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I agree with Wesley in that Lydia asked Unn to talk to Nessa because she's ashamed, terrified, and disgusted by Nessa right now. I hope that Unn is going to be alright after eating 3/4 of the tub of strawberry ice cream, especially since she gets ill after eating a little bit. I think Nessa's going to have to go along with Lydia's wishes for now in order to see if they have a chance to get back together. I believe Lorant will know very soon that Unn ate ice cream again and not just a small amount either. The customs that the dwarves live by are strange and anyone who isn't a dwarf doesn't know about these customs. So it seems like the dwarves need to have a bit of a buffer zone where an outsider would be educated in these customs. I hope that Nessa is able to get to where she knows what is and isn't acceptable to the dwarves so that she and Lydia can get back together again. I think this was a little light for Nessa to get back in Lydia's good graces. Thanks for this chapter, I hope that we get to see whether or not Nessa and Lydia make up or not, and that Nessa is able to get more help on the proper things that are not going to cause more problems in the future.

I've had stiches in my head as well as other places, when the ones in my head were taken out for the 5th time I was grateful that they were out, even though I have a scar running from the middle of my neck and halfway up the back of my head. I hope that the scar she has will go down with time. She should be grateful that she has a decent place to live as well as meals provided by Lorant as well as being able to have the meals brought up to her room. I hope that with time she'll be able to have a relationship with someone possibly even Lydia although that is going to take a lot of work on her part. Great chapter, I'm looking forward to reading more during the week.

I'm glad that Eric and Peter are back home in Boston with Boris and Yuri as well as their other security staff. I'm hoping that all of Yuri's concerns are dealt with for the Ellen DeGeneres show. They went to what they consider late dinner in Burbank, CA before the special taping for the show, in their studios. Everyone is being searched before their allowed into the studio. I'm glad that Eric insisted that Boris and Yuri go with them to California. I just wish Yuri would relax more than he was doing in California. Great chapter although short, I'm glad that we finally got another great chapter to read. I can't wait to read more about the trip to California and then the other talk shows they've been asked to do.

It's taken me almost a full day to get through this one chapter due to numerous factors, I loved this chapter as much as the rest of the story. I liked the end where they were back in Charleston at Wentworth Manor and were having their Christmas party, Devon and Vlad were talking near the front door in the entry hall when Devon answered the door and found Mitch, David, Sasha, Alik and his fiancee Brenda Duncan. I loved how Alik saw Devon and said that he and Mitch could be related due to the fact that they look so much alike, then when Colin came up to them Alik noticed that Colin and Tony could have been twins. While they were all talking Devon introduced everyone to Vlad and Gaius and then to Nicolae, Helga and their children and there was more confusion when Gaius was called grandpa by one of Nicolae's sons. Mitch asked Devon if Gaius was a vampire as well and Devon said he was. Devon asked Mitch if anyone else knew about the secret of the vampires and Mitch said they didn't but they might have to be told now that Gaius was called grandpa and he doesn't look like he's old enough to have a son as old as Nicolae much less grandkids. I'm looking forward to more about the party and whether or not David, Sasha and Alik are told that Devon, Colin, Willie, Betty, Gabriella, Alex, George and Burke are all vampires. I can only imagine what that conversation would be like. Thank you for ccontinuing this terrific story.

I have come back to this story for a second time and I believe that I'm picking up on things I missed the 1st time reading it. Devon only had George remove the disc so that he could prove to Amasis and Nabia that they're all the same thing "Vampires" not "God's". I believe that even though Amasis told everyone to get out of his chambers he'll do exactly what Devon knew he would, Amasis would mull over what was said by Devon due to the fact that Devon was like Amasis and Nabia. I'm sure that Amasis does believe Devon and he'll see what happens when George gives Devon the serum for the 1st time to restart his heart and then he has to go through the pain again. I think it's too bad that Nabia isn't strong enough to get the serum and then be able to go out in the sun without burning up to ash. I'm glad that Amasis will finally become more human than he has been for centuries. This is one of my favorite stories on GA and I hope that I'll never get tried of reading these stories. Thank you for being one of the best author's that I love to read.

I'm glad that Mitch and Tony tell each other the truth about what they're feeling or thinking. By them being truthful it helps keep them on an even level, especially when one of them is thinking about what might happen. I'm really glad that they have friends like Ivan and Katya. I hope that their friendship continues to grow as it is going to be a very strong friendship. I'm glad that Mitch and Tony have decided to make their marriage legal even though they made sure that they would be taken care of due to the fact that they have power of attorney for each other stating that if something should happen to one or the other that they would be protected. By them getting married they're sure to be able to access the other's assets. I hope that David, Sasha and Alik are able to get to Boston for the wedding. I'm glad that you're continuing to write this story. I'm really enjoying reading it because I'm always wanting to see what happens next for Mitch and Tony.

