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  1. Butcher56

    The New Kid

    I can get to love the characters and the story quite a bit. So far I have to say that I hate Artie's grandparents because of the whole attitude towards their own children and kicking them out when they don't comply with their orders to do something. I totally dislike the whole bible thumpers and the way that they raise their children. I think it's better to learn about other people and the way that they live as opposed to the way the religious zealots live, without a well rounded life kids grow up to be just like everyone else boring. I'm glad that Artie got to go live with Adam and then on his 1st day at a new school he's already made 3 new friends and also learned how to filet a fish, not only has that been an exciting 1st day he got to go to the Golden gate bridge with Dizzy one of the new friends he met and he's been invited to go surfing on Saturday with Ky. I think Artie's going to fit in real well in San Francisco it might take him awhile to really get to know how to get around on the bus and also learn about the city and its eclectic mix of people from all around the world, he's already learning about one of the people who live and work in the city as Ky is gay and he's fun to be around. I also think it was the way that Ky made Artie feel welcome in the new school but also helped him get around the school. Great story so far, I feel bad for Artie on the sudden death of his mom and also for the way he was forced to be with his grandparents who are the type of people I can't stand. I can relate to Artie on the sudden death of his mom because my mom died very suddenly as well though I was an adult with 2 boys of my own, I didn't have to go live with my grandparents like he did until Adam got custody of Artie per Artie's mom's will which his parents didn't like at all. The whole children should be seen and not heard is something that I would've had problems with.
  2. Butcher56

    Chapter 24

    I've finished reading this story so far and I can honestly say that I really love the way the storyline is going. I hope that the pressure of having to make a decision right now as having to choose between either Eamon and Adrian after he has spent the whole day getting the villagers from Mullansburg set up with their new armor and weapons in order for them to be part of the force guarding the estate. I don't know what Luca will say or even who he'll choose to be his partner and lover but I think I know what he might choose from the way his character is. I feel bad for all 3 of the characters because of the way things have turned out for all of them. I hope that Alex will be able to get into General Orr's estate and then be able to complete the mission that Talia took on and that means that Ysabel may not know that Talia has been captured by General Orr. I think the demon will become permanent and that means that Ysabel may be lost forever. I hope that the next chapter comes soon so we can all see what happens next for the characters in the story.
  3. Butcher56

    Chapter 37

    Another great chapter I like the way that Kohen is able to be himself around the captain. I love the way that the ship was made ready for the aliens to come on board to get whatever they were after. It was a great strategy to set the traps on their ship, and I believe that Kohen was the target of the invaders because of what they thought he could do. I'm glad that Kohen is able to start moving again after the sedatives were wearing off only his position makes it very uncomfortable for the captain as he's sitting on his lap and with Kohen stretching the kinks out of his body caused a reaction from the captain who told Kohen that if they were alone he would find out if all of Kohen's muscles were working again. I hope that Aparoe is able to do something so that this kind of situation doesn't occur again. I wonder if Deke will do anything to Lakshou because of what he tried to do with Kohen because he was being paid to bring Kohen to them.
  4. Butcher56

    Chapter 14

    I can't believe that Eamon started out in a good mood only to go and blow it by letting his anger get the better of him. I hope that he might start kicking himself in the ass so that he could know how much of a jerk he was to the only person around that knows how he feels. Not only did Eamon lose his friendship with Luca he might've completely destroyed the only real chance he had for a very meaningful friendship between him and Luca. I think the vote on accepting the marriage between Alex and Carl is wrong on so many levels, why would you vote against the marriage and alliance with Tomacia and then say that you support the reason behind it. I think it's stupid that Alex's uncle voting no and although I'm not surprised by his vote, I believe his uncle may have other plans for Tomacia. I hope that Luca meant to accept Adrian's offer of marriage and that he didn't do it out of spite. It wouldn't be a good way to start a real relationship leading to marriage. I love the way the storyline is going and hope that everything goes well for Alex and Carl.
  5. Butcher56

