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This was another great chapter. I really liked when Peter and Eric were in the tunnels and met up with Fedir and Kurt and stood talking to them about the changes that are happening in the tunnels. When they got back to the palace they met Olek and Helga kissing, not to be outdone Eric pulled Peter in and gave him a great big kiss. After talking to Olek and Helga for a bit they went to their room then later they went outside and saw that they were getting the ice ready for a hockey game when Eric saw that and knowing that Peter loved the game but hadn't played in awhile, and Eric used that to the effect that he urged Peter to play in the game. Peter told Eric that he would play only if Olek would play as well, so Eric and Peter went to Olek and asked him if he could possibly find the time to go out and play in the hockey game with Peter. I'm glad that they were able to play in the game and had fun doing it. I hope that we'll see more about the holiday season in Makarovia and if the ideas for anyone who wants to do a snow sculpture and possibly help build an ice castle.

As per your writing these great stories this has been another great chapter, with a lot of shuffling of duties of the characters. I'm glad that Quinn was able to stay on Ganymede to resume his duties there and to also see his family after 6 months of being separated from each other. This was due to the fact that Natihya could step in as Emperor as her cousin was under the weather. After Quinn and family had spent some time together they were summoned to the High Council Chambers where they were informed that the Chancellor Mr Dennison wished to retire from his position and had requested that the Regent Natihya be appointed by the Emperor as the new Chancellor and Quinn be the new Executive Ambassador between Shandrol and Earth as well as retaining his title of Lord, their oldest son Maenyl becomes Cadet Ambassador due to the extra studies he's been doing. After a few days of rest Quinn and family had the privilege to accompany the Emperor to see the Space Research and Training Academy on Mars as well as the Space Shuttle Scorpion. It appears that the Emperor And Chancellor were very impressed by the work that has been done. I'm glad that the International Space Foundation has worked with the United Republic of Planets to get the right number of people in place where they were wanting them. Some members of the new ISF will be stationed at the Lunar Base named Prometheus and they have accepted the recommendation of the URP to rename Uranus to Sunaru which is Uranus spelled backwards. The members who will be going to Prometheus will be trained and taught about living in space and on another planet. I hope that it will all work out and better communication and Diplomacy will be the way to repair the damage done when the URP went before the United Nations Security Council. I can't wait to read what happens next. Thank you for writing these great stories.

Great chapter as usual. I'm not quite sure that this new space initiative is going to be able to get off the ground so to speak especially when the United Nations as well as the government's of the world are going to want to control what they do. I hope that Quinn is going to be able to spend time with his family, after he gets done meeting with the Chancellor and the High Council, especially since that's the only reason he's there.

I have to agree with the other posts in saying that this was a great chapter even though Will and Darius had to relive the horror of what it took for them to get out of the South Tower while battling smoke and fire while Will was also carrying Maddie. I'm glad that Will made up the idea to honor Stef in a way that may not have been truly accurate, it appears to have made the right impact on him. I wonder what Lord Preston is up to with the cartels, I hope that he doesn't succeed in it. I'm also to the point where Zach's not calling Will of all days I think this might be the breaking point for them. It seems like Zach is pulling further away more and more all the time, when Will calls him he doesn't answer and when he does call back it's always an excuse why he didn't answer. Can't wait for more.

This was another great chapter. I'm glad that Eric is enjoying his first winter in Makarovia, especially when the temperature is a balmy 10° fahrenhite. I like the shops that have built into the underground tunnels below the city. I'm glad that the idea came to Olek about building them. I think that by widening and installing electricity and plumbing as well as a way to heat it helps go along way to making the people of Makarovia stay happy in the winter. It's also very good that the military of two countries are there and have the time to help with this project which helps them stay busy. I hope that Eric and Peter really take the time to look at the whole tunnel system so they can get a better understanding of what it's like to be able to get around town without having to brave the elements of the harsh winters they have in Makarovia. I like Peters way of getting warm after getting up to go to the toilet, when they only heat with wood it gets very cold once the fire dies down.

Another great chapter in the story of Robbie coming to Canada from England after his mom died. I think it was great of Robbie to stand up to the bully, and that even though Nathan told him to not get into a fight with the guy he would have just to get the guy to show them some respect. I think Nathan's slip up would have been a sore spot for them if Robbie had picked up on it. I'm surprised that Nathan's dad allowed Nathan and Robbie to stay together in Nathan's room when they came to get Robbie to go home. I liked the comment Nathan's dad made about them being in the next room with earplugs in, although I don't think Sue caught it though. I wonder about the sudden appearance of an unexpected visitor at the Taylor's house and what kind of trouble are they bringing. I hope that nothing happens between now and Friday so that the adoption goes on without any problems. Can't wait to read more about the stranger and the adoption.

