition was found in the glove box that and the rifle were turned over to the police when they landed their plane on the road. Great story, it just goes to show that there are some people who think they are above the law.

Another fantastic chapter. Carl seems to be attracted to Tristan in the worst way. Carl would love to get ahold of Tristan and teach him what it means to be desired by another. If Simon & Kitryn are able to make a go of it then why would it be a problem if Carl and Tristan tried to become mates.

Awesome chapter. Lloyd has had a bit of bad luck if you will recently. Now that he’s at the station working full time, they have a cyclone going right through the station. When he took Angus out for a walk before the main part of the storm hit the area they came back in and forgetting that the building had been sealed off from the storm he experienced some problems with his ears. They have had a few issues with the lights going out and then they noticed that there were a few windows broken out. I hope they get through the storm with minor issues other than a good cleaning and a few repairs to be done.

Awesome chapter. I think Adam is going to be in for more hurt than he’s probably never been in before in his life. This Orion is going to be trouble for Adam especially since he’s supposed to be off limits to anyone else other than Mistress Katrina. Now that Adam has pissed Orion off there might be a whole lot of hurt coming at him if Orion tells Katrina that Exile is having trouble remembering things, Dutch told Adam that Orion was off limits but when he woke up Orion was already there. I hope that Dixon is able to do something about Adam’s memory before Katrina finds out that he has a great big void in the memory department.

Awesome chapter.

Interesting chapter and story. I would want to know more about Exile (Adam) to try to figure out what happened to him on this mission. It seems like he got hit by some kind of spell that erased most of his memories, it might be awhile before he regains his memory.

This is the same chapter as chapter 4.

Interesting chapter. We’re finally seeing some of what Kyle went through as a child, his dad was hard on him when it came to baseball. We still don’t have enough information about how his family died other than Kyle released a whole lot of pent up magic without his even knowing what was happening. I think if he would just relax more Worthington could teach him how to control his abilities and when to let go of his anger. There might be a problem now between Kyle and Worthington since Kyle just figured out that Worthington really is gay.

Awesome chapter. I’m glad that Lloyd decided to take the job at the station as the Hospitality Manager, with permission from his current employer. His boss came up with a solution to the problem after Lloyd explained what he was considering, his boss said that he could move to the station and accept that job if he could get a satellite dish installed with permission so that he could work for both the station and his current employer. As he was walking his dog Angus before starting the drive north to the station he received a phone call from a lawyer who he had met at his parents farm, Mr Phillips stated that Lloyd’s parents had been killed in a automobile accident as they were returning from his grandmothers funeral. I think it’s best if he goes on to the station and then decide what he needs to do with his parents farm and whatever else he needs to deal with.

I agree with Chris this was an awesome chapter and beginning to the story.

Great chapter and story, giving us a glimpse of what it’s like for two young men who are assigned to write a letter to a pen pal who is a student in the school. Part of the rules for the assignment was that they weren’t allowed to give personal information about themselves. Both Max & Issac kept the rule in mind until a couple of weeks before they completed the assignment they used the aliases of Sherlock & Watson. One day one of them released personal information about themself without realizing they had done it until it was too late. Once they got around to talking more about themselves they tried very hard to figure out who they were, I believe it was Issac who said that he was in a wheelchair and he was doing this assignment because he was looking for a friend and I truly believe that they both gained quite a bit from the assignment. I like Issac’s idea of putting their letters in a book showing that even though they were complete strangers when they began to write their letters to each other they had no idea who was on the other end, they were able to overcome their obstacles and became friends on paper only to start with. Once they got to using their names they really became friends except for the fact that Issac said he was in a wheelchair it almost had a devastating problem with Max saying he didn’t know if he could handle it disabled friend. Thanks for the great story.

I loved this chapter as you don’t read about people having disputes with each other. The way that César & CJ argued with each other shows a human side of their relationship they have, the argument was over César telling CJ & Ozzie they were grounded for taking Richie with them on a shark dive. Even though he was inside the cage the whole time and running a camera César was upset because Richie is only 17, César said it was bad enough that he worries about some of the things CJ & Ozzie do is bad enough then they go and take Richie scuba diving to tag sharks. I’m glad that they’re trying to work on the problems they have with each other due to the issue about Richie. This is a great story and I always enjoy the new chapters when they’re posted, patiently wait for more chapters in the future.

Excellent chapter. I’m glad that Kohen & Danie were able to eliminate the Elite Council then with Fresca’s help they eliminated the leader of the Elite, Rilecca was the one that came up with the plan and then once Kohen and Danie got to her father she started screaming for the guards. I agree with drpaladin that she seems to be working a double game. I also hope that the last of the controls that were put in place by the Elites, they shouldn’t be held hostage just because these people decided that they were above everyone else in the galaxy.

Excellent chapter. I think it’s great that you’re able to incorporate details of your own travels and experiences in Russia and other countries that were part of the USSR before it’s collapse. I hope that Vlad is able to locate someone from his own family after 40 years it may be a difficult task to accomplish.