    Chapter 9

    Great story so far. It's a shame that Alex and Carl have to be apart so soon after they were married, I see the reason behind it as it wouldn't be a good idea for a Tomacian to be attending a meeting of the 13. I hope that Ysabel is a woman of her word, although I wouldn't put it past her to send a few troops in to kill the entire Tomacian nobel family and then try to kill as many of the military there as well. I sincerely hope that Jezabel doesn't show up at the summit of the 13 as I feel like if she would show up she'd be publicly shamed then executed by Alex himself. After she killed the head person of the house of Ysabel's after Jezabel was informed that she was no longer welcome at her aunt's house or even any of the DiCateau family properties as they have all the proof that they needed to convict Jezabel of treachery and murder. I hope that this summit meeting and possibly the wedding between Talia and Adrian who will meet very soon, which should get him there soon after Alex arrives.
  6. Butcher56

    Chapter 26

    I have loved the whole story so far and look forward to book 2. I hope that Luca will be ok after the dagger was jabbed into his hand while he was trying to accept the tray of food. I still don't know what Ysabel's game is now that her ex husband is dead and Alex has taken over. I think there needs to be more guards around Luca, so that they don't have any surprises like just happened to Luca. The one person I really worry about is Jezabel and the way that she thinks she should be in charge instead of Alex and also Luca in his absence. I love the way that Luca's shutting down the brothels and working on Alex's plans to change the way Nubias is ran with the children that are innocent victim's who are captured or even kidnapped in some kind of mission. The children are being forced into beings slaves for the sex trades. I know that Alex would agree with the decision Luca makes after what he saw once they crossed into Tomacia where his uncle had 2 divisions of soldiers who were slaughtering the children of the women who are being forced to perform sexual acts with the soldiers who are even raping the children when Alex saw the tent where the children were skewered on long spears and then opened up and left to the elements.
  7. Butcher56

