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I now see why these two fit so well together, they're both VHS's in their own right. Beau is just putty in Seb's hands because if I remember rightly Beau just seems to melt every time Seb is around, that is except one part of his body that is and it seems like it's at constant attention. I really like the way you make them become a couple without it seeming like it was intentional. The way that they can joke with each other is another way that these two guys click together. I'll bet that by the time I get to the end of this story they'll be so much more in love with each other. Can't wait to read more about the relationship that's just starting to come to proissan. I just got the notice that you've got chapter 34 of Williams Love is ready so I'm going to go read it then come back to this one. Thanks again for the great stories.

I like that you chose to do this with these two characters because you don't really hear much about them in Williams Love. I can't wait to read more about these two guys and hopefully find out what drew them together and also how Beau actually communicates with Seb. Thank you for writing this separate story along with Williams Love.

I can honestly say that with what I'm reading about Aiden and Ethan they definitely have a great love for each other. Like Mary said at first Ethan didn't know what to expect from coming to live with a pack of wolves among other shifters as well, he put on a brave face while he was getting used to living with a family that accepted him as if he had been born into the family. Now they have each other as well as a growing family that is accepting him as well, while they are gaining more friends from around the world. I'm glad that Aiden found Ethan and in the process figured out that Ethan was his true mate, and it shows everyday the more that they're together the more their love for each other grows.

I believe that the group of Alpha's have the right idea as well as the bears in that ambassador to the council be a good starting point in the endeavor to make the council more inclusive with other shifters in North America. I truly believe that Aiden and Ethan can stand alone as Alpha's in their own right if they wanted to, but I truly believe that what they want at this point is to get to know the new friends they have met at the conference. I know from reading this whole story before that they get more time getting to know about the new friends they made by talking to them each and every one of them and they listen to what is being said as far as the way their friends handle the duties of an Alpha since they are same sex couples as well. I'm really enjoying the story more now that I've gone back to read most of the story again, thank you for writing this story.

I think that Will is seriously in need of a vacation away from home for a few days while things settle down and people apologize for the words that they used to hurt the main person who was going to help kids from the shelter by providing a job for them and teaching them a skill as well as showing them that there's more people that they can trust. Now with what Derrick said to will I doubt that he'll help any of the kids from the shelter at all now. Then on top of Liam being gone of all times for CC to get bit by a snake, Will takes her the Vet and runs into Stephen who participated in the beating that Liam got. I hope things start going better for Will than they have so far. This was a great chapter it had me on the edge of my seat trying to finish it before I got up. Keep em coming like this and I'll keep reading.

I am rereading this story from chapter 35 and I can honestly say that this may be the most thought out story line of all of the stories I have read. The main characters of Aiden and Ethan have grown up so much throughout this story and now they're given the titles of Alpha designate. With the fact that they are true mates, they have discovered that they each have certain characteristics that they never had previously, while Ethan can control water and Aiden can control fire they are a force to be reckoned with. That doesn't mean that their security are any less of a Lycan than either of those they have been charged with protecting. In there own right Darius, Cody and Casey are no less capable of doing harm to anyone who wants to get up and want to cause trouble. I like that the new members of the pack have a great place to live until such time as they choose to return to their own packs if they still exist. Even at that if they want to they can potion to become true members of the pack as Darius and Casey have just done after they were both mated to Cody. I'm looking forward to finishing the story again and I might even pick up on a few things that I missed before.

I have to agree with several of the other reviews that were made about this chapter. If Will & Liam were real people and had ideas like they have for shelters as well as a foundation for LGBT kids as a way to show them the love of others no matter what their preference is. I only have to say that this was a great chapter as you brought two young men together with someone who may be able to help them get their foundation under way. I loved the photos of Will and the loving titles of them, it just goes to show you how much their love means to each other. Liam is a very talented photographer and I could see him making a hell of a good living from it. I'm happy that part of their family was able to attend the gallery opening together. I'm glad that everyone was holding him up by telling him that his dad would have been very proud of him if he were still alive, I think having his father's in law and his mom with him along with Will & Lee there helped him because the opening was on his own dad's birthday. I'm sure enjoying the story as it shows what some of the teens that are abandoned only because their families can't or won't support them because they are LGBT. If only there were more supporting families for these kids who are forced to live in the streets and turn tricks in order to survive.

