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I am so glad that Kao was found not guilty of infecting Dean on purpose when he fell and broke his leg while being chased by his brother's lap dog. Dean did the moral thing for Kao after seeing him go into the ravine, Dean went down into the ravine by sliding down the embankment and getting some small scrapes on his hands. When Dean asked Kao if he needed help he was told that he didn't need any help and that he just needed to rest in order to regain his strength. Dean did tell Kao that he had seen a huge wolf chasing after him and followed in case he needed help. Dean was told to have the doctor clean his wounds so that he wouldn't become infected and Dean told Kao that he was his primary concern at the time due to the fact that he had a bad break of the leg and would need more care for the injury than what he was getting at that time. I hope that Kai gets banished as well as the wolf he had watching over Kao where he felt like he was in prison. I like Kao's sister because she's not one to pull her punches, once she heard that Kao's mate was another male she was happy for Kao and told him and Dean that. I loved the way that Dean stood up to Kao's father in the court room when he told Kao that he had found him a mate, Dean told the Wind Master that he intended to be Kao's mate whether or not he liked it. I think it's great that Kai was slapped by his sister for almost causing an awful lot of dishonor to the family and the flock by telling his father that he should appeal the ruling of the court. I hope that there won't be any repercussions from Kai over the fact that he has just done what he wanted when it came to Kao and then hiring a hunter Lupus from another pack and basically telling him to keep Kao a prisoner because of the fact that Kao is gay and it could bring dishonor to his father and the flock if Kao was caught dating a man. I wonder what Victoria is going to say to Dean when he tells her that he was infected with the blood of Kao while he was rendering aid which turned him into a bird under a full moon. Also Dean will need to tell her that he is drawn to Kao as his mate. I don't know if Victoria knows about the Lycans or not and if so what does she know about these customs where it comes to matting.

I think it's great that the rescue mission is getting off to a start since a few thing's had to be hidden from prying eyes. I hope that everything goes well for the rescue party. It seems like the warnings Kris gave them about the security measures came in handy in the plans to get the Kris and Nessa out of the clutches of Zhofie. Why she kidnapped them in the 1st place I have no idea. I think it's great that Lydia has the ability to manipulate the earth the way she is.

I loved this chapter as well as the whole story, the characters are very fortunate to have each other. I am impressed by the writing of this story you blend everything together so well. The romance parts of the story are very well written, I would say that their written by a author who is very diligent about what he happens to be writing. I love the way that Jon and Pat found Dylan then they find out that the reason he was so fascinated by Lycans is because of the fact that he's a Solaris by birth. Another reason why Dylan was drawn to Jon is because Jon is the adopted son of Alan Davenport who happens to be the alpha of the Solaris pack in Australia. I hope that Quinn stops having the nightmares soon so that he's really able to love Zeek as much as possible.

I don't know why this story draws me in so much. When I started reading it I figured that this would be a story to get me by until the next chapter posted for a few other stories I'm reading. The more I read of the story the more that I wanted to read to see what happens next to the characters in the story. I thought it was great that Jon and Pat just happened to be in the area where Dylan and his foster parents went to camp. Because Jon and Pat were in the area they were able to make sure that Dylan was protected from lunas who were trying to murder him on the order from Angus who's supposed to be the leader in charge of the pack. I hope that Jon, Pat and Dylan can get a good sized pack going in Montana where it doesn't matter if you're Lupus, Lunais, or Solaris you're welcome to come there with us. I think it would be very wise for Angus to head Jon's warning to stay out of Minnesota, North Dakota, South Dakota, and Montana without proper authorization from Jon otherwise it would be considered an act of aggression against the packs and he would be killed. I'm glad that Travis and Alan are in agreement with Jon on this issue and they're giving him the ok to form his own pack.