Great chapter. I'm glad that Ian accepted the proposal from Adam, it's too bad their engagement celebration was cut short. I'm glad that Stephen was finally able to get his story told about how he was taken to the shelter and how he gets the job at the vets office where he talks to Will for the first time since before Liam was attacked. I'm glad that he's going to get a fresh start as well, I think he deserves that much at least. I can't wait to read about Lee and how he gets the chance to be a part of the family that decides to help him get back on stable ground. I love Payne and all she does to Adam just to get under his skin, it just shows how much they appreciate each other as partners. To me her showing up at the hospital when Stephen was there was kind of like Adam helping her with her dad.

I think the presidents visit to VUN went about as well as I thought it would. I'm glad that he knew enough to tell the Major General that he wanted to kept up to date on everything. I hope that what George shows the President and his explanation of the items that show the venom will be enough to really get the President on their side. All of the grandstanding that he was doing when he arrived and gripping about not having the secret service agents with him was uncalled for. I understand that the job of the secret service agents is to protect the President wherever he goes but I'm sure there are exceptions to the rule even for that. I hope that this is only the beginning of help the VUN gets from around the world. Great story I really love the way you write your stories.

I'm glad that General Curtis was able to persuade the President to come to the lab. I liked his reaction to seeing Repetate, Iustinia, and Ralph, like almost everyone else his reaction was to have the old ones killed. When it didn't happen he yelled that he wanted them killed and that was a presidential order. Then Devon spoke up and said that they would have to kill him as well if he killed the old ones, Colin spoke up saying the same thing as his husband. I think the president was shocked to hear that the people he was meeting with at the lab are vampires, but they didn't have the fangs anymore. I hope that he'll give the authorization to allow the VUN to go through the country to find other vampires who want to have a normal life again.

Another great chapter. I sure like the idea of Dr Dexter Harris from Texas brought in Dr Kevin Curtis to see for himself what was happening and where this virus came from. I think they shocked him a bit when he was told that George, John, Collin and Devon were all suffering from the virus known as V5H. Of course he didn't believe them so they took him to see Repetate, Iustinia, and Ralph after they woke up. While Devon went into the cage some, the others are going to see through a one way window. I'm sure that Kevin is going to flip out just like everyone else, he does and then they take him to Vamps where he drank about five or six drinks in a short amount of time. Colin went back to the observation room to get Devon so he could talk to Kevin and see what he thinks about all of this V5H and serum and whether or not he can help. Kevin tells the guys that they'll definitely help but he thinks they'll need more help and that would be in the case of the President of the United States. Kevin tells them that he knows someone who he thinks they can get to tell the President and that would be Major General Dr Scott Edwards. When he arrives with a captain he has the attitude like I'm too important to waste my valuable time here, Colin tells him that the reason he's there will be explained if he will just be quiet and open his mind and listen to what he is told. He didn't want to listen so they took him to the observation room where he got the first look at the reason he was there. I think his reaction was justified by his inability to get off his moral high horse and listen to what he was to be told about and shown the virus known as V5H, before he was shown the source of the virus. I hope that now maybe he'll start listening to the facts and then he can make up his mind about helping and talking to the President.

I'm glad that Will was able to straighten JJ out and maybe he'll start acting better towards others and not just think about himself all the time. Brad sure got a shock from Jake about the fact that he's immune to HIV, and that because he was shot awhile back and he was told he was lucky to be walking and moving everything else and to not focus on his dick not getting hard. Jake also has to bareback because he's also allergic to latex, when a guy fucks him they better be big enough to stimulate his prostate other wise he has to revert to using toys to get off. I think Will gave JJ some good advice for dealing with Carrulo, Will said that JJ should call Carrulo and tell him that you hope he has a great time this weekend and that he'd see him when he gets home on Sunday.