I'm glad that the adoption went well and Robbie is now a Taylor. I think the party was a great idea except that Robbie can't enjoy it as he keeps getting pulled away from Nathan for one reason or another. I hope that Robbie and Nathan can get some time together during the party. I'm wondering if the principal showing up is a clue as to what things are going to be like when they get back to school. It's weird that he knew enough to mention that Robbie and Nathan are more than just friends now and that if he ever felt like he needed someone to talk to he would be available for him in that reason. I hope that Alex staying with Don, Sue, and the kids won't be a problem for Robbie especially with their history of getting together to have sex. It already appears to be putting a wedge between Robbie and Nathan, due to the fact that when Nathan found Robbie after he got tossed in the pool. Nathan found Robbie in his room standing there in just a pair of boxers with Alex, Nathan got a bit upset over that and got even more upset when Robbie stripped off his boxers to put on a pair of swim shorts. Great chapter, I really enjoyed reading it can't wait to read more.

Interesting chapter. Nessa seems like she's starting to settle in more. I like her attempt at calligraphy, I'm not quite sure how that fits in the story. I guess I'll just have to wait and see whether or not it does fit in. I hope that Nessa and Lydia make up and then we see where the relationship goes from there and also see if Nessa can find out more about her father and if he's the one who she found possibly living in the giants land.

Another great chapter in the story. I love that Eric and Peter are doing as all they can to make sure that their feelings are spoken to each other so that they are open and honest with each other. By voicing their feelings they can help each other understand the feeling and why their having them. I'm glad that Eric's grandmother is going to move to a warmer climate for her health. I'm glad that she has good health now and that she's as active as she is still using her ability as a ballerina to keep herself going. I know she'll visit the boys when they get back to Boston and back to school. I can't wait to read more about Makarovia and the wedding of Peter and Eric, also more about Allah's friend Mario. Thanks for writing this amazing story.

The one person I feel bad for is Mathew because he was lied to so much by the people who were supposed to be his protectors. I don't like the idea that he was beaten and raped for so many years and then he runs away only to have to use his body to make sure that he ate and had a place to sleep. I'm glad that Matt is talking to Devon and is willing to trust them which is not easy to happen after what he endured. I'm sure that Matt will finally be accepting to taking the serum and then be able to eat a meal that doesn't consist of blood. Great story I can't stop reading it.

I agree with Wesley in that the book wasn't all that helpful. I think it's a good thing Nessa decided to do the research about dwarves. I wonder if the Jurandir Marapuama that Nessa read about is her father, the reason I say that is she said it was her father's name. I hope that Nessa and Lydia do get back together and then maybe Nessa can find out if Lydia knows if Jurandir is a fairy or not and if he is then he might be her father. This was a very informative chapter about the dwarves and I look forward to reading more about how all of this helps Nessa.

I'll say one thing and that's that this is a wonderful chapter. I'm so happy for Pat as he's learning that the gift of a father was a very special gift, and now for his 16th birthday he has a new puppy, a set of new golf clubs and then to top it all off he gets a Jeep Wrangler, with the insurance paid for a year, full tank of gas and having it checked out by a mechanic. Paddy's birthday party and gifts are memories he'll treasure for the rest of his life. In the year since Paddy came to live with Ian a lot has happened, he got another dad, a sister, two sets of grandparents among many other things that he feels blessed to have. Paddy has quite a few great friends as well as a very special girlfriend to share his life with. I hope that everyone will have a great Easter by sharing the day with friends and family.

I'm glad that Colin was finally able to convince Willie that he needed to leave the tunnels for his own safety. At least Willie listens to Colin and agreed to go willingly even though Colin really didn't give Willie much choice in the matter. I know that the reason Willie has a hard time remembering things is medical from reading the story before even though it takes a lot of work to figure out. Willie will be so much better off once he's back at the VUN. I'm glad that George was able to bring some of John Burke's sheep blood and then put a sedative in it so that they could transport Willie without him freaking out. I'm glad that Willie was talking to Devon telling him what it was like when Colin came to New York all those years ago.

That has to be the shortest relationship in history. I hope that things will get straightened out soon between Nessa and Lydia. Nessa seems to really tick people off without intending to do so. She's ticked Unn off by opening her mouth and asking how Unn got between floors because of the fact that Unn is a Merperson and has to stay in the water. I think Nessa needs to think about what she's going to say before she really goes too far and really insults someone.

Another great chapter. It appears that Nessa is settling in at her new home especially now that she has someone special in which to share her bed with. Nessa seems really infatuated with Lydia and the same can be said for Lydia for Nessa. After waking up together all Nessa can think of is kissing Lydia's beard, and Lydia said they would be there almost all day if she were to kiss the places she wanted.

