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Another great chapter. I hope that Lorant finds Nessa soon so that she doesn't become one of the soal less people, I hope the same for Kris as well. I think it's great that Lydia is thinking about Nessa and writing in Nessa's journal every day that she's missing, I think it helps to keep Lydia from getting depressed. It appears that Kris might've had an idea where Nessa might be so he went to find her and is now considered lost now as well. Thanks for writing this story.

Another great chapter. I hope that Kohen is able to relax and enjoy his new life as a free person instead of always thinking that the aliens that tortured him at the lab are going to be able to turn their devices back on. I hope the scans that Aparoe is doing now will make Kohen relax more than he is now, because they'll show that the devices are turned off and then Lakshou won't need to use the restraints. I truly believe that something has to happen which will allow Kohen to relax and enjoy being around people again. I can't wait to read about what happens next for Kohen and Everett and the rest of the crew members.

I have to agree with the other comments that this is a wonderful chapter very good writing and the reunion between Glaster and Kandric was great even with the mistakes made by his teacher in regards to the fact that Kandric was now a great deal higher in caste than Glaster. I hope that the information Kandric got from beating the white Dragon about the location of the base where Kandric's grandfather was with some of his students is correct or even more white dragons will fall by his hands and then his army. I don't want to be Kandric's grandfather when he catches up with him as he's going to do something that normally wouldn't be allowed because of the fact that his grandfather is a prince of Alphar lineage who has been discovered as committing a crime against the Alphar-Garm community. I hope that Kandric is able to get his students back in the same condition that they were in when he left them otherwise his grandfather will be in more trouble than he is now. I hope that those in the Alphar- Garm communities will be welcoming of Seldant due the fact that he is a halforc also he was accepted and made a guard for Kandric. I love the story and can't wait to read about what happens when Kandric catches his grandfather.

Another great chapter. I'm glad that it's kind of worked out so that Pat and Declan are true brothers. I hope that Pat can finally come to grips with the fact that he was in the car when the accident happened that their parents died and he wound up in the hospital in a coma for a month. During that time Declan got adopted by way of the Catholic church that their parents belonged to, the priest knew of a couple who were looking to adopt a child, and this is when Pat got lost in the shuffle everyone forgot about him being in Lexington in the hospital after he was released he was placed in foster care and was lost in the system. It may take quite a while for Pat to get used to the fact that he has a biological brother who he only met a few weeks ago when he came to his birthday party with the brother of his protectors Will and Liam. I hope that the wedding plans that Pat is working on with Ian and Adam will help with the struggles he's feeling inside right now. Although I know this part of the overall story needs to end I hope that it doesn't end before the wedding of Ian and Adam. Thanks for writing this amazing story.

I agree that it appears that Kohen is the one who is asking the hard questions. He's also worried about what might happen when they get to an area where they can receive radio transmissions again. According to Kohen he might be a sleeper agent who because of the materials that was put in his head he could snap Everett's neck while they sleep. He would do this and have no choice in the matter due to the hardware in his head which could possibly turned on once they get to where they're able to receive radio communications again. I hope that the fears that Kohen has are just fears and nothing else, he would need to be proven wrong and then it would still be in the back of his mind he just wouldn't voice his thoughts on the matter. I think it would be great if he could just be normal again even though he has all of the hardware in his head. Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next chapter of the story to see if Kohen's concerns are correct or not. Thanks for writing this amazing story.

Another great chapter in the continuing story of the VUN. I love the reception and the way that Betty went to speak to Stan's mom who seemed to be having a problem with the fact that Stan married Mark. While speaking to her Betty found out what Stan went through as a young boy, Stan was molested by his uncle and that's why his mom was having the problem. Stan's mom felt that Stan started liking men due to the fact that Stan was molested by his uncle, Betty told her that that he didn't like men because of the abuse he's suffered from as a boy. Betty also told Stan's mom that Stan and Mark both married strong men who didn't fit the stero type that says that if a man is gay then he's limp wristed and very feminine and neither of them fit in that category. I hope that George is going to be alright after getting kidnapped while he and John were on their honeymoon. Colin, Devon and Ruben will get the ball rolling as they put together a plan to rescue George. It shouldn't be to difficult to locate him with his personal safety disc in. They'll have to get a few more people to help with the rescue of George. I can't wait to read about what happens next for George, and the rest of the VUN family. Thanks for the great story, I hope that your employer hires someone soon so you can have some time to relax.