I wondered if Robbie and Nathan would ever get caught in a compromising position. I had that question answered when Daniel returns home early having forgotten something, he walked into the bedroom and catches Robbie naked and Nathan between his legs sucking his dick. I'm like Robbie about all of the frozen food Sue seems to be buying. I hope that the trip to Niagara Falls will be fun for the guys and maybe they'll have a chance to get away from Don for awhile so they could have a bit of fun without being watched all the time. I can't wait to see what happens when the adoption will finally be a reality. I'm interested to see what happens when when Don and Sue go to Nathan's house for dinner. I wonder what Daniel was asking all the questions about how old Robbie was when he first had sex. Daniel knew that Robbie and Fran having sex wasn't the first time he'd had sex and then Daniel asked if Tom was his first time, and Robbie said that it was. Daniel was right about Robbie missing Tom when he first moved from England after his mom died. I said before that I didn't think the adoption was a good idea because of Don and his whole attitude towards gays and then he has one living with him and his family, who is his nephew Robbie and ever since Robbie and Fran broke up and Robbie starts hanging out with Nathan more and more. Don already said he didn't like Nathan because of his being gay. The idea that Robbie and Nathan are going to try to get Daniel laid is funny, I wonder how long it'll take for that to happen.

This was another great chapter, filled with a lot of learning from the old ones. I'm glad that Devon thought to have Stan find a video of Tom and Jerry cartoons where they were taking a shower so that he could get Ralph to understand that he needed to take a shower. This was after Devon got Ralph to understand that he wouldn't hurt him. I'm glad that they're all learning sign language and the old ones have picked up on it fairly well although there are a few areas where they still need to understand. I wasn't surprised that Repetate asked Devon in sign language for Tom and Jerry cartoons, in other words he wanted to watch more of the cartoons. I'm glad that the symposium they did for the doctors is starting to pay off as the hemotologist named Dex from Texas is wanting to bring in a supervisor in charge of research and development from Texas Medical on Monday to show him what he wants to have the R & D help him with helping George either find a cure for vampirism or to help find a way to make the serum better and also to help with getting the vampires in their state on the serum if their not wild. It was explained that if any of the Dr's who were at the symposium that all funding for the V5H or the serum would be paid for directly from the VUN or Holms Laboratory as the Dr's know it. I'm glad that George is no longer ignoring John since the spat they had during the symposium, and that they now have an apartment one floor down from the apartment that Colin and Devon have at the VUN.

I hope not, because your muse might not be able to help you with writing these great stories the way you do.

I agree with you that the traditions are being made to fit Makarovia now. I'm glad that we feel like we're able to make the holidays our own by combining the traditions of our ancestors to fit what we like now. I like the Kings Hawaiian rolls that we haveat Thanksgiving and Christmas.

I agree that Katrina has more of an idea of what the winters are like in Makarovia than what Eric does. Although I think that he figured it out when he and Peter got off the plane, Eric found out that he was really cold before getting a fur coat, possibly bear, to wear on the ride to the castle. Even though the SUV had the heater on Eric said it was still cold just not as bad do to the fact that they were out of the wind. Once they were back at the palace they all exchanged greetings and then went to their room to sleep, only Peter had another idea of what it would be like to make love in the Makarovian winter, of course they had a bear skin covering their bed and they would be underneath it. I'm glad that Peter, Eric, Katrina, Boris, Yuri and the guards from Makarovia were able to sit down and enjoy the first ever Makarovian Thanksgiving, and the whole meal was planned and prepared for by Boris, who wouldn't allow anyone to help him with it because he was cooking for the family and that was his job and his alone. I'm glad that Eric and Peter have a better understanding of what life was like for Milo and Bren even after the war and them deciding to stay in Makarovia when the war ended. I'm glad that Dr Lowenstein was there to help the people who had trouble with what they went through before coming to Makarovia. I can hardly wait for the wedding, but first a trip to New York to appear on the Ellen DeGeneres show. I hope that they go to the VUN-US while in New York. I can't wait for the next few chapters about the adventures of the VUN. You have a few great stories going on right now, I for one am loving each of them.

As most of the others commented the story of how Milo and Bren were able to escape camp and wind up in such a great country as Makarovia. What Milo and Bren went through had to be very painful both physically and mentally, only it wasn't just them that were mistreated and abused for loving another man. I don't like to read about the ordeal they went through because of the fact that they met the paragraph 175 criteria, I do so not only because it's part of the story as well as being true historical facts. I'm glad that these recordings will be on the website for Makarovia and hopefully will be available in the library so that the people of Makarovia who want to know about the history of Makarovia they'll have access to the recordings as well. I'm glad that Eric and Peter are able to help each other stay calm by being there for each other as well as making love to each other. Great chapter and story.

JJ is a child in so many ways, he needs to get his head screwed on straight and not be so bitchy about things. I hope that Carullo has a great time camping over the weekend. I hope that they can enjoy the dedication of the bell without having to relive the horror of that day that turned their lives upside down. Great chapter as usual.