This was a very interesting chapter and start to the story. I really enjoyed the way that Nathan, Caleb & Joey work together known as the Falcon 3. They are known for their ability to get in and out with the item or items with them and not be caught. The Falcon 3 is a raider trio of teenage vampires that are able to be in sync together and they know what each other’s roles are and also what they are capable of doing. The job in this chapter was a briefcase with stolen diamonds in it, when they get to the office where the briefcase was supposed to be all the lights came up, being so bright they almost caused the boys to go blind temporarily even with the enhanced vision they have as vampires. Once they adjusted to the brightness of the lights they go back to back so they had the advantage of fighting as one, they heard someone clapping from the shadows when the man first stepped out they were ready for a fight. The man told them that he was very impressed by their abilities and he would have to pay out a lot of money for his human guards for their medical bills after they were assaulted by the boys as they entered the warehouse. The man identified himself as Soren and he wanted to hire them to do a real heist for something more valuable than a briefcase of diamonds it would be a heist that would change more than your financial situation. This is the kind of job that could, quite possibly, change the worlds of darkness and daylight as we know it. Forever." He said with a sinister grin. "You three could very well be instrumental in the reshaping and ultimate reboot of vampire-kind. And in order to do that...we're going to have to come to an agreement, you and I." I hope they think long and hard about the offer from Soren because it could turn out bad for them especially since the offer is coming from Soren. I can’t wait to read if they accept the job or not and what they’re going to steal.

Interesting chapter. The poor sheriff has no idea what Priest is talking about right now, I have a feeling that he’s going to get more information than he’s willing to accept. I hope they can quietly get the evil Priest and his gang find what they’re looking for and leave quickly or better yet they don’t find what they’re after and leave.

Fantastic chapter. Max may turn out to be a great friend for Issac after all, the way he arranged for Issac to run the football into the end zone which was the most fun he’s had in years since he wound up in the wheelchair after the accident. Then after the game he invited Issac to go to his house afterwards the two of them went out to eat and from what I read they actually had a good time. The letter that Issac wrote afterwards to Max said a lot about the character and fortitude that Max shows with Issac, it shows that Max is a very good judge of character and he has made a great impression on Issac and possibly his dad as well. I think that Issac’s dad has done a great job of raising his son who is in a wheelchair, he worry’s all the time about Issac as he doesn’t have a lot of friends.

Fantastic chapter. I have to say I sure didn’t expect this plot twist, Lewis had been led to believe that Sebastian was killed in a high speed auto accident in Switzerland only to find out when he graduated from the university with a degree in law that it was a ruse to get the people who had been giving death threats to Sebastian that he was dead. Sebastian was smuggled out of Switzerland and into Lichtenstein where he hid out until the members of the Italian mafia had been caught and are now serving time. In the end I was very happy to see Lewis & Sebastian reunited and hopefully they’ll stay together from now on. This was another excellent story with the same characters as well, I have really enjoyed reading both stories and will possibly go back and reread them again and see what I might’ve missed before. Thank you for the opportunity to read these wonderful stories.

Another fantastic chapter. I’m glad that Lewis was able to get the whole mess of the people who Sebastian hired to manage the property when he inherited the business from Sebastian. Upon looking at the financial records he started noticing irregularities and he then decided to call Kylie as she’s with the federal police who would have to be called in to investigate anyway. I was so glad that they now have all three of the family members that were involved in the embezzlement of funds from the company only they left behind their daughter and two young sons, who the daughter spends the most time taking care of them. I’m glad that Erica is going to have a job and still be able to take care of her brothers since their parents and uncle are going to be locked up.

Fantastic chapter. I was sorry to hear that Sebastian had died in a car accident, and it happened at the same time as Lewis left. I don’t blame Lewis for the actions he took regarding his life peerage and the knighthood, first stating that he didn’t want those titles anymore and when the GG was told he didn’t want the titles, she made a counter offer stating that the knighthood was reinstated although she was saddened by the request she reluctantly agreed to his request and she was also upset that he wouldn’t take the job of the IOTA again as well as his no longer wanting the job ever again. I was shocked to read that when he checked into what is supposed to be a deluxe holiday accommodation he went to the villa he was going to stay in he saw the mess that was a bed that had not been changed and there were dirty towels in the bathroom so he went back to the office and demanded to speak to the manager only to find out that he was away on business and the day manager was also away shopping in Geraldton he then asked who was in charge now and was informed that the receptionist was in charge. He was apologized to as she said that the villa should have been cleaned by now and if he wasn’t happy he could find accommodation elsewhere which he did. After checking in the new accommodation he called Joachim he told him what he had found when he checked in, Joachim told him to wait two hours then go back to the office and tell the receptionist that he was the new owner and see what she does then, he waited an hour before going back over there and when he arrived he found no one around he was about to leave when the phone rang he answered it to the annoyance of the manager who was calling due to the call he got from Joachim, Lewis was about to hang up when he happened to see the receptionist walking back to the office with her arms full with the dirty laundry from the villa that he had checked into before going next door. I hope things change there otherwise he may have to make some drastic changes. One of the emails that Lewis received was from Mrs Cooper stating that her nephews were in need of employment again since the death of Sebastian they were no longer employed by his company, she was happy being retired but the young men needed a job so she thought of him asking if he could use them with them knowing that they would not be making anywhere near what they were making with Sebastian, he replied to her email saying what he could pay them and less than 10 minutes later he received another email stating that they would take the pay cut as long as they had a job.

Another fantastic chapter. I’m also glad to see that the MR riders rode their bikes to school and in the group as well. I think that shows solidarity with the overall leader Worthington even though he is the one that started the group in the first place he isn’t really the leader of it. I’m glad that he is able to go from private school to public school especially since he doesn’t really have a choice, it is his senior year so it shouldn’t be too bad for him. I’m not sure about the wrestling team with everything else that’s going on right now with the demons trying to get a foothold into this world from theirs and the problems associated with it that he has to deal with, I just hope that it doesn’t interfere with school. This is a great story and I always look forward to the next chapter when it comes out, thank you for writing it.