It appears that Kandric has found something that's been hidden for possibly centuries. Especially since the writing predates the mythling writing, as it's a form of pre Mythling war Elvin writing since Kandric is able to read Alphar and Mythling he was able to tell the Duke there was a very serious problem with the iron gate that was used to seal the entrance Kandric found. It's going to be very interesting in the next chapter of the Kandric Saga.

Another great chapter in the continuing story of the Wentworth men and their extended family of the people who they helped regaining the humanity they had lost. I'm glad that they're getting married and they all chose Colin and Devon to be their best men. It seems like the weddings always take place at Wentworth Manor which is great because it shows that the love is there on both sides. I hope that Chuck and Amanda are next in line for a wedding and it'll be at Wentworth Manor as well.

I have a feeling that the Bronx Consortium has someone in Central Space doing the transfer of the victims of the Consortium held at these bases and labs to other facilities. I think Kohen has figured out that the ones that were supposed to be home again and to new lives. Kohen asked the captain if he ever followed up with any of those that he and his crew rescued, I have a feeling that he never did any type of follow up with those who have been rescued previously. Kohen has an idea that they might've just been moved at the request of the Consortium through someone at Central Space, if they were then the captain has been lied to all along. The question is who wanted the lab where Kohen and the other's were rescued from raided and who said the captain was to get the bigger ship and crew for the rescue? I hope that the feeling Kohen has turns out to be just nerves and that the victims are all very safe and enjoying the freedom again. Great chapter it's definitely worth the time to read it.

This was a really fantastic chapter in the story about 2 great men who have started out being boss and employee, Colin and Devon. It has since expanded the parameters of the story and has added new characters who mostly become family members, as well as expanding the Holm's Laboratory to what's now the U.S. headquarters of the VUN. I'm glad that Mark and Stan's families get along so well together, once they arrived at Wentworth Manor for the wedding of Mark and Stan it was so nice as Devon stated that the extra leaves had to be put in the table and another table had to be put in the music room for the people who wouldn't fit around the regular dinning room table. I'm glad that Betty and Gabriella were the wedding planners for this multi couple ceremony as there are 5 couples tying the knot in this wedding. The day after Stan and Mark's families arrived Kevin and Ellis arrived along with George, John, Gaius, Vlad, Wayne, and Amasis all arrived. With them came Wayne's daughter Katy, her husband Sean, their children Karen, Scott and Kelly. Gaius had his family members arrive with him and Vlad also, Nicolae, Helga and their children Rica, Gina and Jan. Also guests that arrived were Mitch, his cousins David and Sasha, then Ruben Chance, his wife, Amanda, Chuck, Edwin, Matt from VUN-GB. I can't wait to read about the weddings and afterwards. Love the story, I'm glad that it gets better with every chapter. Thank you for writing this amazing story.

Another great chapter in the continuing story of the VUN. I hope that you are able to get the cataracts removed before it becomes a serious problem, I for one would miss your stories. I know the rings are supposed to be a symbol of the love you have for one another but I never thought about them having a meaning such as you used for Wayne and Amasis. I love the way you describe the rings with each one having the infinity symbol on them which fits Wayne and Amasis perfectly. I hope that Stan can figure out what his and Mark's rings should be like. I think it's great that Colin and Devon are helping each couple with their honeymoon as well as providing the weddings for all 5 couples at Wentworth Manor as well as having a place for the families to stay while they're staying there for the weddings. It's going to be hard for Stan to be away from Buddy for the 2 weeks he'll be gone on his and Mark's honeymoon. I'm sure it might be difficult for someone else to do the job that Stan does with Buddy and I also think it might just wind up with a bunch of things for Stan to do when he gets back to work. I'm glad that Devon and Colin spoke to George and Kevin about including Dr Bill Canaday into the discussion about what's happening with the venom as well as what happens when a person is bit and becomes a vampire to their DNA. I understand that George and Kev have been studying this for longer than Bill's been alive but he's there and he's a doctor and a scientist as well. It may take some time to get him totally up to speed on this but I think another mind might be a great thing as he may see something they missed. I can't wait to read about what happens next for the VUN.