It's sad that no one remembered Artie's birthday which made him a little bit down in the dumps. It turns out that they didn't really forget because they never knew. I'm glad that Artie had some great birthday sex with Dizzy, and then Artie spent the night atCharlotte's house where he finally told her that it was his birthday. Charlotte texted Dizzy and let him know about it being Artie's birthday and then Dizzy arranged it from there so when Artie and Charlotte got to his house after going to church with her family and then out to lunch after Artie opened the door and turned on the light he got a surprise. Dizzy had arranged a surprise party for Artie, where he got the baseball mitt and bat that he'd been looking at on his phone which was a very nice gesture of Adam. During the party Artie got a phone call from Sadie to wish him a happy birthday and to tell him to be expecting a few more pictures of him and his mom, Sadie also told him that his grandparents were considering hiring a lawyer to get custody of Artie back from Adam even though it was spelled out in his mom's will that she wanted Adam to have custody of Artie so that they would have nothing to say about it. I hope that Artie will let Adam know right away about his grandparents.

Another well written chapter as well as this part of the story. I think the Jeweler may have finally found a way to get Justin to take him serious. I hope that Taryn will be ok, or is this another ploy to get Justin to focus on the emotional roller coaster he's been riding for a very long time. I feel that what Justin has been through during his short childhood. I think that if Justin had the availability of the extras when he was being beaten on by his father when he was younger than he is now, Justin would have had to turn around and use these talents on his dad. I wonder if the 1st time his mom started to get to the point where she had to rely on the alcohol in order to be strong for Justin. I think that might've been the only way that she knew how to get rid of her pain. I love the way that Justin and Taryn's love for each seems to bring out the best in each other. I think it may be a good spot to leave the guys in so that I can go to the next part of the story.

I think it's great that Justin was finally able to get to the point where he was ready to meet the Jeweler aka Fabian Lockheart. I was worried for a few moments when Justin found out that Taryn was worried about him and came to where Justin was supposed to meet the Jeweler only to be stopped by the security and then they were going to hurt Taryn and Justin couldn't allow that to happen. I love the room that the boys decided that they would have, it was like 1000 times more luxurious that the trailer they lived in at the junk yard. It seems like they enjoyed the 1st night of many they would spend in their room at the Jewlers building. They made love twice before the daylight put them to sleep and now that they've awakened to a new night, they get up and shower together in their on suite bathroom. After their shower there was a knock at the door and Justin answered it to find bookworm standing there along with a couple of servants who had clothes for both boys so their clothes including their shoes could be cleaned. Justin was taken back up to the rooftop greenhouse where he found Mr Lockheart sitting down getting a haircut, he had Justin sit down across from him while he started telling Justin to tell him about who Justin is. I hope that Richie is going to continue his crossover and will be cancer free when he wakes up, hopefully Justin will be able to go back to Jeremy's place to see how he's doing and that he'll be able to be there when Richie wakes up. I hope that Richie won't be mad at Justin for making him a vampire as well and that they continue to be great friends for an eternity. I hope that Richie will accept Justin for his sexual orientation and also accept Taryn as Justin's boyfriend and they'll all be friends.

These extras are starting to give Justin an idea of what they can do. I think he needs to figure out one of the extras before he goes to far and isn't able to get out of it. I hope that they can get to the hospital before it's to late to save Richie. They need to get to Richie before Alec does or he could be killed by Alec just because he's friends with Justin. I think with the Jewlers help Justin might just be able to get rid of the rage he still carries with him from when he was a normal person. I can't wait to read if they make it to the hospital in time or not.

Great chapter it's so nice that Brady and Ember were able to bring Ember's niece with them on the trip. It was very nice that AJ and Novy were able to drive one vehicle while Brady, Ember & Ember were in the other vehicle. It shows that the boys are getting to be able to do something with kids their own age without any adults watching them like a hawk not really trusting them. I hope that the boys use good judgment while they go to the show and fireworks afterwards. I can't wait to read what happens next for the group.

I wonder how Alec is able to find Trevor, Justin and Taryn so easily? I'm hoping that Comicality is able to get away from his hiding place to talk to Justin so he can be able to possibly shed some more light on Justin's situation. I hope that Justin finds what he needs in order to stay on the good side and not give in to the darkness of his memories. I hope that Taryn will open up to Justin and tell him why Alec is so angry with Taryn. I think if Justin can open up with someone else on the lot like Jun or Doc this way he might let go of the past that's holding him hostage and not letting him move on.