This turned out to be one of the best books I've read on GA since I started reading on here. I'm glad that things have been good for Andy and Zander, of course they had a few rough patches to get through but I think that's one reason why things have worked out for them. I hope that they'll be able to do all they want to do with the property that they got from Eustace when he decided that it was time to retire. I'm glad that they've made it through seven years so far with many more to come. I think it's good for Reed to have come to the farm after his dad beat him for a month before he took off, when he knocked on the door and asked about work, he was told there was no work tonight but there was food and a table to eat it on. I'm glad that Zander's getting him settled in for the night by making sure he gets a shower and a bed to sleep in. I hope that with the pictures you took of his injuries that once Ambrose is called about the boy and where he came from that something can be done to whichever Anderson he belongs to can be put away for a long time and that Reed can decide where he gets to stay until he's old enough to go out on his own.

Another great chapter Parker. I like the honeymoon suite it's rugged, it's hard to find unless you know where it is. It's the perfect place for the guys where no one else would find them. I'm glad that they're able to have a couple of days alone so that they can strengthen their bond with each other without anyone else around to make them uncomfortable. I hope that Andy's grandmother sticks around long enough to where they can get to know each other a bit better before he and Zander go all the way to visit her in Florida. I'm glad that Zander's family is so welcoming that without much fanfare or questions. I'm so glad that they had such a nice ceremony and the reception afterwards before Toby took them to Eustace's hunting cabin that had already been set up with food, water, and wood for the stove.

Another great chapter in the on going story about Tony and Mitch. I think that Mitch has a good idea for the translator to be set up as a part of the ships computer and then have portable units on each deck so that if they are needed to be used by the passengers they'd be available. I'm glad that Ivan and Katya are getting the usage out of it even with the memory issues. I'm glad that there seems to be a great deal of interest in the translators where ever they go. I hope that the memory and storage usage on the units gets upgraded so that they can be used by everyone who needs to have them.

What a great chapter so beautifully written. The wedding is over now and the guys have been shuffled into Eustace's pickup. Andy looked all over school for Zander and never did see him it seems like the teacher's for the two classes they have together got in on the whole keeping them apart until the ceremony at the church. I was very surprised by Andy's grandmother showing up and waiting for him in the ministers office. After Kaz helped Andy tie his tie Kaz took him to the office so he could find out who was waiting for him. When he walked in and asked if there was someone who was waiting for him she spoke up and said she couldn't believe it was really him. I'm glad that she made the trip for the wedding.

First off I want to tell you that this story continues to be one I'll want to remember for quite a while and will come back to reread the whole story from the beginning at least a few times if not more. I really appreciate how much you use the way the character is feeling and actually tell about the feeling and what it does for them. I think Andy is going to be quite a runner on the track team for the school especially after winning his first ever race and then when he comes in 3rd in his second race he complained to Kaz that he should have been able to get at least second place. Kaz brought up a conversation they had a month ago when Andy told him that he wasn't an athlete by any means. I think it's great that everyone in Zander's family seems to like Andy even though it was difficult for Andy to think that would be the case. Poor Andy was so nervous about the meeting of the family and then he gets the third degree from some of the siblings and Frank told Andy that if he hurt Zander then he would get hurt as well. After dinner and desert Frank asked where the bachelor party was and when they said there wasn't one he said that they could get sloshed together and then Andy said no thanks and then went on to say that as much as they appreciated the thought he wouldn't touch any alcohol due to the fact that his dad was a big drunk and beat him almost everyday while he was growing up. Frank apologized for the offer saying he didn't know about that otherwise he wouldn't have mentioned anything about it, Andy told him that he would tell him about what it was like for him someday if he wanted to know which Frank said he didn't want to know about the details of Andy's childhood. I liked the way that Carol greeted Andy and then told him she was pregnant not terminal and then proceeded to pull him in for a better hug, after that he met Carol's husband. I think the best thing Andy heard anyone say that evening was from Garrett while they were waiting for Kaz to walk Terry to her door when they took her home on the way to Kaz's house, Garrett told Andy that everything was going to be fine. Andy asked if he looked nervous and Garrett said no more than any of them before their weddings. Garrett also told Andy that he was glad that he was a Stevenson. Andy would be staying with Kaz Thursday night as Monica and Nonna wanted Zander and Andy to abide by the rules that say that they're not allowed to be in the same house the night before the wedding and they're not supposed to see each other until the ceremony. When Andy and Kaz got to Kaz's house his mom told him to take Andy's thing's to the guest room on the second floor and then had Andy follow her to the kitchen where she had a few questions and then asked if he had the same feelings for Kaz that he does for Zander to which he replied that he loved Kaz as a best friend and that wasn't the same as he loved Zander where she said that although they didn't understand how one boy could love another boy or even marry one that if they were sure that the wedding is what they both want then she and her husband would support them as well as Kaz and Terry do.