I haven't been able to go to the patreon page as of yet due to an unfortunate situation with my income being taken away from me. I hope that Nessa is alright and she's able to go back to the house very soon. I think it's great that Lydia is thinking about what Nessa could be going through and wants to have Unn feel the same way without having to leave the house. Lydia's feelings for Nessa show in the writing she's doing in Nessa's diary, Lydia just lets her feelings flow right on to the page. I love the way Lydia says that if she has to ask for her emancipation early in order to be able to go out and look for Nessa. I don't know what Kris feels about Nessa being gone. Lorant must not give up on finding Nessa or her coming back home into the loving arms of Lydia. Another great chapter in the saga of Nessa. I hope that your business trip goes well for you and then you'll be back to write more of the story.

I think Aster is more in love with Pocet than he realized. I know that from reading the beginning of the chapter that Aster is making a very special weapon for Pocet out of a Elvin Silver Short Sword and a Dwarven Blue Steel Scimitar. It seems like Sardan is impressed with Pocet as to his offer to Pocet to become his apprentice in the ways of a Swordsman at least at the gulided level of at least Expert, Master or Teacher. Sardan knows how Pocet feels for Aster and also how Aster feels about Pocet, these feelings are going to have a bearing on the decision Pocet makes about the offer made by Sardan. I truly hope that Kandric doesn't take the offer made by Monarch, and I hope that Vondum realizes that his working for Monarch has been a very big mistake and could get him into a whole lot of trouble. Glaster is finally learning about the switch made between Prince Klandon and Prince Zoldon who was supposedly dead and buried. Glaster was listening to Klandon who is having nightmares and by looking for any signs of tampering on his body and found the runes that were placed on his ankle had been changed to be for implanting false memories and the other is to make someone forget. I hope that Glaster is able to do something for the false Klandon before he's made to do something that he doesn't want to. Great story.

I have to say that all in all Robbie's birthday is off to a great start. I think the spat with Daniel was going to happen sooner or later, but since Sue decided that Rory would sleep in Daniel's bed and Daniel would sleep on the pull out with Robbie. Although I think it would've been better if Robbie and Rory slept on the pull out and Daniel would sleep in his own bed. Because Daniel is a wild sleeper poor Robbie didn't get much sleep. I liked the way Robbie went to help Alex put his shirt on because he was having trouble with it. When Robbie and Nathan got to Palm Springs motel and got into the room it didn't take Nathan long to get out of his clothes by giving Robbie his own personal strip show. After Nathan took off his briefs and gave Robbie a good look at his butt then turned around and gave him a great view of his penis which was hard and standing at attention waiting to get taken care of for the first time that day, and definitely not the last time either. I really don't see Alex and Robbie together as a couple, I for one think it would be a very bad thing for Nathan as it might just send Nathan into a downward spiral. I hope that Alex finds someone who can make him happy like Nathan and Robbie. Thanks for writing this amazing story of how the sudden loss brought about several changes for Robbie and how much he's weathered the storm of moving from England to Canada to live with his aunt and uncle at his mom's request and then the eventual adoption. Having gone from having a relationship with Tom while Robbie's mom was in the hospital and after she died, then when he got to Canada he starts dating Fran before dropping her for Nathan.

Another great chapter, and as was stated before the plot thickens. I don't know what to think as to the question were they hired to take the weapon back to their superiors or to the consortium. I hope that for Kohen they can get him to somewhere else with the captain so he can be safe. It seems like someone knew about the experiments being conducted on that base and they wanted the captain and his crew to be the ones that went to the base to get everyone out. Can't wait to read more.

