Emi GS

Short. Sweet. And very interesting start. Spoilers from the same kind!!!? Moving to next chapter... ~Emi.

I am glad I waited this long to read, so that I now can read the stories without confusion. I have always liked Vampire stories and now with four communities together, this was going round be a wonderful journey. Like everybody else, I am glad you posted explaining everything. Thanks for that. Now I am heading for the main stor(y)ies... ~Emi.

I have so many things on my reading list from Caz. So, and I hope, I'll use this month to read those. And I am eagerly waiting for a story to read and thanks to Cia I now know what to read other than poetry...

Realm of a Spirit I left parts of myself everywhere The way absent-minded people leave Gloves and umbrellas. Hands and legs for forebearers The way they get support to stand from Walking sticks and stands. Shoulders for kinfolks, for mates To hold on to and, sometimes, to let go; as For coffers and kleenex. Brain for the psychos To invade and molest; as For blinds and ties and cursed objects. Heart for the butcher Who have the taste for slaught

I liked the line 'The sin eaters dance' very much. I can't see the image you have commented in chapter ending, but the description was clear. Though I'd like to look at the picture. That was very descriptive poem.

A Life Fulfilled!!! Darkness creeps into those dispirited eyes As life playbacks a talkie on minds display A extreme flick of total seven minites With largely emanating questions of life A better son!? a brother! and a husband!? Do I played the rightful part of a father!? Have I looked at the delightful eyes of grands!? A fine person to be around and a friend!? Who am I!? What I did!? Wasn't enough!? Is there more? More to remind! Or more to do!? What else there

Believing is Everything I believe; life must move forward. Deeds comes in aids for needs. I believe; destiny awaits. Light comes after darkness. I believe; true love still exist. There comes shoulder for tears. I believe; a human with hopes. Cure comes for injuries.

Sinister of Memory Sliips Forgetting about friends Drawing a blank on names and faces Might be the reason I never had friends Forgetting about importance Twiddling thumbs on many occasions Might be the cause I never got gifts Forgetting about worthiness Being obscure on the premises Might be the issue I never get help Forgetting about ingenuity Selling out yourself uncordial Might be the case I never get set Oblivion Forgetting has bro

Congrats Adi

Still Figuring Out A see through mirror Where I stand against As the world Looks familier yet distant in nature Seems close yet far from concern Felt normal yet strange for truth And again a question strike; What is normal? Is it where I stand! Or What I see! But What I feel! Still figuring out. Here I wanted to include so many names, but felt like I might ruin the fineness of the poem as I have to look for so many words. So don't think I am not

Manners has been great effort of the Day. I don't want to forget my manners and wrote the poem for the prompts. Four D's has been actually emerged from the silly jokes and lots of laughing between my sister and me. Hope you'll enjoy reading them both. Manners Manners Can be taught easily Can be learn with great interest And can be perform when acute Manners Divoted by some Awaited by many And beheld by all Manners Source of wisdom Cluster of colours And ref

Sorry. I don't have any guesses. You guys have more knowledge in poetry than me. You are even experienced in reading books. Big. Real. Books. I don't have that knowledge unless I check in Google. Thanks for that or otherwise I'd be illiterate among literates. And, yes according to Google, your poem looks or written holding the theme of Greek myths or something like that. And I am really confused about the England poet's part in it. I'd like to learn though. ~Emi.

I would agree with Ben. Your poem really felt like it was written for this video. Reading your poem by merging that tunes has given a feeling you just can't explain. Just divine. Well done.

I agree with Mr. M. Ariel is such a sweet Cutie pie. You have shown his brighter side so clearly in this chapter and we'll as how corny he can be sometimes. I loved his innocence, honesty and dang his dirty mind too. I don't know about teenage love so, I am enjoying it in Ariel... Thanks for the wonderful chapter Comsie... ~Emi.

