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I guess we chalk up Shawn's actions to being drunk. It's a shame because Ryder is confused enough. And another about face with Callen. I guess it's because they are young and new at romance. Can't wait for more. Thanks. Jeff
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Chapter 40 The Art of the Deal
JeffreyL commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 40 The Art of the Deal
"What the hell" is right! I think you just cranked things up another notch! So many unanswered questions. I hope I can sit still until next week. A big thank you for this terrific story! Jeff -
The sex is hot, but their relationship is anything but fun, happy, loving. I know Marty is a horny teen, but it is a bit hard to imagine he is enjoying Hrishi's treatment. Maybe it's been too long since I was a teen. I do need to keep reading because I have no clue where you are going with this. Jeff
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I agree with Flamingo. I have also missed Joel and Lucas. What a hot story! It got my juices flowing. Thanks. Jeff
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A big reveal between the boys and a fun road trip. Just enough detail to make it interesting, but not too much to make it a travelogue. Another good chapter. Thanks. Jeff
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And the plot thickens. More fun! Is there some romance in their future? I repeat my previous comment. I'm loving this story! Thanks. Jeff
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Thanks Sasha. This made me chuckle. Jack and Harry might be fun to revisit in another story sometime. I liked them! Thanks again. Jeff
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And now we wait for the next chapter. I've been waiting for Jian's family to cause problems. Jian did help by not making some choices. Hopefully Emmett's help and/or support will help. More good stuff! Thanks. Jeff
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Another good chapter. Loved "meeting" Brad and Patrick's Mom and her boyfriend. I was glad Brad confronted his grandfather. I would have hoped he could be a little more restrained, but maybe over the top anger was needed to get his message across. Thanks and keep up the good writing. Jeff
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Poor Ben. He is really unhinged. I hope he can sort things. Thanks for a good chapter. Jeff
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Can there be much gay drama without a closet?
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The boys and parents are lucky to be part of such a caring and supportive family. I am excited to begin reading about the boys road trip. Thanks. Jeff
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Chapter 39 Healer Interrupted
JeffreyL commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 39 Healer Interrupted
I was thinking about all the positive changes in Warren, due in part to himself, but also he got a lot from Kellar and Adelin. Maybe Kellar and Tilly can have the same effect on Logan. More good stuff, and this whole color thing was a very clever invention! Thank you. Jeff -
I'm not so sure I like Hrishi's methods. I'm not sure I like Hrishi. I am not certain I like Marty either, but his confusion makes me feel sympathetic toward him. I can understand that closet dwelling is a deal breaker in gay relationships. But I wonder what will sustain them when the lust wears off? Do they have things in common besides enjoying how the other looks? After saying all that, I am anxious to read more and see how this develops. Thanks. Jeff
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So many questions and all I can do is wait patiently for the next chapter. I love this story! And Kian is an intriguing character. I'm guessing at his motivation. I hope when he figures it out you'll let us know. Thanks. Jeff
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Wow! Ryder had a quick change of heart. Didn't see that coming. Friends can be a good thing, but I bet Callen is pretty disappointed. Wonder what's next. Thanks. Jeff
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No real drama for a whole chapter. And a hot interlude for our guys. Besides dogs, and conversation, and place descriptions, you write a damn hot sex scene! More good stuff Sasha. Thanks. Jeff
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I had to go back and double check to see if this was a complete story. Since it is hooray HEA! Your characters seemed real, and your conversations too. A very enjoyable story. Thank you. Jeff
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Just binged chapters one through twelve. Can't believe this never caught my eye before. Eli is amazing! His Mom is pretty cool. What is up with his aunt and cousin? And what is Chase's problem. I kinda understand his Mom is probably not tolerant and Joey had him by the short hairs, but to stand by when someone you care about gets hurt so bad. I don't get it. I hope at some point you let us know what was Joey's problem. I can't wait to see what Eli does now that Chase has shown up again. Thanks for a great (and maybe a little frustrating) story. Jeff
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546 - Mistaken Identity
JeffreyL commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in 546 - Mistaken Identity
What a great moment! I remember being a student teacher at 22 and being in a high school with 18 year old seniors. I had more in common with the students than I did with the staff, so I can relate to how Greg is feeling. One small complaint: Craig and Greg are so similar. Couldn't you spare your reader and made the names not so close to the same? Is Craig a name found in English boys' schools? It seems more American. Enjoyed this a lot. Thanks. Jeff -
This is classic CJ. Glad he and his guys (posse?) are back at school. Teenagers and school equal lots of potential drama. I like the way the boys each have their own personality, but share a core of beliefs and values. I am surprised Martha hired Mr. Burke with the attitude he displayed on day one. Even with that old teacher rule "don't smile until November" he was way out of line. I was also surprised at Janelle's attitude. She interceded on behalf of another student with CJ last year, but I didn't remember her being so opinionated. Maybe co-chair has gone to her head. Can't wait to see where things go from here. Thanks for more CJ and company. Jeff
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I knew this was go7my to be a good story. I liked Kian right away in chapter 1. And I feel the same about Daven and his family. The family is going to complicate things. I hope Kian and David can keep them out of harm's way. Great closing line! It made me chuckle. Thanks. Jeff
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So maybe now Garrett will be less of a pain. Could Mom cause problems for Callen and Ryder? I guess I should just enjoy the calm for now. I liked the way Ryder and Callen talked openly and set some guidelines for starting their relationship. Thanks. Jeff
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