I also feel bad for Pat as he's been through a lot already in the time he's been alive. I know that Pat has been abused and tossed around until he met Liam and Will who made it a point of getting him away from the abusive foster home he was in and shortly thereafter he went to live with Ian. Today Pat not only has Ian to take care of him he also has Adam, Rain, and Maddy who he just adores. I hope that this house that Adam and Payne are watching doesn't turn out to be a meth lab where they can get hurt. I hope that the information Theo has dug up with reference to Delcan and Pat gives him some peace of mind. Although the way he sounded on the phone tells me that something is wrong with the original information everyone had on Pat. I hope that it isn't that both boys are actual brothers and that someone had birth certificates made up showing that they were both single births instead of twins. Great chapter it's been awhile since I've read about the characters in the story. I can't wait to read about what happens next for Pat.

I hope nothing happens to Nessa because of something that demon said to her. I really don't think Lorant is responsible for Nessa coming up missing, it sure didn't give permission for the demon to talk to Nessa alone. I'm glad that Lorant had the foresight to read Nessa's diary as a way to find out if she'd written in it as to what might've been said by the demon. I like the way Lydia writes that she would never read anything written in the diary unless Nessa gives her permission. Lorant asked Lydia to write something in the diary, although I'm not sure why she would do that, I mean when would Nessa see the entries written by Lydia or anyone else for that matter. I hope that Lorant doesn't get replaced because of this incident, I'm sure Lorant has talked to a superior angel before setting up the meeting with the demon. Great chapter.

I think Aster & Connor are good together with the abilities each has when they get into a battle. Although Connor may be able to get more than just a few goblins, or whatever they happen to be fighting as he has some knowledge that Aster has due to the fact that the training Connor has is outlawed everywhere. I hope that if they get into another battle that the gods will help with the battle again. Handri is going to need a lot of help from the healthman because of the injuries he has to his leg, he may not have a choice as to whether he'll lose his leg or his life. With the leg fracture the way it is and the blood loss he's already had due to the other injuries he had will be the deciding factor, it appears that after what Aster said Handri may not have any choice of losing his leg or not because they have to move him so he can heal if not he's going to die right where he is. I think the deal that Kandric and Vondum made with Gablon for what two member's of the caravan did to Kandric when he was in town to try to find food or work so that he could help support his family. One of the boys who helped to torment Kandric has already gone to see Kandric to apologize for his part in the attack they did. When he went to apologize to Kandric, he was hit two or three times at which time he got a broken nose. Kandric mended the boys nose and then shook his hand and said that he would like to be friends with him. I like how the deal went for Kandric and Vondum so that Porma will become an indentured servant for a period of no less than 3 years and all of the slaves in the tent where they were having a meal while being waited on during the meal were the property of Kandric now. Because the other boy took it on by himself and apologized he will be lashed 35 times with a cane, there was also something said about going to find the base of the gnolls and destroying their home permanently and all of the goods taken from there belongs to Kandric. I love the way Glaster is treating Klandon as a commoner rather than a merchant like everyone else in the caravan except for the guards that the boys hired. Glaster was hoping that Klandon would act like the immature ass he is so that he could teach him a lesson in manners that he should already know. I hope that Klandon pulls his head out of the clouds and starts acting like the world doesn't bow to his demands and tantrums before he gets himself and everyone else in trouble. I love the story and how much the way that the slaves and the indentured servants are treated along with the way some of the boys are used to help satisfy the urges of the owners. I've never read anything like this story before. I like the way that some boys will sleep with a man because they have feelings for them, that way they both get to be satisfied by the others. I can't wait to read about what happens next for the characters.

I didn't expect that Devon could get Repetate, Iustinia and Ralph to understand the concept of time and where they are on the earth. I hope that they'll be able to tell Devon, Colin, Vlad and George about what it was like when they were brought into the world and then what happened to them when they were sent away. I think it's going to be very interesting when they get to hear what it was like for them. I hope that the military personnel get to be better at not asking so many questions about who's on the serum and who's not. It seems like the sergeant is asking Devon to tell them who's on the serum and who's not. I love this chapter and story it's getting better with every chapter you write.