    Chapter 19

    Another great chapter. I think it's great that Alex has such high regard for Luca for him to be in charge of the estate while Alex, Carlisle, Talia,and their guards are going to Tomacian to make an alliance with the country. I can't believe that Madam Ysabel murdered 46 men, women and children along with her personal staff and now she's going to become a general as one of the 13 rulers of Nabius. I hope that she doesn't go to Alex's estate for a visit as she's a very mean and vindictive person, no wonder everyone calls her the devil. I hope that firstly that Luca doesn't have any problems with anyone and if there are any problems that he takes care of them so that Alex will continue to leave him in charge if the need ever arises again and secondly that the trip is successful and they get the alliance with Tomacian. I love the story and am onto the next chapter.
  8. Very good story, I love the way the story tells us of the way that Tom and Peter meet on the bus ride home after a out of town football game. Tom was the football player and Peter was a musician in the school band, as the bus with the band is about to get underway Tom climbed on the bus and after talking to the band teacher Tom sat down next to Peter and they became instant friends who soon became lovers as well. It became clear that at the time of the story they were both in no way out to anyone about their sexual preference, and because of this they sought out a female couple who were in the same type of relationship as Tom and Peter. When Tom and Peter meet with Ann and Louise Tom and Peter came up with the idea for them to date each other so that they could continue the relationship they wanted. It didn't seem like the girls really wanted to do that and said they would talk it over amongst themselves and then let them know what they decided to do. Ann and Louise told Tom and Peter that they would do as they asked and date each other so they could continue the relationship of having the girl/girl, boy/boy couples without any suspicions from other people. As the story goes along Peter becomes the executor of both his uncles estate and then he was made the executor of his uncles lover's estate and when he died Peter got to where after JB died of cancer and Peter became the executor of his estate had about $100,000.00 and it's all tied up so he can't get it. The thing that I think is great is that Tom, Peter, Ann and Louise have done is that they've all graduated from college and then went on to further their education all paid by Peter's uncle Will. Both couples have a son and a daughter each and are very happy in their lives. I think it's great that Henry and Seth are very happy as well. I hope that everyone will live a very long and happy life because they deserve that much. Thanks for writing this story.
  9. Great chapter. I love the fact that Tom, Peter, Ann and Louise are living together in the 2 apartments now Tom and Ann have a daughter who is loved by both couples. I love the way that everyone has a turn at feeding, changing diapers, bathing, and playing with her. I think this baby will grow up to know what it's like to have parents and their lovers who all love and care for her which she could then apply to her own life and children when she's an adult. I kind of remember what it was like to be born and raised in the 60's as I was born in 1960, those were different times in which to raise a child. At the same time I think it was a dirty trick that Mary pulled on Tim and Ralph going to Tim with the story of going to Pittsburgh to visit her cousin and then hopefully get a job at the Wonder bakery/store. Then up and leaves her own 2 boys with Tim and Ralph to take care of for the weekend. I'm very glad that Tim and Ralph rose to the responsibility of caring for the boys and even changed the way that they slept with each other and both helped to care for the boys. On the Sunday that Mary was supposed to be back to get the boys Tim gets a phone call from Loretta who was Mary's best friend saying that he needed to comes to her house as she has a letter from Mary and 2 boxes in the shed. After attending church and then having dinner with his parents Tim went to Loretta's house where they sat down on the porch swing where he read the note that Mary asked Loretta to give it to Tim. Tim read that because of the way things were with her mother having sex with many different men who at times finished with her mother then they would come to her room and then rape her, she had to get the boys out of that environment for their own good. Mary said she lied about going to Pittsburgh to visit her cousin but that she went somewhere else and she was giving the custody of the boys to Tim and Ralph with the understanding that they don't let Henry, who is the boys father ever see or touch the boys because he gave up his rights to be their father when he left while Mary was still in the hospital after giving birth to their 2nd son Charlie. Tim is supposed to let Loretta read the note and then let anyone else read it to prove that she had given Tim and Ralph the boys to raise. The boxes that Mary put in the shed for Tim was filled with the boys clothes, toys, and books for the boys, he was to tell the boys that she loved them and that they were supposed to stay with Tim and Ralph from now on. I hope that there won't be any trouble from Henry about the boys. I'll have to read the next chapter to find out what happens.
  10. Butcher56

    Chapter 36

    Another great chapter. I feel bad for Kohen as he was used as a pawn in a very elaborate deal. I don't know what the end game was that Lakshou had planned for Kohen as he was caught before it could be used. I hope that Kohen will get better as time goes by. I hope that Kohen and the captain will stay close as I think Kohen will need him more than ever. I really wonder when Lakshou injected Kohen and then how did he get Kohen to do what he did? I'll have to wait until the next chapter comes out to find out what is going to happen with Lakshou and possibly the reason behind it.
  11. Butcher56