I must say that the now known Rage is actually Taryn's brother Alec Justin will have to figure out how to defeat Alec without killing him. I don't know why Alec blames Taryn for everything that's happened to him, Taryn took him back home to where he thought he'd be safe. Because of the hatred that Alec feels he's out to destroy Taryn's life and will more than likely kill him just to watch his hatred for Taryn to keep him supplied with anger, rage. When Taryn said goodbye to his human life he promised him so many things. I hope that Taryn has the strength to help Justin fight Alec without any more destruction by Alec. I just hope that everyone heals quickly because the battle is far from being over, in fact I would say it's gotten more difficult for all of them. I hope that Taryn doesn't die trying to fight Alec even though that's what the prophecy says will happen. Good luck to them all their going to need it.

It appears that rage has been busy making short work of the club. I think it's an awful thing to have so much rage built up with no release. I hope that Justin will be able to get the help he needs to in order to hopefully get some control over the extras he seems to absorb no matter where he goes. I hope that the family from the lot will be able to find somewhere else to hide out for awhile as the vampires who are trying to track Justin will find something else to get interested in. As it looks right now every vampire in a very large area know that Justin is the Vampire Mimic of lore who is supposed to lead the Vampire nation to the dawn. It doesn't look like they'll be able to go back to the lot.

Another great chapter. I pity Soren when Justin gets ahold of him because he won't have to worry about it being just business. I think Soren is going to want to see a doctor for the injuries he's going to get from Justin, and that's only if he lets Soren live. I think it's a very special bond that exists between Justin and Taryn, it was the reason why Justin knew where to go to find Taryn. It was why Justin knew that there was something wrong with Taryn, Dion and Dylan the night this all happens. I hope that Soren will know how much it hurts to lose someone who you love more than anything in the world. Soren is going to want to change his mantra of "It's just business" once Justin finishes with him. I hope that Justin leaves a very long line of dead bodies as he goes in search of Taryn.

Another great chapter. I really feel bad for Justin because he really doesn't understand enough to get all of the message that Comicality is trying to make him understand. I hope that Justin will be able to find a way to do what he's been destined to do but also keep Taryn close to him because he doesn't want to do anything without Taryn. I hope that Comicality doesn't have to die just because that's what he thinks he's supposed to do, and do it alone because he can't allow anyone to get close enough to anyone at all. It seems like Comicality is trying to tell Justin that because of him being the mimic that he must be alone. I think it'd be better for Justin to allow his feelings for Taryn to keep him strong enough to do what needs to be done but with a strong relationship to go along with it. I don't want Justin to be like Comicality and hold the misery of what he suffered from before being reborn into the darkness. I think if Justin can find a way to release the pent up anger and frustration he's had since before he was brought into the darkness by his love for Taryn. One thing I’ve learned from rereading this story is the way that Comicality does care about the feelings that Justin has and he’s not dismissing them he wants Justin to use the things he’s learned from his time in darkness to help guide him through the changes that are coming along with the changes Justin will make himself. Justin has a hard road ahead as he becomes the mimic of prophecy who will lead the vampires to the dawn.

Another great chapter. I hope that this plan works out for the best. When Nessa said that Kris was over in the corner whispering something, I got the feeling that he might be passing information about the rescue to Zhofie.I hope that that's not the case but I hope that they think of that themselves and then take that into account and alter their plan accordingly. I can't wait to see if the rescue mission is successful or not.

Another great chapter. It appears that Kohen was able to get a few moments of privacy to take care of a very necessary need. I hope that they can now go take care of the intruders that are trapped on the ship. I'm glad that Kohen and the captain were able to make sure that their needs were taken care of before the battle that was going to be fierce. It seems like these intruders weren't expecting to be caught like they were, as their mission was to capture Kohen so that he could do their bidding for the rest of his life, no matter how short it was going to be.