Another great chapter. I'm glad that everything went well for Unn as far as her getting the spell put on that keeps her from getting sick in the water. Nessa saw the way Kris acted when he saw the demon. Kris turned very pale and then ran from the room. I didn't see the Kris was a demon coming, I didn't think he was a shape shifter either. I wonder why Lorant told the demon not to tell Nessa why Kris turned pale and then run from the room? I really think Nessa is going to have to Kris about why he lost his horns and is now under the care of an angel. I guess we'll have to wait for the next chapter or so to get the answers about this. I really love the story and can't wait for the next chapter.

Another great chapter. It seems like Nessa's been requested to witness the demon put the spell back on Unn so she doesn't get sick being in the water. I understand that Nessa isn't comfortable with viewing the demon put the spell on Unn even though Lorant is going to be there as well. I hope that it goes well for Unn and then she can get back to being her usual self, and stays away from the ice cream due to the fact that she gets very ill after eating it. I hope that after this spell all four of the children will become better friends and that they can watch out for each other.

I'm glad that Colin is aware enough to see when Devon comes in the apartment that he tells whoever he's talking to that Devon has come in and he needs to get off the phone. It is very apparent that Colin's business sense is strong enough to tell others that he doesn't like the deal that they're talking about. I think the love between Devon and Colin is strong enough to stand the test of time. It appears that there's going to be a very big wedding as there's going to be several male couples who are going to be wed. It is going to be quite a job for Gabriella and Betty to plan it and still make sure that each couple has his own part of the ceremony. I hope that it goes well for all of them because they need to each have their own part of the ceremony and the decorations. I think it's great that Amasis will marry Wayne not as a god or pharoh but as a man. It's very nice of Colin to say that the weddings would be at Wentworth manor, they seem to enjoy hosting family and friends who happen to be in Charleston, South Carolina. I love the story more with every chapter.

Another great chapter in the saga of Kohen, is he going to have an issue with all of the new people he meets. I hope that the captains second Kekillill isn't in league with Ss'merit and the Trepharo otherwise that's just one more person for Kohen to worry about possibly trying to hurt or kill him. I wonder what Deke is going to say now, especially since the captain didn't want anything said in front of Kekillill. I hope that Kohen and the captain are able to get past the barrier between them so that they can possibly enjoy a relationship with each other and see where it leads them. I can't wait to read about what happens next for Kohen.

I tend to agree that the things happening to both Aster and Kandric are very similar. I think Kandric is doing what he has to in order to get the 2 boys from Vondum and doing whatever it takes is what he's doing. Aster is free to love whomever he chooses, and that happens to be Pocet. I hope that Kandric doesn't get caught in the process of trying to get the boy's away from Vondum, otherwise it might be a bad outcome for all of them. Aster's skills as a healthman are going to be put to the test with this boy because of the injuries he has. I hope that this boy isn't one of the children belonging to the man who caused the pain on Aster's friend Connor while he was locked up. I'm glad that Shade heard the boys crying from the 2nd or 3rd floor. I love the story and can't wait to read about what happens next.

I noticed that George got the scan of Ellis' brain and found what he expected to find. The scan showed the part of the brain that controls the olfactory lit up like a Christmas tree. When Ellis saw the scan and started explaining that Ellis' scent was enhanced when he was bit was the same as Colin's love of food and the taste of it was also enhanced since being bit shortly after consuming a rather large meal. I love the way Ellis slips in and out of the Cockney rhyming slang without thinking about it, if I tried it, it wouldn't come out. I think the point Devon was trying to make about the character Bert in Mary Poppins played by Dick VanDyke was that the slang that Ellis uses isn't the same as what's used today or even someone who wasn't taught the proper slang wouldn't know what it means. I'm glad that Kev and Ellis are settling into the family at the VUN. I hope that Ellis will remember the lesson he learned from Shelley for a long time about trying to protect a woman in today's society. I hope that Ellis' enhanced smell ability comes in handy next time they go out on patrol. With his enhanced smell they might just catch the wild vampire that got away from them all because he was trying to be a gentleman as he was taught as a child in which he's supposed to protect the woman. I really loved this chapter as well as the story as a whole, I've said it before but your stories seem to draw you into them in which you think of yourself as a bystander in which you stay kinda like in the shadows of the story once in awhile you'll say a few words then you're silent again.