I'm very happy to see that Olek is going with Helga and it's getting close to another engagement ceremony in Makarovia. I'm glad that Olek and Helga have given Eric permission to tell Drew about their being a couple and to give him a picture of the couple as well. I'm glad that Bren has made a decision to continue to do the recordings of the time they spent in the camp. I hope that with the help of Dr Lowenstein and Milo that he can put those memories in the past where they should be. I can't wait for Eric to experience his first Christmas in the cold winter of Makarovia with Peter and the rest of the family other than Katrina Sams. In their conversation with Olek he said the temperature was right around zero degrees Fahrenheit.

I'm glad that Dr Lowenstein was there for Milo and Bren, after hearing about her experience in the camp and what she had to endure from people who just didn't care that they were able to get away with what they were doing. After hearing from her about her experience it makes more sense as to why she's the one working with those who escaped to Makarovia to make new lives for themselves. I'm glad that Katrina told Boris and Yuri that they were going to join them for Thanksgiving dinner, Boris didn't understand why she asked them to join her, Eric and Peter as they were not family. She told them both that they were family and that was because of the way that they go out of their way to do things for Eric and Peter. She also said that thanksgiving might be an American tradition but even though she was born in Ukraine after she married Eric's grandfather she found out about the holiday and adapted to it. I'm interested to see how it turns out giving turkey to the American guards and then Boris will make his version of the meal for everyone else.

I like that Eric doesn't want someone serving him if he's able to get it himself. I hope that he'll get used to being served as it will happen more often now that he's a member of the royal family. I'm glad that he feels like Boris and Yuri are family and not just servants. I'm glad that Mr Wilson has passed the Yuri test right now but Eric and Peter know that Yuri's always watching. I like the idea that Eric came up with about the writing, art and sculptures made by Makarovians being brought out so that everyone in Makarovia can enjoy it. I feel like Eric and Peter listening to the recordings of Milo and Bren might affect them more than they realize.

Great chapter as usual. I like the idea that Eric came up with about trying to find all of the art and literature of Makarovia, I don't know if they'll find any going back to when the country was young. I think it's great that Eric and Peter show their love for each other as many times a day as they can. The Dr that was working with those who escaped to Makarovia was the daughter of Jewish parents, her father's father was Jewish where his mother wasn't. Rachel Lowenstein was able to get her and her parents out of Austria and escape to Makarovia. I really like the way that she was able to help so many people who came to Makarovia.

I agree that your style of writing just draws a person in and makes them feel like part of the story (I know it does with me). I look forward to the wedding and more from Milo and Bren, the things they had to endure from people who couldn't see that the love between two humans is just that. There's nothing perverse or wrong about it at all, there are others who think that if two men love each other they're violating the bible, there are people who think that if it's in the bible then they must obey it to the extent that they choose. I don't care for people like that and I've met some and the 1st time they tried cramming the bible down my throat I told them that everyone's entitled to their own opinions and that others shouldn't push their beliefs on others. I'm no longer friends with them because they couldn't accept that I wouldn't bend to their way of thinking. I'm looking forward to when Eric and Peter return to Makarovia for Christmas so Eric can get the feel of winter there.

In a way I understand where Katrina is saying about wanting to retire somewhere warm, and that she was going to be at Eric's wedding to Peter and that after that she could die. She also told Eric that she wants to be buried next to his grandfather, Peter told her that he and Eric had discussed what they wanted to be done when they die, and they decided to be cremated and Eric told her that Peter has the idea that they be put in the same urn and mixed up as it would be the ultimate sexual experience ever. I'm glad that they were able to hear some of the words spoken by Milo and Bren in what Eric decides is therapy sessions as a way for them to heal from their ordeals in the camp and before.

I agree that turning over Ms Baldwin and Nelson Carter to the British government was a great idea. My question about that is who's going to make sure that they're both in prison and standing trial. I'm glad that everyone is safe and that Eric and Peter saw that Olek was gone and saw the light was on to the lower level was on, they went down and found Olek finish stripping and then jump in the pool. Olek asked them to join him, Yuri was with Eric and Peter when they went to find Olek, he was told to join them Yuri said that he was still needed to answer some more questions about the incident with the armed men breaking in and start shooting at everyone in the house. I'm glad that when Drew called Eric his first question was as a friend asking if they were alright and Eric said everyone was fine, then Drew asked about what happened and even gave Eric some information they didn't have about the consortium saying it was actually called kurtzrtm, no one knew what it stands for.