I think that the dreams that Andy's having are a fear of the unknown for him and I can only hope that he'll get the chance to talk to Dr O'Shea about them. I know that I talked to a therapist myself as I was afraid that I would be like my dad and do to my son's what he did to me shortly after my 9th birthday, the therapist told me that I had to be a better man and choose not to do what he did to me. I liked the way that Andy was greeted by Nonna Costanza Zander's grandmother she didn't treat Andy any different than she did Zander. She just accepted Andy like he'd been in the family all of his life. The atmosphere was very relaxed as they sat down and ate dinner together and then came the stories of Zander as a young boy. After dinner Nonna asked Zander to get her purse when he gave it to her she got a small wooden box and gave it to Zander and Andy when they opened it there were 2 rings with red stones in them. Nonna told them that her husband gave her hers on their 13th wedding anniversary and she gave him his, Andy was so happy for the gift of love from a grandmother to grandson and his fiancee, Andy actually got up and walked around the table and hugged her and thanked her for the gift. I'm glad that Andy asked Mrs Marjorie if she would like to attend the wedding and also told her about how he came to be at her house and asked for a job. He also told her that he was gay and that his fiancee's family were fostering him and that they had approved the wedding. She asked him if anyone was causing him any problems with anyone, he told her about Bruce Mack, she said she wasn't surprised by that since his father left his mother 5 years ago to go be with another man. She told Andy that he wasn't the 1st gay person in Blackburn and that some of them had come out at school. Mrs Marjorie told him she would be there for him at the wedding. It seems like Monica is going to make sure that this wedding is special for Zander and Andy.

'llAfter all that's happened to Andy in the last year it's great that he now has a real family of his own. I'm kinda glad that Ambrose wouldn't let things go about Andy's disappearance before finishing the summer at Eustace's farm in New Akron. The family was on their way home after church and a meeting with the pastor of the church who they asked about the possibility of him marrying Andy and Zander so they could be together and not have to worry about Family Protective Service's or Mrs Chandler trying to interfere with them anymore. By them getting married it takes Andy out of her hands altogether. I'm glad that Ambrose didn't give up on finding Andy alive and well, it was at this time Andy met his uncle on his mom's side of the family. It was also that Andy found out that his mother was killed by his dad and everything he was told about her was a lie. I'm glad that Andy finally knows that he's not alone anymore. I hope that Andy and Zander have a good visit with Eustace at his farm. Great writing in this story Parker.

Another great chapter Parker, I truly believe that Andy hasn't even seen the end of Mrs Chandler. I hope that Judge Harrison gets some answers to his inquiries about the issues in Carlsberg Mrs Chandler will make a big deal about getting the information. I know she's pissed because she just got schooled on the way that Andy went to live with the Stevenson's and also that she wasn't allowed to have her people go out to the school and cause any problems. I think that Bruce Mack needs to get more than just dusted by Andy and Zander in the track try outs at school, Bruce seems to think he's all big man on campus and is mad because he was put in his place by Terry and then sent to the principles office for causing a disturbance at lunch by thinking he was being the monitor of the school to chase any gays out of the school. I'm glad that Garrett got such a great attorney in Hedi Graber she's smart enough to get all of the records from the school and doctors about Andy as well as the circumstances of why Andy is living with Garrett, Monica and Zander in the first place, and that CPS or FPS haven't got any right to try to take Andy out of the placement because he was placed in foster care with the Stevenson's under the founding law. I hope that Zander and Andy can go back to sleeping together now so they'll both be able to sleep comfortably at least for awhile.

Parker I think you might've outdone yourself with this chapter. I feel bad for Zander as the news on Facebook put out by another swimmer who was caught at school having sex with a younger boy and had to leave the swimming team for his school, then posts the name's of other gay swimmers. After Zander's coach talked to him about the post he admitted that it was true, the coach asked about Andy being more than a friend and Zander said he was. The coach then asked why the private lessons and if they were doing anything other than swimming Zander assured the coach that all they were doing was swimming. Zander told the coach about Andy being a victim of abuse by his dad which left him with the scars on his back and he's uncomfortable being asked about them. After talking to the coach Zander decided that he should make some calls to let his grandparents and siblings know that he was gay. Monica's mom asked more questions than anyone else also asking if there was anyone special in his life and he told her about Andy and also that he was living with them because he has no one else. Zander's sister squealed loud enough that he had to cover the speaker of the phone she was so excited for him. I'm glad that the coach isn't telling Zander he can't be on the swim team because of his being gay, I'm also glad that the coach is going to allow Zander to still teach Andy privately to swim. I hope that Zander can tell Andy why he had to do what he did by telling his extended family about his being gay.

I'm glad that Lydia and Nessa are starting a relationship with each other. I hope that When the time comes they'll be ready to fight the demons.