    Chapter 28

    Another fantasicly great chapter in the story of Peter and Eric. I think it's great that they have been so well accepted by the majority of the people of the world. I love the way that Peter and Eric informed Boris that he was ordered to go on a honeymoon with Yuri while the prince's Ivanov take their honeymoon. It's great that Drew and Wayne came to Boston and will fly back to England with Peter and Eric when they go to tape an episode with the Gharam Norton show. It's also very nice that Eric's grandmother was able to come to Boston again to visit with Eric, Peter, Yuri, Boris, Drew and Wayne. I love how Katrina told Drew and Wayne that if they continue to call her Mrs Sams then she would call them by their given names. I believe that this is the first time Drew and Wayne saw the house that Peter and Eric are living in right now. I hope that the Graham Norton show taping goes as well as it did for the Ellen DeGeneres show, I know that security will be tight as Peter and Eric are starting to get some people who are against the marriage not just because it's a prince and a commoner but because of who they love. I'm glad that Katrina said that she would come to Boston again to visit then fly to England with them and then fly home with Eric and Peter before heading back to Charleston until the time to fly to Makarovia for the wedding. The one thing I have figured out about Katrina is that she's one strong woman who gets her way, and being Russian doesn't hurt either. I look forward to more chapters in the continuing story.
  12. This was another great chapter. I loved the way this chapter came out, I think it's great that Robbie is making more friends. I hope that everyone enjoyed the trip to Niagara Falls. I loved the way that Nathan and Robbie were both having some fun while others around them were having an issue with it. Don's warning that Robbie and Nathan needed to keep their actions PG even though all they were doing was kissing. I loved the way that Robbie made the comment about English tourists were everywhere now a days then he switched to talk like the way that most people think the Canadians talk by saying "I know eh, they're just aboot everywhere". I think Jaime is going to fit in real nice with this bunch of characters. I hope that Robbie can get to the bottom of what's going on with Alex as he was being very grouchy when he and the other guys got back from Niagara Falls, when Robbie tried to find out what the problem was Alex got upset and told Robbie to just go to sleep. I hope that Tom enjoyed all the time he got to spend with Robbie and his new family as well as the extra trip to Niagara Falls with the guys. It didn't say if Robbie and Tom got to spend any more time together at the falls or not. I can't wait to read what happens next for the characters in the story. Thanks for writing this amazing story for us to enjoy.
  13. Another great chapter. It seems like the more guys Tom and Peter meet the more sex they have with the older men who are looking for a young man who is willing to be a playmate for awhile. I hope that these sexual activities continue for the guys as they have quite a following of older men who are willing and able to be pleasured and pleasure them back. I hope that all goes well at Kent Universty for not only Peter and Tom but for Ann and Louise as well as they're all starting at the same time. I'm glad that the friendship between these two couples has remained strong despite the fact that Tom and Peter have had more experience with the same sex, I don't know what kind of experience the girls have since nothing's been said about their experiences other than the ones between them selves and the few times they've all been together.
  14. Another great chapter. I think the way that this chapter was a great way to explain why Sean is gay as well as being a priest in the Roman Catholic Church, it also gives him the chance to teach a couple of young men who have began to have a sexual love for one another. I hope that by Sean doing what he is that Tom and Peter will have a better understanding of how to go about continuing their sexual activity and the best way to explore how to properly learn about fucking and what the roll of each partner whether their a top or bottom or even if they like it both ways. I have a feeling that this trip to Sean's farm is going to be more than just a few days of work on minor repairs of the farm buildings, I think it's also going to be a teaching tool as well. I love the way that this story has gone from a jock needing to get back home early so that he could take his parents to the airport to two young men easily talking to each other on the bus ride home to them learning about the male anatomy and the differences between the two of them to liking the way that they can pleasure each other. Then they find a couple of young women who are having the same kind of relationship as Tom and Peter, then after talking to the girls it's decided that they will become couples who are boyfriend/girlfriend around others. Then the girls get the guys to come over to the house of one of the girls after her parents go out of town for the evening and then use the time to learn about each other's bodies and the differences between them for example how Peter's circumcised and Tom isn't. Peter explains why they're different. After doing a great deal of research he had a lot of information about the differences between being cut and not cut and why they're different and why some guys who aren't circumcised have to be cut due to the fact that their foreskin as the extra skin on a man's penis is so tight that they aren't able to clean underneath it so they wind up with infections. Not only do the girls see what the guys look like naked and are able to touch them and learn how to suck the guys dicks and watch them jack off then suck each other's dicks, the guys get a chance to see what the gals look like naked and then they learn how to masturbate the gals as well as finger fucking them and also licking their pussies and then watching the gals finger each other. The whole situation with Tom and Peter going with Sean to the farm is because Tom talked to Sean about the fact that they were in a relationship with each other and wanted the advice of his priest. I hope that everything goes well for them while at the farm.