Good things come and go So does the bad things Your strength that all needs So does the hopes you hold Love the very best of best Don't let go the worst either Your smile all I need To sooth the tears those fall Love you Aunt Ratz And Many More Happy Returns of the Day

Sorry Val, today I couldn't make it for your prompt. My moods were low and I was sad that I was the most unluckiest guy in the world. I can't do such an emotional thing. So I let of the idea of 'Ghost Letter'. But I did write something from that miserable situation and of off mood. Really sorry Val. Fate's Plate Of fate Never be changed Espouse you cautiously No way, it spare; not even sec' Hex you For life Betrays every free will, there was, Crush every hope, tha

I sometimes got so angry with the naughtiness of my niece and nephews. Today one got a slap for showing his attitude and not listening to me. But, You know how we love them. As he started to cry, I cried as well. This explaining him in a smooth way. He just don't listen much and you they can't stop being them. More naughtiness and those heart soothing smiles. My Apologies An apology For slapping you For not looking at me while I talk An apology For angry words For

How about Clark...!?

My baby doll, my brother's daughter, has grown into a fine girl. Yesterday at the engagement ceremony, she suddenly looked mature than her age. Gosh! She is growing fast... My pretty little angel About eight years ago I hold her precious As her look fall on me She never leaves my hand And never sleep Until I hold her in my arms 'Now' was a different story She looks like an angel But in a mature way She still hold my hands But in a royal grasp She still

A new journey begins from there too. Just like a river floated towards rocks and they change directions...

I'll do as I did with the others, reviewing/commenting on each poem individually. If you was eager, I have already told my opinions about the first poem. You will find it here. I can't stop my tears as I was reading it. Echo has been my favorite of all when it was born. Thanks for the tribute. I'll try to something for her too. It was presented as crazy as the other poems. And I enjoyed thoroughly. Your story covered so many people and things they do. Fantastic actually. I enjoyed reading it. My favourite prompt of all. And your poem is lovelier. I can feel the intensity of one heart to hold his/her's soul mate. I loved that particular aspect. Such a lovely poem. But as per the prompt it missed second I sentence in the last line. But it can be ignorance as you wrote your poem so adorable. I don't know with what expecting you had written this poem or on what theme. I can see the clear cut info of how made made developments throughout his life span. He is still not satisfied and still trying to take the movement to beyond measures and imagination. Very thoughtful poem. And presented beautiful taking 'Human' into consideration. I liked all the poems very much Adi. They are beautiful, fantastic and thoughtful poems. And I still can't stop tears for Echo. Well done buddy. ~Emi.

Two poems for the day. I had a dream about my Mr. Perfect. And the enthusiasm made me write one poem. I still have to master it. And the second one have the silly questions asked by my nephew. I still have more to remember, but because of writing at the last minutes, I can't remember many. But I'll soon update it. Hope you'll enjoy reading them... A Dream for Life With the dream of Mr. Perfect A refreshing feeling emerged. Not just for the part, Or the whole day. It e

I can understand the confusions of Justin. It fine after all turning into Vampire, he thought. But this mimic thing, chances of loosing Taryn, and life threats and all has been so much on him. Expectations, judgements and worships has been new tasks which he was unable to understand. So much confusion. Why? What? And How? These have forming him to get to a new level, which still he hasn't understanding. Up until now he was used to be out of control, which making him more vulnerable on controlling his powers and all. It's becoming tough to him. Nice lead up until now. I know you don't love to here it, but always waiting for more. ~Emi.

A lot to Regret Regrets A lot to count In my life, as I look But repenting on it makes me Tranquil!? Display of ego Aggressive towards parents First regret of all Meeting him that night Plating a heart for slaughter Exploring bareness Letting him exploit a soul Second and more hurtful one Being lazy Acting cozy Benefitting others Leaving ours Expecting everytime Disappointing all time Regrets we count But so much to mount We complain life i

Thanks Lisa. I am glad you could see them smile and all. It's a really a pretty picture seeing them both smiling. I am happy for them. And thanks for the wishes, as well as for reading and reviewing. ~Emi.