Another great chapter in the very interesting story. I hope that Taryn or someone will remember that Justin talked about another boy about his same age named Richie who has cancer. Now that Justin has his own folder he goes to the hospital to see if Richie's still there and I think Justin's thinking about crossing Richie over to the nocturnal life of a vampire. I think it's good for Justin to have the idea to bring Richie over to the life of a vampire if that's what he even wants. One thing I remember is that Justin's life was very different from Richie's because he didn't have a father that beat him all the time or a mom who spends most of her time drunk out of her mind, like Justin had. I think it's a miracle that Justin's mom even thought of reporting Justin missing. In a way I hope that Richie isn't alive anymore because I don't think the way that Justin is thinking about making Richie a vampire will solve his medical issue's like Justin thinks it will. Who knows how Richie will even react when he sees Justin for the 1st time in months especially if they were as close as they were and then Justin just disappears without a trace so to speak. I don't think that Justin is thinking clearly right now especially since he just fed and a boy about 12 saw him do it, the boy saw it all because the boy had just finished puking up the cum of Johnny who was very unhappy with the boy for puking and ruining his mood. Johnny tosses $20.00 to the boy who was trying to tell Johnny that he needed the $50.00 they had agreed to. I hope that who ever this Rage is will be caught very soon so that Justin might be able to start living again instead of being afraid to do anything that would bring the attention of the elders down upon him. If the elders send the assassins after Justin everyone who knows him becomes a target themselves.

Another great chapter. I think that Justin might be finally getting the answers he's been looking for since he started his crossover. They might not be the exact answers he's been wanting or even expecting but I think if Justin will really listen to Comicality then he might be able to do what he needs to do. It's like he was just told that having someone who he truly loves and they love him the same way then he needs to focus on the feelings he gets from that person. I know that Justin was told not to say anything to anyone about his extras as their called but he couldn't take anymore of the feeling he was getting from Taryn about why he's always taking off. One thing I know for sure is that Justin better feed and soon before he gets caught up in the hunger again. I also believe that Justin needs to have this talk with Taryn then he needs to talk to Bryson and tell him that he's been getting additional training for his extras and that he is not only a reader but a mimic as well. I hope that if he does tell Bryson about the extras and then shows him what he's been learning with Comicality. It might be a good thing for Justin because he finally levels with Bryson and that after showing him what he can accomplish with the proper training, not that the training that Bryson's been giving him also helps to teach him how to use the extras between Bryson and Comicality teaching Justin the tools he was given.

Another great chapter. Another part of the story ends with another part waiting to step up to the plate. It seems like Justin's finally going to get what he's been wanting someone to train him properly. After spending a few days in the sanctuary and then he gets a visit from Taryn who reminded him that they had a date scheduled for that night and after getting to the Navy yard Justin and Taryn were sitting looking out on the lake when Jun and Dion show up telling Taryn they need his help because Gyro left the club with someone to go get twisted on spice. When Justin asked why they needed Taryn to go get Gyro they never did answer him but when they got to the area where the spice dealers were Taryn took the lead until they got into the building. Jun and Dion then take the lead until they got to the 8th floor, where they find Gyro they go to get him out of the building so they could get him back to the lot where Bryson could hopefully do something for him. As the 5 guy's try to leave their escape is blocked by goons who want to be paid for the drug's Gyro consumed. Jun and Dion start kicking ass so that Justin and Taryn could get Gyro out of the building. It seems like a losing proposition because of one guy blocking the majority of the hits and kicks of Jun and Dion. Taryn notices someone coming from the fire escape outside the building so they started taking Gyro down as fast as possible while Jun and Dion were still battling the guy from the spice dealers. The battle came out on to the fire escape and the added weight was really starting to put a strain on the already rusted metal. It seemed like they were going to lose this battle and then the fire escape started coming away from the building so they jumped down to get away from the fire escape crushing down on them. Anyway after the battles over and the guy gets away from having his leg skewered on the metal fence, they take Gyro back to the sanctuary where they place him in the care of the medical teams at the sanctuary. Anyway Justin tells the others to trust him to care for Gyro while he's there. Later on there's a sound of hunters entering the sanctuary where Justin and Gyro are. It was during this battle that Justin would join them in fighting for all of his might. I love the way that Justin's greeted by Jenna, Max, Bryson and the other's when he returned to the lot. I'm glad that because of the way that Justin's been fighting Bryson has decided that it's time to start training him. Bryson also told Justin that the answers he's looking for aren't easy to get. Bryson also told him that hopefully the questions he has will be answered as the training goes along.