  15. I think it's great that Peter's little brother Ronnie came to Peter for the talk. Peter explained how to jack off or masturbate and had Ronnie copy what he was doing, when Peter came Ronnie was curious about that and Peter told Ronnie to come back when he started producing sperm. Ronnie was in Peter's bed one night when he got home from his date with Louise which is only for show, he was actually with Tom, any way Peter told Ronnie that they could talk about Ronnie cumming after church and dinner at home after church, they could go for a bike ride at which time Peter could answer any and all questions Ronnie might have. That Saturday night was the basketball game at school and Peter and Tom were to go so they could be with their dates and then go out afterwards. Peter went downtown to supposedly research information about history for a paper that was due the following week. Peter and Ronnie did go on their bike ride, they went to the park where Peter did tell Ronnie what it means to cum and also told him that he had a book that would give him more information. Great chapter
  16. Thanks for writing such a great story, I really loved it, some of the things that these young men went through in high school I went through in middle school or junior high. I'm glad that Aidyn and Noah are going to stay together even though Aidyn is going to college. I hope that It all works out for the best possible life for all the gang of friends and family.
  17. Another really great chapter. I think it's great that Mr Scott is talking to Aidyn, Sky, Noah and Greyson about what he said the day after New Years Day as he said he talked to Aidyn and Noah, then Aidyn and Sky, then Sky and Greyson he apologized to each group. I'm glad that he said that he was very sorry for the word's he said as well as saying that he had been to some meetings which has helped him and his thinking. I love the way that Jackson tired his best to play the victim of a frame up by Aidyn, Jackson was doing his best to get Aidyn kicked off the team and then out of school. Jackson tried to say that the phone with the video of Noah getting beat up was Aidyn's, Aidyn was asked by the principal if that was his phone, when Aidyn pulled his phone out of his pocket Jackson tried to say that Aidyn had the video made with his phone then got it sent to the phone's owner. The only way to make that work would require Aidyn to take Jackson's phone. The principal got tired of Jackson saying that he was being set up by Aidyn, and then said they would see what's on the video, at which time Aidyn took that moment to leave the coach's office with permission from the principal who said he could leave just having to wait outside the office in case he was needed again. A little while later Jackson and his parents came out of the coach's office with him hanging his head. Jackson saw Colton and his head turned down in shame turned into a glare until he was out of sight. The coach came out and said that the video was clearly Jackson who could be heard in the video and that he was off the team and he was facing expulsion along with 2 others who were on the way to the principal's office and they were also off the team and facing expulsion as well. The coach told the boys who were outside his office not to go spread this information to the rest of the team like wildfire and he was told not to worry about it and that it would be done if they were to say anything or not, after that they had a great practice.
  18. Another great chapter. I'm sure glad that Mr Scott is calmer now since he started attending the meetings for parents who are having trouble accepting who their children are or who they love. I think it's great that Mr Scott is such a nice person now and is able to talk to the boys and even their choices of partners, like how he was able to come in from work and get a whiff of the house after Sky and Greyson have been baking ever since Greyson got to their house where he's going to be staying for almost a week while his parents go out of town for a business trip. Mr Scott tasted a few of the things that Sky and Greyson baked then after complimenting them for the sweets then he asked Greyson what it was like to be blind. Greyson told him that he had to focus more on his other senses such touch and hearing, he told Mr Scott that he knew there was a trashcan in a certain spot and that he was still in his uniform and that his belt was a bit bulky that every time Mr Scott moved he could hear it, Greyson also told him that the information about his other senses being enhanced was pure fiction and that his mom was always having him checked out for all kinds of things and that he had his hearing checked yearly and that he had some hearing loss although it wasn't very bad. I think the way that Mr Scott told Aidyn to get his jacket on and then he would take him