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Emi GS

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  1. This have been a hell of a three days of my life. And worst. I never felt like this, even when my Ex cheated on me. Any way thank you for the great review Parker... ~Emi.
  2. I hope for that too. And thank you for the great review man. I appreciate them... ~Emi.
  3. I never did or never would change myself for someone. And thank you for great review and support Ben... ~Emi.
  4. Thank You for that Tim. And about the challenge, you have done great on that... ~Emi.
  5. I wish and hope for the too Aunt Def. Thank You for the blessings... ~Emi.
  6. At that moment, it was unbearable. I cried all night. But I am fine right. And happy indeed... Thank You for the great review... ~Emi.
  7. I am Gary. And thank You for the Nice review... ~Emi.
  8. *Hugs you Back* Aunt Def... I have to. Next year, I don't know where I would be. So, I don't wanna miss this great opportunity. I'd written out of every situation for not to miss this. Thank you for the kind words... ~Emi.
  9. And direct from a broken heart. Thank You Ben, I am feeling a lot better now. ~Emi.
  10. I am an emotional man(wow! I wanted to say Boy ) Tim. And yes, you people have been great support every time I get low/sad. I'd be thankful for that. Thank You for the caring words. ~Emi.
  11. Your poem are directly vomited from the pure experience. That means you are a step ahead of them already. These poem touched my heart, so is your condition. Tim covered most of what I want to tell. So I would just say, Heal for the people who loved you and forget them who left you. Take care buddy. And Well Done... ~Emi.
  12. Emi GS

    Solitary Cat

    Until now, I am becoming to love cats for their cuteness and their little quirks. But now you have given an entire different meaning now. And now I might fear for their cruelty. I Liked the way you have pointed all the things in perspective of 'The Cat'. Nice work and well done... Whenever it comes to Money and Mercy, I'll be voting Money. Yeah I know, its ill to think like that. I've seen so much mercy given by me, its true, And now, because of the selfish people, I am siding money. Strange right. But I can say, I am still human and not cruel. The poem was very great and made me think. Nicely done...
  13. Congratulations Albert...
  14. That was beautifully written... A kiss can be a lot of things and can do a lot of things. I have never experienced any bitter kiss or any sweeter one. Now I know why. I think or may be strongly believe, it links with the person we are sharing... Nice song. But just we love you to compose and sing for us... ~Emi.
  15. I love Gary's stories and his gang(including me) from COTT Family. I will be definitely going to read this story soon. Congrats Gary...
  16. I'd just say: "It's relates to me a lot." Great work... ~Emi.
  17. :wizard: Happy Birth Day Cole :wizard: I wish you to have a Best Birthday ever...
  18. Wow!!! Such a great honor for a poet. See people, we poets(Yeah, I am a poet too... ) tend to a lot of hard work to create even a small poem. We do lot of work. Thanks to Gary, from me and all poets, for showing it very clearly and beautifully. It was a great work. Love, ~Emi.
  19. Thank You so much for including my story Renee. I am Happy to see last week's all prompts are shared here, especially Gary's Poem... Congratulation to all for the milestone we crossed. And Thank You once again Renee...
  20. I agree with Ben and Drew. It is so beautiful and wonderful poem...
  21. Unbelievably unimpeachable...
  22. I really don't know a pet and owner relationship, because I don't have any. But your Haiku showed me a lot how much it can build between a pet and its owner. And you have written it in a great way. Yeah it is full of sadness, but you have showed it beautifully. Here I agree with Lit about the part of 'Deaf Heart', it sound like a stony heart, in a way. And on the other side it even looks like a 'story heart can love' way. And the second poem, that was just wow. You have compared the freedom as a bird, teasing the little human life like 'what a structured life you build around yourself!'; which reflected as a cage. It has been greatly presented... ~Emi.
  23. This is rather beautiful and great tribute for me. I am quite surprised and wondered. I am very very thankful for the concern you people showing about me. Thank You for the hope and thank you for the poem Parker. I was so anxious to see the Cinquain, I read it before the other one. The 'Questions' too was wonderful poem. Like Ben said, it really looks like a poem of Love, rather than a Chronological Development. I had read those both poems twice to soothe my heart. And I am gonna read again. You made my day. Thank you again My Friend...
  24. It turned out to be the day I don't want to exist With the face he knew. Heartbroken still I'm all done With this. But It's Not cinch To let go The man I love With my breath and soul,
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    Wait and Blind

    They are so wonderful and powerful poems. I mean not the fate you fought so well, but how you showed it to each and every person in those small lines. You are wonderful poet and a good person Tim. My eyes all are wet while I was reading 'Wait'. No one knows the hurt you get while you are waiting, in my opinion at least. And talk about 'Blind', I always happen have that experience every time I get to see someone. They just blindside me. That's a lot of embarrassing and hurtful situation to go through. I know your life not went well with all those things. But the thing we have to consider from those is: you are alive and learnt to be strong. That what the important matter is. Great Poems Tim. They are really really wonderful... ~Emi.
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