Another great chapter, as some of the other comments said I am seriously addicted to this story. I feel bad for Justin because he really can't confide in anyone about what he's going through. I can see why Justin feels like he's nothing more than a screwed up prisoner even though he isn't really one. It seems like no matter what he does or doesn't do there's always someone to tell Bryson about what Justin does since he's been being followed by the others from the lot. I hope that Tim is starting to get closer to figuring out what Justin's extras are and how to use them. I hope that even after this blow up of rage against Michael after he invaded Justin's mind and wouldn't get out all because he's jealous of the fact that Trevor is supposedly going behind Michael's back to be with Justin who's doing everything he can think of to keep Trevor away from him. It seems like Justin and Taryn may not be together anymore all because of Michael's jealousy when truth be told there's nothing at all going on between Justin and Trevor. I have a feeling that Bryson will make sure that everyone has to stay away from Justin because he'll now consider Justin a threat to the family. I hope that this doesn't bring the squad of hunters to get Justin and take him to the elders who will charge him as a threat to the whole being of vampires everywhere and then have him killed. If that happens then no one would be able to help Justin in any way. I hope that this outburst doesn't stop Taryn from loving Justin. I hope that Taryn will try to find Justin and talk to him and that Justin is able to tell Taryn about why he was very very pissed off at Michael. I hope that if he does that then they might be able to be together again. I hope that Justin finds this church that Tim said was a sanctuary for vampires who are in need of a place to stay one night or live there for a longer period of time.

Another awesome and great chapter. It seems like it's now official that Artie and Dizzy are boyfriends, true they've been dating almost since Artie moved in with Adam. I think it's great that Dizzy finally took Artie to meet his mom and also have dinner with her. I think they all enjoyed the dinner and the conversation. After dinner they went to Dizzy's room and laid on his bed watching a movie on Netflix on Dizzy's computer. I like the way that Artie described Dizzy's room. After the movie ended they left after saying goodbye to Mrs Armstrong instead of taking Artie back home right away he took him back to the first place Artie went to the 1st day he started school in San Francisco, the Golden Gate Bridge where they made it official that they were now boyfriends. When they made it back to Adam's Dizzy went around back to wait for Adam to go to bed, so Artie could sneak him in. When Artie came in Adam asked Artie if he was pushing the curfew a bit Artie told him that he still had 10 minutes to which Adam replied that midnight didn't mean for him to stay out until midnight. After Adam went to bed Artie waited until he figured Adam would be asleep then waited another 10 minutes to be sure then went and opened the sliding door to let Dizzy in and then they proceeded to shut off the light's before goings to Artie's room where Artie proceeded to take off everything except his boxerbriefs when Dizzy asked what he was doing Artie said he was getting ready for bed and after getting into bed he took his boxerbriefs off and tossed them to the foot of the bed and told Dizzy that he was waiting for him. I think this'll be a night that neither of them will soon forget about. This was another first for Artie after being told for year's that it was a sin to have feelings for another male because it was frowned upon in the bible, Artie told Dizzy that this was his first-ever time to do anything sexual. Dizzy told Artie that he could repent tomorrow to which Artie told Dizzy that he didn't need to repent because of the fact that he was doing something with the love of his life. According to Artie this wasn't a sin.

