JeffreyL

I am curious to see how you resolve this major drama moment. Maybe we will finally see everyone's true colors. Thanks for more good story. Jeff

A most satisfying chapter. Hooray for Heidi! She is a nice addition to the mix. Thanks. Jeff

It was a great chapter! Eric being a comforting friend when Clay is ready, Heidi's conversation with Clay, and the make up sex. Can I call it that? I am still worried how Eric will take it when he finds out. He has been a true friend and may feel a little betrayed. Thanks. Jeff

OMG! I suppose I should have seen it coming. Poor Little Man. I doubt Eric can fix this. I wonder if Ogre can or will. Good chapter. Jeff

I like the way things are moving forward. I don't want to think that Ogre will hurt Little Man, so I will take the time on trust and read on. Thanks. Jeff

You have such a great ear for conversation, and the ones you write always flow so naturally. Not a high drama chapter, but just a slice of daily life (in spite of the fancy party setting) that makes me so fond of these characters. I also want to say how much it tickles me when Tyson Hill is mentioned. I read Love on the Rocks before Tyson showed up in CJ's life, and I also recommend it to people who haven't read it. Thank you, Carlos. I guess it's time for patience and rereading. Maybe I'll work on a travel guide "Walking in CJ's Footsteps." Jeff

OK, it's a toss-up. Happy to read more; mad as a wet hen to finally have the brothers show up as the chapter ends. And now more waiting. I thought I told you in my last comment, I'm old and getting older... On a more serious note, more good writing. I am glad Cory is mending a bit. I am hopeful the brothers will put everything else right. Thanks Dayne! Can't wait for more. Jeff

Well finding more about Ogre and Little Man was easy. Good thing chapter two wasn't a hole because I'd have tripped when I stepped in it. It always seems so appealing when you have a big guy who turns out to be gentle and romantic. Guess my biases are showing. Love these guys and can't wait to read the rest of the story. Thanks. Jeff

I was just browsing and found this story. A short way in I realized I had read it before. I don't know why I didn't comment last time, but I really enjoyed this story and these characters. I will look for another story about Little Man and Ogre. If there isn't maybe it's time to revisit these guys and write some more. Thanks. Jeff

Bad grandparents. Good boss. Poor Alan and Peter. If only it were that black and white. I'm glad you had Alan's boss give him some insight into how the grandparents are feeling. It was also nice to see how supportive Bob and Merrie are being. I cannot imagine how frustrating it must be to be thrust into parenthood "in the middle" instead of starting at the beginning. I hope you will have Peter be honest with Alan about he's feeling. Maybe in smaller doses instead of all at once, but keeping his feelings to himself will not be good for Peter or their relation. Can't wait for more! Thanks. Jeff

I noticed your latest post and decided to try it. I quickly realized I had already read about these characters. So I went back to chapter one and binged/reread the story to date. Enjoyed getting to know Jackson and friends. Can't wait to see how or if his relation with Luke progresses. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for your good writing. Jeff

I wish knew what to make of Ryder's dad. One minute he is so caring, and then he puts on his coaching hat. The football coach part draws to some of my biases. And I can't relate to being so focused on one thing in your life. Ryder is very intriguing as a character. Your slow peeling away of layers keeps me interested and frustrated. I am really hooked. Looking forward to finding out how the first day of school goes. Thanks. Jeff

It seems like a quick turnaround in Tracy's attitude toward Alex, but I guess you should never underestimate the power in a strong pair of arms.

I am surprised Callen doesn't see how Sasha treats Tracy. He seems pretty tuned in to his brother. Well, I'm sure she will cause some drama down the line. Still liking these guys Jeff

Glad to know a bit more about Ryder. I'm curious to see how school will be for him. Thanks for more good story. Jeff

I want to add a thank you to your list at the end of this chapter. Thank you Tim for this story. Another good chapter. I hope Dave finds Jae without too much trouble and can get him to talk.

I think I'd like to rent the house, come to Florida for a visit, and take Chad out for a drink to ogle his body. Immediate problems solved for our narrator, and this adventure is off to a good start. Jeff

Carlos, you seem to be having fun with this. And you have a great sense of humor that's less obvious in your CJ stories. It was fun to think back to my milestone birthdays. None were as exciting as these. Looking forward to more. Jeff

I reread chapters one through ten today. One of the joys of retirement: my time is mostly my own. I wanted to mention a few things I "overlooked" during the first read. Major points to you for chapter four where Emm and Huan-Yu go bear together. More points for chapter seven when Juan tells Emmett about the Chinese names and names Emm Xue. Finally, chapter 10 and the ceiling constellations and the early morning Northern Lights viewing (something that's on my bucket list). Your stories are almost overflowing with so much great stuff! And I recommend rereading to everyone. The element of surprise is gone, but I find so much I slid over the first time. And chapter eleven has the usual good characters, great conversations (even in bear), and amazing descriptions! I have given up grinding my teeth at Emmett. You will clearly move things forward at your own glacial pace, and I'd like to keep my teeth a bit longer. Sorry I'm so long winded. Thank you for a most pleasant day. Jeff

A most satisfactory tale, and an HEA to boot! I liked watching Corey and Jason reconnect and grow into their relationship. Sometimes Corey seemed to get a little over emotional, but don't we all know someone just like that. Wouldn't mind reading more about any of the characters. You've got lots of possibilities for more stories if you run out of other ideas. Thanks for a good story. Jeff

More good writing, and I like Dylan. Hearing about the abuse is hard, but I'll bet Shawn is a great big brother. Can't wait for more. Jeff

All the guys are back together. It makes you feel kinda warm and fuzzy. Looks like Owen will fit right in. And Carlos, you should get a pay raise and a big hug for inventing Harley. I love them all but he is special! Thanks for more fun. Jeff

This is a good beginning. I like Chase and I'm curious to see what he will do with his straught-gay-bi dilemma. I also like Terry, and I think the boys could have a good friendship, maybe followed by romance. I'm looking forward to reading more. Jeff

Another vote for expanding this story. The set up is interesting, and the two boys are appealing characters. It works as a short story, but there is a lot more I'd like to know. Good start...

What a good story. I enjoyed the back and forth between the past and the present through the letters. At some point I guessed the ending, sort of. The conversation between father and son was very moving to me. It's always nice when the reveal of a gay relationship is met with love and understanding, as it should be within a family, and not animosity. Thanks for a most enjoyable story. Jeff