to the hospital where Noah was after getting beat up. Aaron called Aidyn to let him know that Noah was in the hospital after getting off the phone with Aaron Aidyn went down to the kitchen where his mom told him to go wash up for dinner and that's when he said he had to get to the hospital, this is where Mr Scott told Aidyn to get his jacket on and to get their dinners into some Tupperware containers and then they would go to the hospital. After Aaron, her parents, Noah and Aidyn got back from the hospital Noah and Aidyn were sitting on Noah's bed in just their underwear watching a movie when Aidyn asked Noah who had beat him up and Noah said he would tell him after the movie ended when it did Noah got up to stop the movie while Aidyn sat on the bed checking Noah out in his briefs. When Noah told Aidyn who had beat him up came with a stipulation that Aidyn had to promise Noah that he wouldn't allow him to get back at the guilty parties, after he made the promise to Noah on his life he wouldn't break it, Noah told Aidyn who the people who did it was Jackson and his group. When Aidyn went to school the next morning he ran into Connor who asked where Noah was and then Aidyn told Connor what happened and who is responsible and also the promise to Noah. Anyway after meeting up with Leo and relaying the tale again including his promise, Leo said they should go talk to Colton they found out that Jackson did it because he was jealous of Aidyn, Aidyn got so mad that he had to go outside to walk around the school in order to cool down before he broke his promise, Aidyn ran into Bryce while walking around the school and he told him about everything and then Bryce said that Jackson always records his bad things and Bryce asked him to trust him and let him work his magic and more than likely he would get his hands on the recording. They knew that if they had the recording then Jackson wouldn't be a problem anymore.
  19. Another great chapter. I'm taking the suggestion that you want the readers to comment on how they like the story. I can tell you that I love this chapter and story it's not a bad story. I think the way that the characters interact with each other says allot of who they are. It makes me feel like a person in the story off to the side just observing the day to day actions of them, I have just one character that I don't like and that's Jackson his actions tell me that he's trouble with a capital T. I have a feeling that he's going to be a problem for Aidyn, Noah and Skyler, just the way that he did Sky at the party and then when he started trying to get Aidyn to fight him by his words and actions says he's going to be trouble. After that Jackson got ahold of Noah and tried to cause him some problems only he and his protege got caught by a teacher before they could do something to him. Then the coach for the soccer team made Aidyn the co captain and that made Jackson mad he came out of the gym and proceeded to tell Aidyn that he and his group wouldn't do anything Aidyn told them to do either in practice or a game and Aidyn just told him that if he wanted to do that then he could get used to not being on the team. I hope that Aidyn and Skyler's dad calms down and sees that he has two great boys and even though they won't be giving him any grandkids doesn't mean that they deserved what he said about the fact that their both gay is a good enough reason to continue to say what he did. Although I don't think the way Aidyn handled it was a very good way to say what he did was any better, I think the point was made. I think the way the boys mom handled their father was a very good way to make him see that there's nothing wrong with the boys because they happen to be in love with another boy, hopefully the meetings for parents of children who are LGBT aren't damaged or even forced into the decision they made will help him to accept them for who they are.
  20. Another great chapter. It's sad that Noah had to be the one to say they were done, Aidyn's lack of courage to stand up and say he was gay brought on the decision Noah made. I hope that before the day is over that Aidyn will become brave enough to stand up and say he's gay and then find out who is true friends are. I think this will either make or break the relationship between Aidyn and Noah, the balls in Aidyn's court if he doesn't get up and then tell everyone who's supposed to be his friends and if they walk away then they weren't true friends anyway. I think that's the only way he's going to keep Noah from walking out of his life for good.
  21. I hate to see a young boy or girl assaulted by an older teenager or even an adult. I'm sorry that Noah had to be the one to read the diary or journal whichever you want to call it to find out the reason for his brothers suicide. The reason he killed himself was because he couldn't be sexually assaulted by the babysitter Kaleb, Kaleb was even taking Ryan to give blowjobs to the swim team and the football team also only with the football team Ryan was not only giving the whole team blowjobs but was also forced to let whoever wanted to have the opportunity to fuck him for $20.00 which was paid to Kaleb. The reason Ryan kept allowing Kaleb to do what he was because Kaleb told Ryan that if he didn't do what he wanted then he would get Noah to take care of his needs. I hope that Noah doesn't start having nightmares over this discovery. I also hope that Aidyn is able to help Noah get through this without any diffdifficulty. Great chapter it's very well written and gives a great deal of information about the aftermath of rape.
  22. Butcher56

