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:wizard: Many More Happy Returns of the Day Blue Little Princess... :wizard: I Wish All The Happiness In Your Life... :wizard: Enjoy The Day... :wizard:
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Okay. I am a blushing mess while I was typing this comment. Ooohhh!!! Comsie. Your version of Tris is so cute. While I was seeing the video, all I was seeing is his long fingers. Uff!!! I said it. Yeah, all I was seeing his long fingers doing all sorts of things. OMG!!! That sounded corny. Don't take it like that. What I am trying to say is, I have a thing for long fingers and I liked that boys fingers... And never mind my rambling nothing but cosy...
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That was an excellent chapter, I can say with minimal information... Sorry for that, but its what it is. Isn't it??? Just Kidding. The thought of a path on ocean just felt like the Rama Sethu (Adam's Bridge) from 'Ramayana'. That was fabulous thought. And the darkest abyss sounded magical. You know, I was dying to read it. But you are slow. And don't mind my nonsense and just take the info as I was waiting to read, eagerly... ~Emi.
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How vehement his thoughts winning the realm, so, thus venomous the success became. Bitter—the taste of power and the helm, yet sweet; until thy honesty got maim. Mediocrities—get up to the bones, devastates entrustment without exempt. Anomie stands indelible—in zones, solemnly results in beneath contempt. Animus capitalized for sole greed, it will scar your demeanor—well indeed.
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Chapter 11: I'm Matt and Adam
Emi GS commented on Stannie's story chapter in Chapter 11: I'm Matt and Adam
Wow!!! Stannie. Way to go. New involvements and all. Nice story until so far. And waiting go more... ~Emi. -
Not a Prompt- In Just One Year
Emi GS commented on Drew Espinosa's story chapter in Not a Prompt- In Just One Year
I love when simple words would say best of them. Your poem Drew, simple and full of pride and happiness. It given how the Love get the top hand over resistance. I just Love it Drew. You have done great... And Happy Anniversary... ~Emi. -
Moon Light As the lights went off— dead black until brightness fills moon through the window More Ants Tiny yet strong, trail of ants running around, Weighing into food. Sunrise The darkness grows thin with birds chirping heavily as the sun hits ground.
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I've never thought that the man who acted so cruelly has his personal background like this. And I am not sympathizing and all. But Cynus, might be right about it. Giving the love to those who felt alone. Telling them they are not alone. Its not simple, but its what atleast we can do...
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Chapter 20 - Just A Few Minutes More
Emi GS commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Just A Few Minutes More
That was a fun filled chapter. I can see I embarrassed did Lori have been. Gosh that was real fun to read. Both their little chat in the car as well as the not so sexting between Jess and Tris. And I liked the concept of Scotty and Artie getting together. Lovely chapter... ~Emi. -
That was really beautiful. All those images and I loved the last stanza. Yes, I'll agree with Dugh. Some times no firm is necessary to write about what we feel and experience. And I glad and proud you are excelling in the world of poetry through your hard work and dedication. Love that poem Tim... ~Emi.
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I know the feeling of hurt by an unknown person from online. Even though we never met, never heard them talk and never know them at all. But sometimes take them to heart. I think, its the same thing with Yuri to Adam. And I was really confused about Adam right now too. Yeah, its right that he had problems can't share with anybody. Got hurt that he never wanted somebody to relate with. But I can see he cares. What my confusion about is, you can say, Sam. I totally agree with William here. And like him I am too waiting to know more. ~Emi.
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A different and some kind of odd chapter, I can say. I see the possibility of Todd and Sam. And I'd love meet Yuri, you talk about him so much... ~Emi.
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Rain Drops Slivers of white flash Grubby wind swirling dark clouds Fat rain drops streaming Fury, A friend Fury My brave stallion Free soul—King of Wild West. You're my knight and my dearest friend Love—Joey.
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:wizard: Happy Birth Day W_L :wizard:
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Chapter 57 - Tyler's Secrets
Emi GS commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 57 - Tyler's Secrets
That was a blast. Full of intense. Indeed it is a wonderful chapter. As you know, I am a big fan of yours and read all of your stories so far. I wish you publish so often than longer. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter... BTW, its 57th chapter not 58 as you titled on the list... ~Emi. -
:wizard: Happy Birth Day CraftingMom :wizard:
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Wow!!! That so thoughtful. And Brilliant. And Excellent. And Marvelous. And Fantastic. I can say more, but that will look like I'm just blathering. I really liked how you have given connections of every subjects so far. It made me think of one of the local hit song of 90's. So normally I'm humming and a little bit dancing. Nice poem. Drew gonna love it... ~Emi.
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Chapter 8: Why did he leave me?
Emi GS commented on Stannie's story chapter in Chapter 8: Why did he leave me?
That's a Nice chapter. I Liked it very much. I don't know when parents has issues and will get separate to have their own lives. And how that's gonna effect their children. But seeing Adam here, it looks like they are bound by the culture and though loved each other. Accept each other. And if possible maintain their relationships with each other's family. I know its been difficult for them, But I think Adam started to learn the truth. I don't think of anything where you are going. And Adam still have to deal with Sam. This chapter, I Loved it for the reason I don't know. Always waiting for more... -
:wizard: Many More Happy Returns of the Day Romaan... :wizard: Enjoy Your Day...
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This is not just 'turn of events'. This a a surprise or shock or a bomb itself. I was still confused to what to say. Is that kiss a friendly gesture or more??? Now some new tasks in hand Adam turned out different than different!!! And now the spot light on Seth is just about his life in regular, or as I expected him too fell in Love with Adam??? Even though I know that I don't have to wait for too long, I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter... ~Emi.
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Inspired by sight of Nature Rain and its Charms. Drop by drop they fell the soaked leaves shine flawlessly and a rainbow forms. Inspired by Urban sight Small Little Ants Tiny little souls, trail of ants around the house, lifting beyond weights.
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Hahaha... Like this I was smiling while I was reading. Gosh! That's so silly/stupid/hilarious thing to do to come out in school. Though, I liked it very much. Clint looks like a brave boy, who is being a boy of himself. I liked him a lot. And coming his Dad, I can see so many readers gonna simply love. A different start and definitely going to be one my favorite. The title 'Fearless', itself showing a great queue of obstacle you are gonna put into Clint's life and to show us how he is going to make it all the way and win over it. Definitely a nice start... ~Emi.
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I can see a beginning. A beginning of friendship. A beginning of trust. A beginning of relationship. Adam may like it or not, he is now giving importance to the relationships. Its really nice chapter. And nice turn of events. Awaiting for more... ~Emi.
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Chapter 5: I made a mistake
Emi GS commented on Stannie's story chapter in Chapter 5: I made a mistake
And you have got yourself not so anonymous reader. I have read all five chapters up until now and I started to like Adam. I liked how he managed to be a two different persons in two different worlds of his. And I can say he hide his posture by being self centered but he is not. A great story up until now. I am afraid Adam resembles to me a lot more. Nice story up far, and waiting for more... ~Emi. -
That was flawless, emotional and sad. I know sometimes it hurt more of a betrayal than of physical injury. Your carrying the emotional flow and thought it I can see someone's love, someone's selfishness and someone's endless guilty. Very emotionally presented poem. And I liked it... ~Emi.