I have really enjoyed reading this story because it portrays the best of all of the characters. Will & Liam have both got a lot to be thankful for and they both have their demons. I'm inclined to believe that there are several photos of Will in various states of undressed. I like that they both have parent that love them as well as friends who'll always be grateful to as they've been blessed to call them friends. Will's mom needs to be locked away for a very long time so she has no access to anything that would allow her to communicate with the outside world. This way there would be no way for her to hire someone who will hurt either Will or Liam trying to get Will into one of those camps that are designed to scare you from being gay to being straight even though it would cause irreparable damage to their psychie. They both have to let go of the pastin order to be able to move forward in their lives. I hope that Liam's gallery opening goes well for him, he deserves it very much do to the amount of time he puts into it. It was a very nice surprise to see Will's dad and his husband as well as Lee who came to be with Liam and his mom because of his dad's birthday. They stayed for the gallery opening to show their support for Liam's hobby.

If JJ's having problems with being selected to be a squad leader at his age can you imagine what it'll be like when he becomes an adult and using pot as a relaxant I can only imagine what he's going to be doing as an adult. I understand that he's going through a lot of mental anguish because of his brothers suicide but he did the wrong thing when he found the baggie with the pot in it. I'm sure that he'll be alright with time after what punishment he gets from James and Matt.

I came back to reread the story from the beginning. I can really say that I'm very glad that David and Phil weren't injured more than they were, I'm glad they're both out of the hospital now and the healing process can continue. As long as Phil does what he needs to he'll be out of the wheelchair very soon. If I had been Phil's dad I don't know if I could have stopped myself from killing the sob that did what was done to the boys. I'm glad that they're getting right back involved in the unit because being surrounded by the squadies I believe that will also helpwith the mental health of Phil and David. Matt and James are doing a great job of leading the unit in a way that the squadies look up to them as role models and as such the squadies strive to be the best they can be.

I believe Wayne is going to love being around his daughter, son in law and grandchildren, for only meeting them for the 2nd time it appears to be going very well. Sean is loving the idea of being the architect for the expansion and upgrades for Thornwood Manor, not only are they wanting a bigger space for the medical and the housing for the vampires preserum and those on the serum as well as rooms for those who are transitioning from blood to being able to eat and go out in the sun again. I like the ideas that Colin and Devon have to update Thornwood from what it is now to being a resort as well as a wedding venue. I hope that Wayne continues to grow closer to the family he thought was gone.

Another great chapter. I'm very happy to see that Wayne has been to see his daughter and they had a very nice visit after she was brought around after the fainting spell she had when she first saw her father. I like the fact that the grandchildren were very interested in hearing about their grandfather. I'm glad that Katie and Sean are coming to Thornwood estate to spend the weekend with Wayne in order to learn more about what happened to him and learn about the process of changing a vampire back from wild to a regular person again. Sean is also coming as an architect to develop plans for a bigger lab as well as expanding the house due to the fact that they'll need to have a place for the vampires that work there have a room to stay in. I'm glad that even though Wayne just started to get to know his lost family, he wants to work for Colin and Devon.

I'll say it again Unit 1 is going to be the ones that Trenton international uses to get back at the Cubans who attacked a bunch of children and adults who more than likely couldn't have been able to stop them from whatever they were going to do. Jap knows what it's like to take a life when he shot and killed 3 Mexicans who were there under orders to kill everyone in the cabin and then start a fire to get rid of the evidence of a drug lab in the basement. I have no doubt that they'll get the job done withouta single person killed from their Unit.

I feel for the people who caused the deaths of 74-75 men, women and children, once unit 1 gets ahold of them. I don't think the people who caused this is going to stand a chance against unit 1. I truly believe that from everything I've read in KK these young men are the best chance the Trenton group has for putting an end to the murdering cowards who have to take out a bunch of children for no other reason than they were after something on the island. I can't wait to read whether or not they are hired to do the job.

This boy is going to get caught if he's not careful, he's going to be called on in a class and won't be paying attention. He's spending so much time daydreaming of what he and Chris could be doing and if he's not careful he's going to have to do something in class and he'll walk up to the front of the class and everyone is going to see that he has a hard on. While he's up there and everyone is going to start saying things under their breath about his stiff bulge in his pants.

Nothing like learning that you still have family that are still alive, you have the daughter you never got to see, as well as a son in law and grandchildren. I feel bad for Wayne finding out that his wife Rosalind had died a few years ago from cancer. He thought long and hard to finally get to the point where he wanted to meet the family he didn't know he had. When they find the creature that bit Wayne they're going to have to be extra cautious and take precautionary steps to ensure the safety of everyone in the hunting party. I'm hoping that when they see this creature that they just kill it and then take the body in order to do the testing. I'm happy that Willie finally asked Betty to marry him and they want to be married at the estate they're staying at. Gabby has stated that she wants to be married at home in Wentworth Manor. I'm happy to see the serum is working so well on Wayne.