    Chapter 35

    I never saw Lakshou as a threat to Kohen, he's always tried to look out for Kohen. I guess that goes to show you it's usually the quiet ones that you have to watch out for. I hope that Kohen will be able to move forward with his life as a man and not think of himself as a lab experiment, he needs the opportunity to see what he can accomplish on his own. He may choose to stay aboard the ship with the captain and become a part of the crew doing whatever he can do. I think it's great that the captain and Deke are very aware of what happens aboard the ship, especially when there's a threat to one of the crew. This may only be because of Kohen or not who knows they may have been aware of the fact that there was a threat aboard the ship prior to the rescue mission of Kohen and others who were picked up in the same raid. I think Lakshou was waiting for the ship to get back into regular space before he took control of Kohen so that he could turn Kohen over to the Bronx Consortium in order for them to take Kohen apart and use his body parts for other experiments. This was a great chapter showing just how aware you are when you suspect that there's a threat to the freedom of the people or the crew of a ship sent to raid a lab where people of many races and species are being held against their will.
  23. Another great chapter. I think it's great that Aidyn has a good friend and possibly a boyfriend as well. It seems like Greyson is fitting in very well despite the fact that he's blind. I think Noah and Aidyn make a great couple, I really love the way that they became lovers and that was at a party hosted by Noah's cousin Aaron who he lives with due to the fact that first his brother commits suicide, then his dad gets sent to Afghanistan by the military and is killed in the line of duty after only a month and then his mom gets depressed and sinks lower and lower then overdoses on the antidepressant that she was taking. Noah was by himself at the party and then when Aidyn finds him and they shake hands sparks flew for each other and they quickly go to Noah's bedroom and strip their clothes off and begin pleasuring each other. I hope that they stay together. Sky and Greyson are quickly becoming inseparable friends.
  24. After reading just a few chapters I'm starting to get the way the characters interact with each other. I think it's a good story so far, I'll have to wait for a few more chapters before I can get to where I can really say anything about the story. Aidyn is an interesting character after going to a party at the house of an acquaintance who has been seen with a boy named Noah who Aidyn wanted to get to know. Aidyn went in search of Noah and found him in a room playing videogames, Aidyn started talking to Noah and they quickly left the videogames and went to Noah's room. Once the door was closed they were both kissing each other and feeling each other up then wind up naked and enjoying the body of the other boy. I think it's great that Skyler aka Sky is showing Greyson around so that he could get used to where all of his classes are and the other places he would possibly need to go. It was a little bit rude of Sky to tell Greyson that his phone was just a few feet away and that he could have easily found it by looking, Sky found out after he made the comment that Greyson is blind and then said he would escort him around after finding out that they were in the same grade. I hope that Greyson, Sky, Aaron, and Booker all become good friends. It'll be interesting to see if Aidyn and Noah's one night of romance continues to grow into a strong relationship.
  25. Butcher56

    Scene 63

    I hope that Nessa and Kris are found safe by Monday. I think that Unn is being very mean even if what she said has any truth to it. It would be nice if we had a bit more information about Lorant than we have right now. Myself I would like to know how it was chosen to watch over the kids, what makes Lorant any more qualified than anyone else? I'm glad that Lydia is still writing in Nessa's journal every day that she's missing, I'm sure Nessa is going to be very happy to know that Lydia wrote to her everyday that she was gone. Another great chapter.
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