Wow what a story, I was amazed at how it all seemed to fit together so well. Gres was working as a veterinary nurse for a veterinary clinic and a horse ranch, while working at these 2 places the relative he was living with passed away and he inherited the house, car and got money from the insurance as well. It was a nice thing for him to get the insurance money which along with it Gres saved some of his wages and then started training for a great holiday for himself. After he had it all set up he informed both his employer's that he was taking a holiday, Bryce asked him if he would mind taking Ethan along as well since he would be on break from school then. Gres agreed as long as Ethan was willing to put in some extra training which he agreed to straight away. When Gres bought the trip he found out that if they left when they said they would it would've been a long layover before continuing the trip. So with a few more searches he decided that they would take the train instead of flying and that they wouldn't have such a long layover it was better than the flight. Although the train was 2.75 days it would be better for them to see some new country while onboard, during the voyage they would get off and walk around the town they happen to be in at the time this way they would keep up their stamina to be ready for their trek. Along the way Gres and Ethan meet a nice young lady Amanda and her son Tom, Ethan and Tom become instant friends and then all of a sudden Amanda takes ill and has papers drawn up stating that if she became incapacitated that Gres is to get guardianship over Tom. This very thing happens as Amanda is sickened by meningitis and is taken off the train and put in the hospital. Gres and Ethan find out about both the guardianship and that Amanda is in hospital. This is when Gres meets Sam for the 1st time as he just happened to be on the same train, the conductor saw Gres he asked if he was Gres and he replied that he is and then the conductor gave him the news and that he had been given the guardianship of Tom. It appears that Gres and Ethan have another person in their group now and they had to get him outfitted with the proper gear. As it goes the train makes a stop and Gres immediately calls his boss at the vets office and informed her of the circumstances and that he would need to stay around after the trek to be sure that Tom would be able to see his mom, she said she'd already been informed and that she had found him a position with a aquarium in the area. During this time Gres had found out that he was named as a party to his great uncles inheritance and his aunt's and uncles were doing their best to get him to sign papers stating that he wasn't interested in the inheritance, his house had been broken into and the original itinerary for the trek was taken along with other things. Gres found out that his great uncle had been murdered and that he was the suspect. The only thing's that saved him was his train tickets and that showed everywhere that he was during the time, also he had the guardianship papers for Tom. It was a few weeks after the trek that Gres and Tom made the flight to see Amanda only to find her start struggling to breathe and the nurses kind of pushed Tom out so that they could work on her after awhile the Dr asked if he could speak to Gres and then the Dr explained that no matter what they did Amanda passed away, and then Gres had to tell Tom that his mom had died. It took some time to set up for the funeral and then afterwards they went back to where they lived while Amanda was in the hospital. I'm glad that Gres got all of his great uncles estate since the aunt's and uncles were convicted of the murder and the charges of framing Gres for the murder did them all in. After all of the bull cleared away Gres contacted Sam and arranged to buy 3 islands under the name of a corporation that they set up so that no one would know who bought them or what was going to be done on them. This is how he got the house built underground and the eco camping tents set up for people to stay in for 2 days, which turned out to be a brilliant idea for a business which also includes a wildlife refuge.

Another great chapter. I agree that Paul is bad news and if they don't watch him he's likely to do something that they'll regret. It appears that Novy is shuck at home while the adults are doing thing's that they don't want to broadcast. I hope that whatever Katy is going to to tell her dad about isn't bad news. Justin might just have to come out of the closet and fess up to the fact that he and Cam are fuck buddies. I seriously doubt that he would be judged by any of them.

Another fantasicly great chapter. I can't understand why Don thinks that he is the one and only voice of reason why Robbie and Nathan shouldn't be together as a couple. I wish that Don would just keep his mouth shut and let thing's progress naturally and then when everything goes bonkers and Robbie and Nathan break up then he should be there as a caring person. I'm not saying that this will happen, I'm just saying that it might. I thought Tom was already supposed to be back in England. I hope that Robbie's 1st day back to school is a good one for him, especially since the adoption is finally done. I'm not sure what's up with Alex and his blatant disregard for the boundaries of Robbie and Nathan's relationship, trying to get Robbie in trouble for jacking him off since he says he can only use his right hand to jack off. I hope that Tom enjoyed his visit to Canada to see Robbie go through the motions of being adopted by Don and Sue.

Another great chapter. I agree with error that something seems to put Justin in a very bad mood. It seems like every time Gyro comes around Rain goes on a destructive binge trying to kill herself through all sorts of measures. I hope that Justin is able to get some straight answers from Taryn about why he's being followed. Justin has been thinking someone was following him around as he was asked by someone from the lot if he was alright after seeing Tim. I think it's time to get everyone together at one time to get answers from them all and especially Bryson because he's the leader and also tell Bryson about what Trevor wants as a reward for teaching Justin to hunt. I hope that Tim, Becca and Char will be able to come up with some answers to his inquiries for Justin before he goes crazy over everything that's been happening to him.