I tend to agree with wesley8890, as I feel a connection to Wayne as well. I'm glad that Devon was able to get Stan to try to find out about Wayne's family. I think with the information that Devon received from Stan that it'll be a lot better for Wayne to continue with the serum, it gives him something to live for. I hope that they can get the assistance that they want from the British government.

I've been reading the story from the beginning and I am very impressed by what I've read about Unit 1 and how it came to be. I'm very happy that with the proper guidance these young men and the adult leaders have accomplished a lot. More importantly is the love and admiration the boys have for the Bateman brothers and the Marines that are assigned to the unit. I think that they've done an exceptional job working with the Marines recon forces in the training that the unit has been doing. I'm impressed that James has decided to work to get back to being an intrigal part of the unit again, especially since the accident he's had someone from the unit with him at all times. I hope that the rest of the story is just as good as the part I've read so far.

I believe that you are one of the best writers that I know. This was a great chapter of the wedding between Liam and Will. I hope that their bond grows stronger each and every day. I'm very happy that their wedding included a few remarks from Liam's father (especially since he wasn't there to see for himself his son marry the love of his life.) I also wanted to let you know that I believe that you are doing such a great job of writing this story. Benny & Haley did such a great job of doing the jobs they were asked to do. I believe Benny was having trouble unting the ribbon on the pillow that held the rinse for Will & Liam. I'm sure that everyone is enjoying the wedding and the reception for Liam & Will. I feel bad that Liam's dad couldn't be at the wedding since he died the last year in a traffic accident. I certainly believe that the dad's & mom and very proud of their sons by making their relationship stronger by getting married. Katherine and Liam's mom did such a great job of setting everything up for the service and the reception. Will said that he approved of the way that everything was set up for the wedding and the reception. I'm very very happy for the guys to finally get to tie the knot.

This chapter was wonderful, I am glad that they finally know that Jerry is actually Wayne and he understands that he can be helped to be more than just a vampire going day to day looking for their next feeding. I'm glad that Colin is now more involved with the care of Wayne, after the jealousy reared it's ugly head. The way that Devon is able to work with the vampires on a somewhat personal level is nothing more than one person caring for another person. It may have taken a while longer to get through to Wayne that he was in no danger and that he was just a victim of circumstances that made him have a great hunger for blood. I'm glad that Wayne is now able to partially speak and has made the decision to go through the pain of starting the serum. I can't wait to read whether or not MI5 is going to be a help in the vampire issues in Great Britain.

I like the name Lilly I agree she might be a great asset to the team once she gets the serum. I hope that Paul doesn't figure out where she went and start causing problems. MI5 British intelligence might be a good asset for the team in Great Britain like the FBI has been in the USA. I hope that the Dr MI5 brings in will be a help to George so he's able to make more time for his mate. I'm looking forward to when Jerry is able to get the serum as it'll free Devon up from being on duty caring for him to make sure he's not alone and that he can be trusted to be friends with the team. I'm also looking forward to the wedding of Willie and Betty, I have a feeling it's going to be a very elegant service and that Betty will be turned by Willie as a gesture of his love for her. I can really say that the story gets better with each new chapter.

I'm so glad that Finn will be alright for the most part, physically he'll be OK it's emotional support that he's going to be needing. Alistair and his family are going to be busy making sure that the elder who had Finn kidnapped and then went as far as fucking him raw all the while trying to break him in half pays for what he did to Finn. I'll go as far as saying that he better hope he's not found by the family. I'm glad Finn was able to get out with the help of Jack and the chef that was working for the elder, but is hoping to get away from there quickly. Finn will enjoy seeing his dad a while after they get him cleaned up and sober.

What an exciting time for the family, Lee now has 2 dad's that love him unconditionally, Will also has 2 dad's one biological and the other adoptive but still it's a reason to be happy. Not only did Will get his wish to be adopted by paddi but also that his mother is facing a long federal prison sentence for all the crap she's pulled trying to get Will to break up with Liam and say he's straight. I can't wait for the wedding to take place, it's going to be a grand celebration because of the recent events regarding Will's mom. I hope that whatever business dealings of Will's grandfather had Will's name on them are good news for the happy couple.

Finn is strong and he must endure the pain as much as possible, he's also resilient to try to get through this is not what's on his mind. Finn is worried about Alistair and that he feels like he let him down by being kidnapped and then subjected to the humility of being fucked when he didn't want to be. I can only hope that Finn can hold out for the rescue to happen and the reunion with his dad.

It's going to take a lot to keep Alistair from finding Finn, and I feel sorry for the two that kidnapped him. I'm sure that Finn's dad finds out his son was kidnapped he's going to be madder than he's ever been. I'm wondering if the folks that took Finn are actually looking for one of Alistair's family. I can't wait to see what happens next.